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Page Name Notes
3 Stage Mass Combat (5e Variant Rule) This is incredibly cluttered with a huge number of grammatical and spelling errors that culminate in this being completely indecipherable.
Aaeaea (5e Creature) Game mechanics and general features need to be written using normal terminology.
Ali'di Crystal Mage (5e Class) some orthography errors, mistakes in capitalization and not using of standard writing (like instances of "per long rest" or "level 2" instead of "2nd level"
Angelic Light Glaive (5e Equipment) Terminology uses single terms, without the adequate information.
Anomaly (5e Class) Many features are not worded properly, almost backwards, uses "per rest", "ninth level", improper capitalization, etc.
Antimagic (5e Variant Rule) This could use some cleanup to make it easier to read and understand exactly what this rule does.
Arcana Wild Summoner (5e Class) This page becomes rapidly less clear as it goes on.
Arcane Lobber (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Argus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Arkin (5e Race) there are grammatical errors and wording issues on this page that needs to be addressed before this can be considered a completed work.
Artificer, 3rd Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 4th Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 5th Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 7th Variant (5e Class) Cunning Inventors and Intense Rivalries sections are word for word copies from the same sections on the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artoni (5e Race) Many of the features are loose, use imprecise language, or are mechanically unsound.
Augumented, Variant (5e Subclass) Grammar, capitalization, needs more full sentences.
Beast Dominator (5e Class) The text needs to be translated to English (or moved to a userpage).
Beast Within (5e Class) Does not use standard wording as per PHB.
Become Fear (5e Spell) The wording does not match 5e standards.
Bedwarfer (5e Race) Lackluster fluff, multiple grammar problems throughout, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors
Belial (5e Deity) Mixes fae, and fey. Remove parenthesis and integrate them into sentences naturally, or discard them. Strange capitalization. Several bits seems to contradict each other by using the word 'actually'. Much of the language is too casual. Needs a run through.
Bell-Walker (5e Class) Errors of capitalization throughout the text. The wording of the features doesn't follow the standard of the official classes.
Berryling (5e Race) Numerous instances of misspelling and incorrect wording according to 5e standard ("up to times equal", "must do a X save", eg.). Refer to comparable wording on Featured Articles for help.
Beskar'gam (5e Equipment) As a whole, most of the armor's properties need wording tweaks or need to be rewritten to follow 5e wording. Some of this armor's wording issues include: this armor having a number of capitalization issues, missing punctation, and some properties also missing clarification for how exactly they work like the Vambrace weapons (range, what type of attack, etc.).
Betraying Blessing (5e Disease) This page fails to utilize proper 5e terminology. The word ability should never be used except to refer explicitly to one of the 6 abilities in DnD.
Big Dipper (5e Class) see the talk page
Black Metal (5e Class) This needs to be written in English and not any other language.
Block Alien (5e Race) Animal imitation needs to be made into full sentences.
Book Dragon (5e Race) Many traits are not worded correctly.
Brachiosaurus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Brown Bess (5e Equipment) Spelling errors throughout the page
Brødrene Dal's Backpack of infinite storage (5e Equipment) Not written according to the standards of explaining effects in 5e. Random capitalization and punctation.
Caribespeon (5e Race) "You have a flying speed of 6 double jumps" and other glaring errors.
Centiperson (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Chaos Bubble (5e Hazard) This hazard has a number of grammatical issues, ranging from incorrect capitalization to somewhat unclear wording.
Chaos Crystal (5e Trap) Effects are not presented in a clear and concise manner.
Chick Thrower (5e Class) Abound with mis-spelled words, incomprehensible sentences, features, and other such problems.
Circle of Death (5e Subclass) This reads about as smoothly as torn sandpaper.
Circle of Rot (5e Subclass) Lots of grammar and terminology problems.
Clan Eshin Acolyte (5e Class) Every feature on this page can't go a sentence without breaking from 5e terminology.
Clover Grimoire User (5e Class) Bad and unclear wording throughout. Spells description are especially undecipherable
College of Soulking (5e Subclass) Class features are mechanically very confusing.
Colossus (5e Race) Very weird mechanical wording. Definetly needs a once over or two.
Creature Features (5e Variant Rule) Incorrect capitalization, and wording throughout.
Credit Rating (5e Skill) Abundant spelling mistakes.
Creepy Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Crimson Templar (5e Class) Class features need to be written to match 5e standards.
Crocabearamoose (5e Race) Race names should not be capitalized unless derived from a franchise where it is intentional. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
CrossBreed (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English.
Cryogenist (5e Subclass) There are run-on and confusing statements that would benefit from a more mechanical rewording.
Crystallite (5e Race) traits that do something are missing how they do it, action, bonus actions, etc. SRDs missing
Cultivation Monk (5e Class) Full of grammatical errors
Cup (5e Race) See the 5e Race Design Guide.
Dalamar's Chasm Chains (5e Spell) Spell's effect requires clarification, ending condition is unclear.
Dancer, 4th Variant (5e Class) The description text of this class is a word for word copy from the Dancer, and should be changed to be a real "variant" of the original class.
Dealer, Variant (5e Class) Capitalization mistakes throughout.
Death Knight, 2nd Variant (5e Class) Unnecessary capitalizations are abundant here.
Demon Slime (5e Race) Racial traits need to be reworded to more closely resemble first-party 5e. For example, what the heck is "cold disadvantages" supposed to mean? Are you vulnerable to cold damage (as in, you take double damage)? The Great Sage ability also is totally nonsensical.
Demonkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Devil King (5e Class) Spelling, grammar, and sentence structure need much improvement.
Devourer (5e Race) From a glance, there's a few standardization issues with the traits, using per rest wording and such.
Dhampir (5e Subrace) "resistance to charm effects" means "advantage on saving throws against magic that tries to charm you", or "immunity to charmed condition"? Some weird capitalization.
Dice-kin (5e Race) Difficult to read.
Dire Damage (5e Variant Rule) Large number of grammar, spelling, and capitalization errors. Many things need to be rewritten for clarity. "same as" should typically be copied, and have the keywords specific to that part replaced. "will save" isn't a thing in 5e, if it's another variant please link to it. 'Note' is used very liberally throughout the page, and should be reexamined for impact. These notes can likely be restructured to flow naturally from one point to another. As this is a rule, mechanics should be firm and well defined, instead of wishy washy (Ex. "rolls likely being 19 or 21").
Dire Death (5e Variant Rule) Spelling, grammar, punctuation, and terminology issues throughout.
Displacer Kin (5e Race) Limited Displacement uses 'it' too frequently to properly explain the trait.
Doom Shaper (5e Class) This class has a number of wording issues, ranging from things like numerous instances of improper capitalization(class name, ect.), use of the "per short rest" wording, and a few other minor wording problems(missing spaces, ect.).
Doom Slayer, 2nd Variant (5e Class) Unconventional wording, see 5e Class Design Guide.
Draconic Angel, Variant (5e Race) This race features identical wording to Draconic Angel in numerous areas. Charm features round counting.
Draconic Angel (5e Race) Clumsy mechanics. See the 5e Race Design Guide.
Drakki (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize
Eclipsemancer (5e Class) Several words are spelled wrong in the first feature.
Ed Kid (5e Race) Requires a rewrite to use 5th edition terminology and many traits need to actually make sense.
Eldritch Gunslinger (5e Class) This class has a few grammatical errors found throughout. Things like class names not being capitalized, grit not being capitalized, and misspelled words all need to be fixed.
Elemental Dancer (5e Class) Much of this page suffers from lacking mechanical clarity.
Elemental Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Empath (5e Class) Needs to adhere with Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Empyrean Automata (5e Race) Expertise is rogue class skill in 5e. Several traits are worded very loosely.
Enfield (5e Race) Race names are not capitalized.
Evorian (5e Race) Traits needs to be worded with mechanical benefits. What does making out details on objects do?
Ex-machina (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Explosion of happiness (5e Spell) It is unclear from current description what this is supposed to do, exactly. "+3 happiness points"?
False Origin (5e Subclass) See talk page.
Felkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Ferengi (Star Trek Supplement) Wording needs corrected.
Flame Demon, Variant (5e Class) Features are incorrectly structured.
Flay (5e Spell) not written according to 5e wording, lacks a bit of clarity because of that
Forest Mutation (5e Race) many features are not written according to 5e standards. Random H&W table is incompatible with the description in Size. Right now the average rolled height will be around 8.125 feet tall, with a minimum of 2.58 feet, and maximum of 13.67 feet.
Forge Master (5e Class) Grammar
Form Thief (5e Subclass) Everything past the actual features here makes no sense.
Freelancer (5e Class) The inserted text should not start with an exclamation point. The class features need to state at which level they are gained in the text. It's xth level not level x.
Frost Lance (5e Equipment) spells need their own pages created, then linked in the description, capitalization errors
Furkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "you regain use of this trait after finishing a long rest." not "once per long rest", "swimming speed of X feet." not "swim speed".
Gambler (5e Subclass) Standard grammatical errors throughout.
Gargoyle (5e Race) Damage types shouldn't be capitalized. Several racial traits are worded incorrectly. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Gem Wielder (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording. There are an abundance of exception clauses.
God Slayer (5e Class) 5e does not have a 'competency bonus', is this meant to mean proficiency bonus?
Goliath Panda (5e Race) There are a few issues here mentioned in the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize such as race names being capitalized.
Grappler (5e Class) Does not follow conventional wording. See 5e Class Design Guide.
Grave Walker (5e Subclass) A myriad of other issues persist here besides just balance, as it often mentions several mechanics which aren't something in 5e normally, nor are they ever explained here.
Great Spirit (5e Race) Traits need more mechanical grounding and standardized links, etc.
Grid Shield (5e Equipment) Random punctation, concerning capitalization
Half-Celestial Born (5e Race) Traits need to be written in full and follow the first parties wording scheme.
Half-Goblin Variant (5e Race) Capitalization errors. Please see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Half Vampire (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Halfa (Half Ghost) The race information (Physical Description, History, etc.) should be organized into sentences and paragraphs, and not like a quick information sheet.
Hard Ice Elemental (5e Race) Weird capitalization here and there. The fluff could be written more cohesively
Healing Vacuum, Variant (5e Hazard) This hazard has a number of grammatical issues, ranging from incorrect capitalization to somewhat unclear wording. Overall, this hazard could greatly benefit from a rewrite.
Heartless (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, no size category is stated, basic sentence structuring and capitalization, it should be something like "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not something like "STR+2, CON+1", resistance is not capitalized, uses abbreviations like mod and Dex, etc...
Hexer Variant (5e Class) see the talk page
Hollower (5e Class) The grammar, spelling, and capitalization need to be fixed.
Holy Weapon User (5e Class) The grammar and phrasing of the features need a lot of work.
Hutcher (5e Class) It's xth level, not level x.
Hybrid (5e Race Variant) Wording needs to looked at.
Illuminator (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Inkling, 2nd Variant (5e Race) The wording/formatting/grammar is funny/broken in several places throughout the page.
Jaeger (5e Equipment) More description is needed to clarify how these opposing properties are supposed to work together. If it's supposed to be two (or three?) weapons in one, this should be better clarified; and each half of the weapon should specify which properties it uses.
Joryun (5e Race) Race names are still not capitalized unless at the front of a sentence. Ability scores are also written out and linked, as are units of measurements.
Kaeozz (5e Creature) This creature does not follow standard 5e wording. Neither does it follows wiki format guidelines. Draelm (talk) 16:02, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzoidian Dragon (5e Creature) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Scales should be simplified/made more understandable.
Kaeozzoidian Dragon Pulled Plane (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Draelm (talk) 16:21, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzoidian Trained Dragon (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Also, this should probably be a creature, not a vehicle. Draelm (talk) 16:18, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kakkarot (5e Subclass) Typos and mechanical vagueness throughout.
Kaonashi (5e Race) Greatly strays from 5e terminology
Kender, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kindred (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Kinetic Deviant (5e Class) Unconventional wording throughout.
Kitsune, 3rd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kitsune, 5th Variant (5e Race) Erroneous use of capitalization on race names.
Knights of the Zodiac (5e Class) Just about every sentence on this page is worded either poorly, incorrectly, or just kinda weirdly.
Kritian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Kumiho (5e Race) There are capitalization errors of race names and overall spelling and grammar issues. Trait wording also needs fixing so they don't say something like "str/dex" and are more mechanically sound and less vague.
Labaranthine (5e Race) Grammatical and spelling errors, as well as capitalization. See when to Capitalize for help.
Latex Beast (5e Race) Some of the terminology is wonky ("during deathsaves"?). Skills should also be linked.
Lord (Fire Emblem) (5e Class) This class has a several instances of unclear or incorrect wording. In particular, the subclasses could use some cleanup and further explanation as to how some features work.
Lucario, 2nd Variant (5e Race) Capitalization and italization. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Machine Lifeform (5e Race) Capitalization of words that do not follow Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Also in need of some links to the SRD for skills and ability scores.
Magi (5e Race Variant) Many traits are poorly worded.
Masked Warrior (5e Class) Several dozen standardization problems with most of the features. Much of the content could also be much more condensed or easier to read.

Additionally, the epic levels both need to stop using a 3.5 table and use a proper variant rule for handling levels higher than 20th.

Masks of Forms (5e Equipment) keywords like Brave, Dwarven Toughness, and other racial traits need written out. Players shouldn't be expected to research or refer to other pages to know what their stuff does.
Mongrel (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
More Ability Score Improvements (5e Variant Rule) Very clumsy. Doesn't make sense beyond just a buff.
Mosa Moth (5e Race) Spells should be italicized and units and darkvision should be written out. There are also spelling errors and places where the wording is not to the 5e standard of terminology.
Mudborn (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", etc...
Multiplectic (5e Race) grammar and formatting mistakes
Murderer pigeon (5e Creature) Clumsy mechanics. Needs a general cleanup.
Necron, Variant (5e Race) grammatical errors, Many race features are using incorrect wording
Noro's Bone Crush (5e Spell) Written too conversationally, far from 5e standards
Noro's Lazy Steed (5e Spell) Not written according to 5e terminology
Nosgoth Vampire (5e Race) This does not meet 5e standards.
Not So Fragile Glass Cannon Gish (5e Optimized Character Build) Sentence structure, and some wording.
Nullifer (5e Class) This class has significant problems with capitalization and punctuation found throughout the class. Besides that, the class has various other minor grammatical errors scattered about.
Oath of "Throwing it Back" (5e Subclass) See talk page.
Octofolk (5e Race) Speeds should be worded like the triton race. Also, incorrect capitalizations for race names, rests, alignments, etc. Also, some spelling errors.
Osmosian (5e Race) Traits are exceedingly wordy and need to be cut down as well as simplified. Other glaring wording errors throughout.
Other One (5e Race) There are several grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. The traits are overly wordy/ ineloquent when they should be written like the first party does. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help on capitalization.
Overhauled Prestige Classes (5e Variant Rule) The creator of this page requests a grammar cleanup.
Owl Kin (5e Race) This page needs some grammatical touch-ups, mainly involving punctuation and sentence structure.
Pac-Man (5e Race) The language needs to be tightened up a bit so it's not so casual and abridged from proper 5e terminology.
Palademon (5e Race) There are capitalization errors and spelling problems. I fixed some but not all. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Path of the Devil (5e Subclass) Abilities are incorrectly structured.
Patternweave (5e Spell) This spell has numerous wording problems ranging from capitalization issues and unclear wording to missing punctuation. In addition, this spell is not worded like other spells and could use some cleanup.
Phaseling (5e Class) The last line of the last class feature does not have a clear meaning, if any. There is also an issue with the Pocket Portal feature, as it's diameter is defined as being equal to the phaseling's level, but does not specify which unit (feet, squares, miles) is used for the conversion. Even if the unit is feet, however, which it most likely is, this is in no way a small portal, as the feature would suggest. Also, the level at which a feature is gained should be placed at the beginning of that feature's description, not halfway through.
Phoenix Kin (5e Race) Traits are poorly worded.
Pimp's Glove (5e Equipment) This page needs a run through fixing the page's unclear wording and numerous grammatical mistakes.
Planes Walker (5e Class) Class feature need to be properly worded. Also capitalization.
Plantaemancer, Variant (5e Class) There are some grammar uh-ohs and errors ("once per long rest", eg). Also in need of links in some places.
Plantling (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Possesion Doll (5e Race) Some traits are worded incorrectly, or confusing.
Prestige System V1 (5e Variant Rule) Collaboratively edited pages don't have versions. Doesn't read well.
Prismatic Knight (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the "per long rest" wording and has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Proderes (5e Race) Lots of spelling errors.
Protean (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Psion, Discipline Variant (5e Class) This class's wording needs to be cleaned up as there are countless grammatical errors (spells should be italicized and not capitalized, missing punctation, the name of the class shouldn't be capitalized) and some unclear features throughout (how exactly features recharge, some info on mechanics that is missing, etc).
Qinar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Races (Sfartalheim Supplement) Race names should not be capitalized.
Raesokeran Edentatus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Mustilus (5e Race) "reptiles", "feat effects" are not 5e terms. "once per long rest" wording should not be used. Mustilus and Rodentus are not a first party language, explain it(script/ what it sounds like, etc) or use the first party languages. Incorrect capitalization throughout, consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Traits are vague and incorrectly worded throughout and should use the first party's wording.
Rag Doll, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Re:Ghoul (5e Class) Spelling, grammar and terminology all need considerable improvement.
Renamon (5e Race) Units of measurement should be written out.
River Siren (5e Race) Capitalization and grammar errors.
Rubber Warrior (5e Class) Mechanics do not conventional structures.
Rugbysta (5e Class) Are grammar and misspellings part of the joke?
Runepriest, Variant (5e Class) This class plagiarizes text directly from the 4e runepriest introduction.
Runesmith (5e Class) Does not use standard wording as per PHB.
Runic Armor (5e Equipment) This only resembles 5e writing, but upon closer look many problems present themselves. There is no such thing as Enchanted bonus, etc. Also this have many grammatical errors and such
Runic Staff (5e Equipment) This only resembles 5e writing, but upon closer look many problems present themselves. There is no such thing as Enchanted bonus, finesse read(reach?), runes, etc.
Saiyan, Variant (5e Creature) 5e doesn't have a "saveguard test" to "survive". "Stats" can also refer to any game number, when you're probably wanting to refer to ability scores. I think what you're trying to say is "Your Strength, Dexterity, and Constitution scores increase by 4. When you succeed a saving throw using any of the aforementioned abilities, they increase by 1.
Salamander Faerie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, fae, heat damage, race name capitalization, size category capitalization, etc...
Salve-Maker (5e Class) Terminology issues, see talk page.
SeaWings (5e Race) Subrace wording is clumsy and requires clarification of actual mechanical effects. Uses meters instead of feet.
Seaclaimed Pirate (5e Class) Expertise is not a keyword in 5e. It's a class feature of rogues.
Sendo Monk (5e Class) Does not follow the standards. See talk page.
Sentient Snake (5e Race) Things like natural armor should use standard 5e wording
Serrated Katana (5e Equipment) Capitalization and punctuation would benefit from revision.
Shadow Monarch, Variant (5e Subclass) This subclass's wording is confusing and unclear at times, and it also frequently uses non-standard wording such as health, once per long rest, etc. The Attempt feature as a whole likely needs to be completely reworded/reworked because as it stands it requires a decent bit of math and is pretty convoluted.
Shadow Sovereign (5e Class) A majority of this page is awkwardly written.
Shadowhunter (5e Class) Typos everywhere. Isn't consistent on how the class name should be written. The word "per" shouldn't be anywhere, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline)
Shadowling (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Shapeshifter (5e Race) The article fails to use proper 5e wording. Traits should be wrote in 2nd person, and use complete sentences. Non-keyword words are used with the idea that they are already defined 5e terms, even though they are not. Ex. "lifesteal".
Sharkin (5e Race) "Standard action" wording is not 5e terminology. Also, superior darkvision should use the {{5e SDarkvision}} wording.
Shazam (5e Class) This does not seem to use the rules for D&D 5e. Terminology such as "CD", "electrical damage", "CA becomes 20", "your body increases 10 feet", "1/4 of your maximum life". Uses meters instead of feet, and uses level x instead of xth level.
Sheikah, Variant (5e Class) This class has many wording issues ranging from problems with missing punctuation, incorrect capitalization(class names are not capitalized), and unclear features(as outlined above).
Shieldbearer (5e Class) Frequent uses of "free action". Needs fixing
Simic Hybrid, Variant (5e Race) This page has several different grammatical problems, lists things that are not terms in 5e(expertise is a class feature, per day wording is not used, see the dragonborn's breath weapon as an example), among several other problems.
Sir Jaroid's Sword of Light (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. You can find some general guidelines in the Equipment Design article. Draelm (talk) 16:26, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Sir Jaroid (5e Creature) This article does not follow standard 5e wording.
Skaven Warplock Engineer (5e Class) The grammar is awful.
Sky Mage (5e Class) Class is excessively wordy. Consider moving Domain Spells to 5e Spells.
Slimeborg (5e Race) This race has 3.5eisms and need to be changed to 5e.
Slimefolk, Variant (5e Race) This race has a number of confusing or poorly worded traits.
Sniffing glue (5e Equipment) Capitalization errors and run-ons for days. Why are random sentences bolded? Why is the page filled with <br>s instead of just using the return key, which would make this infinitely easier to fix?
Songstress (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, and don't use proper DnD language.
Soul Crafter (5e Class) Many things here use abbreviations when they should be written out in entirety (CA, SF, etc.). There are also incomplete sentences here and there, as well as mispellings.
Soulbound (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names and conditions aren't capitalized, etc...
Soulect (5e Race) Capitalization and spelling errors.
Souls Keeper Necromancer (5e Class) Spelling, saying level x instead of xth level.
Spatial Summoner (5e Class) There are a lot of incorrect capitalization and grammar issues.
Spin Master (5e Subclass) Terminology does not use rules of D&D 5e.
Spirit Bound Hunter (5e Class) some grammar errors
Stone Gargoyle (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Storm Archer (5e Class) Reads like coarse sandpaper.
Storm Razer (5e Class) Be sure not to capitalize needlessly, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Uses "meters", "extended rest", "You can use another creatures reaction", should be "your reaction", etc. Needs to be proofread.
Storm Reincarnation (5e Class) Has some grammar issues.
Storm Stone (5e Equipment) Sentience could be worded in a way that feels natural.
Stormborn (5e Class) Revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "1st level" instead of "level 1." Consider the contents of Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Supreme Wild Shape (5e Feat) This feat's wording is a mess with missing punctuation, incorrect capitalization, and overall a bit unclear wording.
Surrakar, Variant (5e Race) Problematic features' descriptions, for example BIG is not a size category in dnd, swim speed +5 what, elephants? feets? Darkvision is weirdly written, hp
Sword Mage, Variant (5e Class) On the feature Weapon Study you mention that you can become "familiar" with a weapon. But you don't explain what being familiar with a weapon means. I guess that, by "familiar", you mean "bonded", like the Eldritch Knight feature, that you mention in the My Friends feature, but this should be explained on the feature, and not addressing another class.
Sword Mage (5e Class) See talk page.
Tank (5e Class) "resist all damage from magic" means you take no damage, or you have resistance (half damage) from all magic?
Tenno/Warframe (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Tentacles (5e Spell) Some effects could be clarified. Do the tentacles emerge from points within range? Can the tentacles move from where they're summoned? Is the duration instantaneous or permanent? Do the tentacles use your spellcasting modifier for attack rolls? What happens if a tentacle is targeted with an attack, or takes damage?
Terry Crews (5e Deity) Vague, and open to different interpretations. See talk page.
The Bar-Tir (5e Race) A number of spelling/ grammatical/ punctuation/ capitalization/ italicization/ wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help (race names are not capitalized).
The CardSlinger (5e Class) Features have grammar problems, and do not use the correct structure.
The Cold (5e Disease) The effect needs to be worded more clearly.
The Consumed (5e Race) many features are written in a way that makes them unable to be used or understood, like Righteous Fury, World weary or Meld. Written nowhere near 5e standard when comes to racial features
The Corrupted (5e Subclass) The additionally clause of Hardened Skin is very confusing.
The Gaelic Gamble (5e Spell) Needs a second set of eyes.
The Gray Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Hillgiant's Holy Hamwich (5e Equipment) Unclear how this interacts with other magical items, how it's level is increased, etc.
The Idol of Zeroth (5e Equipment) It isn't clear exactly how this item functions. Does this item require attunement to have Zeroth possess you? Does this item become non-magical? In addition, various other grammatical errors exist throughout.
The Lich Skull (5e Equipment) This item is extremely mechanically clunky and could benefit from a rewrite.
The Mother's Oath (5e Subclass) wording mistakes throught
The Pactbreaker (5e Subclass) Some features don't use any game mechanics at all.
Therianthrope (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Timekeeping Chronomancer (5e Class) This page was copy and pasted here. Many instances of "chronomancer" should be replaced with "timekeeping chronomancer."
Toosh (5e Race) Traits needs to be fully written out and worded - Ability Score Improvement, Language, spelling, grammar, capitalization, etc
Treant, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, race names, and alignments shouldn't be capitalized, "mod" should be "modifier", etc. The Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) should help with some of the incorrect wording.
Trophy Fighter (5e Race) Proofreading would be beneficial. Run-on sentence problems.
True Alpha (5e Creature) Numerous capitalization mistakes throughout.
Turtle Cat (5e Race) The fluff and mechanics are very mixed and it's confusing.
Tychomancer (5e Class) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Umbra Witch (5e Class) There are a lot of things that should not be capitalized, as well as incorrect language in the class features.
Uncrowned Undeafeated Lioness (5e Class) Capitalization and spelling are all over the place.
Vampire, Noble (5e Race) Several traits are poorly and unclearly worded.
Virgil's Thunderous Lightning Strike (5e Spell) Is this a save-based spell or an attack? Wording is unclear.
Virtue (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names aren't capitalized, it should be once you've completed a long rest not once per long rest(see PHB errata), "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "Your Wisdom score increases by 2." not "Gain + 2 to Wisdom.", etc...
Virtuous Assassin (5e Class) Full of grammatical errors
Void Champion (5e Class) Needs a rewrite.
Voidwoken (5e Class) Uses "per day" and "per short-long rest" throughout the text
Voodoist (5e Class) Requires large amounts of grammatical help in virtually every area.
Warden (5e Race) Spelling errors
Warmonger (5e Class) Grammar problems throughout.
Were-pires (5e Race) Odd capitalization, punctuation, lack of punctuation, and fragment sentences throughout, uses "per day" wording.
Were human (5e Disease) The two variable game types need to be explained with mechanics.
Witch Doctor (5e Class) Capitalization and grammar issues.
Witcher (5e Class) It's xth level, level x.
Wool Witch (5e Class) Wording is poor throughout. Features are called spells, and the article is written in an overly casual manner. bided is not a condition. bleeding is not a damage type. meters instead of feet.
Wraith, Variant (5e Race) Many features are poorly worded. Features should be written in 2nd person (you).
Wraith Host (5e Class) This entire class features some slopping grammar and spelling.
Yharnam Hunter (5e Class) No feature is written according to 5e convenctions
Zírán (5e Race) needs help with english in some places, written not according to 5e nomenclature
Ætherborn (Variant) (5e Race) Random capitalization, some phrases are unsound in english, strays from 5e descriptions

4e Pages[edit]

4e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Dragonkin (4e Race) Several spelling errors and grammar issues
Lords of the secret citadel (4e Quest) Capitalization, and wording could be stronger.

3.5e Pages[edit]

3.5e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Ash ones (3.5e Race) The grammar and spelling in this article is lacking.
Battle-hardened (3.5e Race) Traits and skills need to be capitalized.
Blood Sacrifice (3.5e Feat) Plagued with grammar problems.
Boccob (3.5e Deity) "copied from Wikipedia .... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boccob#Description " should be reworded.
Book of Tech (3.5e Sourcebook)wip its sub-pages have severe grammar and spelling issues.
Corellon Larethian (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corellon_Larethian" should be reworded.
Creative Genius (3.5e Prestige Class) Class names shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are some other unusual phrases which would benefit from revision, including lines like, "you must take 5 level."
Darvatoura's Crazy Carriage (3.5e Equipment) Numerous spelling issues.
Disciples (3.5e Race) The grammar needs to be fixed and some of the sentences are confusing.
Diverse Sorcerer (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) please see Natural Evoker (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) for an example of wording
Dragon Warrior (3.5e Class) Formatting and grammar need improving
Ehlonna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ehlonna#Description" should be reworded.
Entings (3.5e Race) Grammar is confusing in places.
Erythnul (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erythnul" should be reworded.
Fixed Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording in the description needs improving.
Free-Runner (3.5e Class) Needs wikilinks, the bonus feats for example.
Garl Glittergold (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ...http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garl_Glittergold" should be reworded.
Gruumsh (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gruumsh" should be reworded.
Harpie (3.5e Race) Wording needs some work. Confusingly similar to a harpy.
Holy Kick (3.5e Maneuver) Wording needs improving.
Horrid Blight (3.5e Other) Wording could be improved.
Infinium, Gun Mage (3.5e Class) Riddled with grammatical errors and poor terminology
Kenseijin (3.5e Class) Multiple spelling and grammar issues.
Kord (3.5e Deity) "copied from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kord_(Greyhawk)#Description" should be reworded
Languages (3.5e Other) Formatting, spelling, and grammar need overhauling.
Life Givetaker (3.5e Class) The abilities are confusing to the degree that they are not understandable.
Loose Limbs (3.5e Variant Rule) Grammar needs improving
Mark of the Hero (3.5e Template) Bonuses need to use conventional wording. Syntax and game mechanics need major polishing.
Meteor Hammer, Variant (3.5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar needs improving
Moradin (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia .....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moradin" should be reworded.
Naruto Ninja, Variant (3.5e Class) This class's features are often confusing/don't make sense while also having a ton of grammar mistakes found throughout the page. All, in all could use some significant clean up. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Olidammara (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olidammara#Dungeons_.26_Dragons_3.5_edition_.282003-2007.29 " should be reworded
Provisions of "Magic" (3.5e Variant Rule) Words at the beginning of sentences need to be capitalized.
Pumpkin child (3.5e Race) Terminology issues throughout ("health points"?)
Samurai Resources (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Shadows to Steel (Shadow Power) needs touch-up of wording
Spell Blade, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) D&D wiki uses US English.
Spontaneous Gnome Shadow Illusionist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) Hard to read in some places.
Super Hero (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling. A lot of terms are contracted or abbreviated when they shouldn't be.
The Helm of The Dark Lord (3.5e Equipment) Many statements are poorly written, and hard to follow.
The True Samurai (3.5e Class) Class names and weapon names are not proper nouns.
The Witcher (3.5e Class) Some work needs doing improving the language and terminology. I've read through Witcher Styles twice and it's incomprehensible to me. The entire bit about geralt being the only ever white hair witcher is also wrong. Wanted to try this but reading how wrong the OP was turned me off it.
Thunder Cleaves (3.5e Prestige Class) Abilities are not written out for most of the progression.
Uchiha (3.5e Race) Grammar and descriptions need improving.
Unidragowolfoxcat (UDWFC) (3.5e Race) Many parts come across as conversational.
Unliving Savant (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need work.
Vecna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vecna". Could use rewording.
Wastelander (3.5e Class) Writing is poor.
Wrist Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Practically unintelligible

2.5e Pages[edit]

2.5e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes

Pathfinder Pages[edit]

Pathfinder Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Cliopodans (Pathfinder Race) This race's ability and alternate traits could use being more succinct and to-the-point.
Ring of Shadows (Pathfinder Equipment) Wording is a bit muddled.

d20M Pages[edit]

d20M Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Kryptonian (D20 Modern Class) Wording needs improving.

Uncategorized Pages[edit]

Pages with no edition category

Uncategorized Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
A Devoradora De Raios (5e Class) This needs to be in English.
Divine Salient Abilities (5e Class Feature) Half of this features are described in a way that makes them impossible to use. Example: "Perfect dodge. It's almost like you're playing Exalted." What does it do? How can I use it? What even is going on?
Hog Rider (5e Class) Not a one sentence in feature description(beside those that increases your ability scores) is written correctly, in accordance to 5e standards, or in a way that makes them usable
File:Magic Kanji.jpeg|| style="text-align: left;" | This needs to be in English.
PanserBear (5e Race) Entirely in a different language. As this is an English site, it has to be translated.
Pescador remember, all classes on the wiki must be written in English
File:The Magic Kanji.jpeg|| style="text-align: left;" | This needs to be in English.
File:Toshi.jpg|| style="text-align: left;" | This needs to be in English.
Tranquil Knight (5e Class) The text does not follow the standard for wording of features. Please look at features from official classes for reference
Vigilant Yaksha (5e Class) You replaced the wrong part of the name with Vigilant Yaksha (should be Vigilant Yaksha (5e Class)), headers are already bolded, making added bolding only serve to screw with the TOC.
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