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+anima (3.5e Bloodline) Spelling and grammar needs improving throughout.
Abstraction (5e Race) There are still a number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or unnecessarily wordy. DC's should be fully written out, abilities should use one ability score, not their choice a list, Size categories should be capitalized but the word "size" shouldn't be, race names should not be capitalized as well, spells should be italicized, red links should be corrected, etc..
Alchemist of Transmutation (5e Class) Capitalization.
Aloii, Variant (5e Race) race names shouldn't be capitalized. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Alternian Troll (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, rests, modifier, conditions, saving throws, alignments, resistances, vulnerabilities, etc aren't capitalized, "Your Constitution score increases by 1." not "Your Constitution score is increased by 1", Ideals should be in bold, etc...
Altrohan (5e Creature) The description has grammatical errors, lack of capitalization, etc. and would benefit from a rewrite.
Amaltel (5e Race) Names and alignments aren't capitalized. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. words should be fully written out hit points not HP, etc.
Anansi (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague, written like a casual conversation or convoluted/ unreadable.
Ancient Warforged (5e Race) Basic grammar issues. Refers to traits that don't exist. Everything after the walking speed under Speed should be its own trait. The wording for most of the traits is incorrect. For example, the natural weapons should use the same wording as the tabaxi's, Ancient History should use that similar to Stonecunning, Machine mind should use the wording for Keen Mind, Maintenance is totally vague("certain ancient arifacts???", etc...)
Animated Shield (5e Race) Spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors. Missing references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Anime Girl (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Arborial (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Arcaedia (5e Race) Spectral Limbs is written and mechanically presented as if it were a class feature. I am unsure of which existing fiction this is attempting to replicate but this trait could be vastly simplified/ broken down and ideally should be.
Arcane Lobber (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Ardalkhayan Gnomes (5e Subrace) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Arkanos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, races names aren't capitalized, "bright light" not "light", "As a bonus action..." not "this counts as a bonus action", etc...
Arkin (5e Race) there are grammatical errors and wording issues on this page that needs to be addressed before this can be considered a completed work.
Armament Mage, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armament Mage (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armored Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Ascendant Tiefling (5e Race Variant) Doesn't use proper grammar throughout.
Astral Angels (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Awakened Zombie (5e Race) Needs some grammatical/wording fixes as well as some of the more basic capitilization issues fixed. See the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Azer (5e Race) A number of grammatical, and wording errors throughout.
Bag of Clones (5e Equipment) Many spelling, grammatical and punctuation errors.
Balthazax (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Barraki (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Beast Men (5e Race) Traits are worded incorrectly/poorly, consult the 5e Race Design Guide.
Beastkin, Variant (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors. The whole tranformation traits need to be fixed wording wise. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Biomage (3.5e Class) Formatting and wording needs some work.
Black Blooded (5e Class) Terminology needs much improvement.
Blade Master, Variant (5e Class) Class names and certain other words are capitalized when they should not be. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Aside from this, several phrases would benefit from conforming to the norms of 5e. For example, "1st level" should replace "level 1," and the boons granted by a class are "features" as opposed to "abilities."
Bladedancer, 2nd Variant (5e Subclass) Does expertise has a definition in 5e? Uses per rest wording.
Blood Elf, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Bobo'gnung (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Boccob (3.5e Deity) "copied from Wikipedia .... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boccob#Description " should be reworded.
Book Dragon (5e Race) Many traits are not worded correctly.
Book of Tech (3.5e Sourcebook)wip its sub-pages have severe grammar and spelling issues.
Brawler (5e Class) Grammar needs improvement. In particular, the page should be gone through and proper nouns, headers, and the beginnings of sentences need to be capitalized.
Bushi (5e Class) "You may decide your Combat Form as a free action any time before combat starts" there are no free actions
"By maintaining a calm dispositon and defensive guard, you gauge your opponent without exposing yourself. No modifiers." what is no modifiers?
"When Focus is activated, you gain the ability to accumulate Fury stacks up to the maximum value; five. You start combat with the maximum amount, five." do I accumulate fury when focus is activated or do I start with 5 stacks? How do I activate focus?
"+3 ATK, limited to one Attack action per Initiative" is this suppose to read like a short rest cooldown feature?
"can be used for no focus cost once every short rest." needs to be reworded so it reads "Once you use this feature you must complete a short or long rest"
more examples throughout.
Candlefolk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Cannibal (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Cannon Fodder Cannon Wording is rather confusing.
Catfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Cavalier, charming (3.5e Prestige Class) Class names and class features are common nouns and generally shouldn't be capitalized. Some other odd capitalization meanders about, such as "Realms." Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Changeling, 3rd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are proficient in the Arcana, and Deception skills." not "you gain proficiency in these two skills: deception and Arcaca".
Changeling, Variant (5e Race) Incomplete wordings throughout.
Chiasin Amoore (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Chick Thrower Abound with mis-spelled words, incomprehensible sentences, features, and other such problems.
Child Of Cosmos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Children of Ill-Omens (5e Race) Incomplete, and hard to read.
Chiropterans (5e Race) The lore and the racial traits individually and together don't make much sense. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Choasborn (5e Race) Capitalization, and some spelling.
Chosen (5e Class) It's a minor issue, but this content would be improved if more words and phrases followed 5e precedent. E.g., "13th level" is preferred over "level 13." Class names are common nouns and usually shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Chosen Undead (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Chronomancer (5e Class) The whole think needs to be looked over for run on sentences. Periods are barely used and can cause confusion.
Chronomancer (5e Subclass) What is meant by "distortions in time" and "rests"? These aren't 5e terms. The wording is odd throughout as well and the features don't really communicate a chronomancer/ wizard subclass.
Cliopodans (Pathfinder Race) This race's ability and alternate traits could use being more succinct and to-the-point.
Coldskin, Variant (5e Race) The traits are badly worded and use incorrect terminology.
Coleoptera (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Confusing Room (5e Trap) this page has numerous grammatical issues and vague wording, for example, "their" instead of "there", "roll on the table to choose an effect" (DM choice being one of the results), "when you think enough time has passed", etc.
Connected Twins (5e Race Variant) Capitalization and some wording.
Convel (5e Race) Grammar is poor throughout.
Corellon Larethian (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corellon_Larethian" should be reworded.
Creative Genius (3.5e Prestige Class) Class names shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are some other unusual phrases which would benefit from revision, including lines like, "you must take 5 level."
Creature Features (5e Variant Rule) Incorrect capitalization, and wording throughout.
Creepy Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
CrossBreed (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names, damage types and weapon properties aren't capitalized, "Your size is Medium." not "your size is medium", "You are proficient in the Perception skill." not "you are proficient perception", etc...
Crystalisk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Crystallite (5e Race) traits that do something are missing how they do it, action, bonus actions, etc. SRDs missing
Cubi (3.5e Class) "balanced Tire 3 class."? This is full of typos. Spell list is messy and doesn't adequately explain where the spells can be found.
Cyborgs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar needs a lot of work.
Dagger of Memories (5e Equipment) Capitalization. What is +3, +2 etc. Some features could use stronger wording.
Dark Knight, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) The wording on the class features is a bit ropy. Class names like "Dark Knight" are common nouns, not proper nouns.
Dark Knight FF (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dark Spear (5e Equipment) DCs based on hit points is also "sloppy". There's a lot to keep track of or ask and consider when making an attack. This item is very dense. It would benefit from condensing if possible.
Dawn Rosepetal (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Daywalker (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, alignments aren't capitalized, Age/Alignment/Size should be fully written out, Basic sentence structuring, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", etc...
Dead Iron (3.5e Equipment) This is a mess to read and confusing.
Death Dealer (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Death Knight (4e Class) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Death Knight Minions (4e Creature) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Demiplanic orb (5e Equipment) Please have a look at spells in the PHB to see if any could be used. 5e SRD:Demiplane springs to mind.
Demon Brawler (3.5e Class) Grammar and terminology need much improvement.
Demon Weapon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Demon Whisperer (5e Class) Many features are worded in a confusing or vague way. Ideally, terms used would more closely following 5th edition precedent. There is minimal description that would benefit from expansion. See the talk page.
Diabolic Soul Tiefling, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Disco Knight (3.5e Class) Some spelling errors.
Diverse Sorcerer (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) please see Natural Evoker (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) for an example of wording
Dominion Overlord (5e Class) Wording and terminology need significantly improving.
Doom Guy, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Doom Shaper (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording, and some miss-capitalization.
Doomborn (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Doomed Undead (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Draakra (5e Race) A number of grammatical/wording errors throughout. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "You are medium sized.", "You have advantage on saving throws against being knocked prone." not "You have advantage against being knocked prone.", etc...
Draconic Angel, Variant (5e Race) This race features identical wording to Draconic Angel in numerous areas. Charm features round counting.
Dragon Eater (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling needs improving. Still mentions god devouring in the lead sentence and in other places from a hasty cut-and-paste.
Dragon Fang (3.5e Equipment) Spell turning needs formalizing, perhaps just by saying you can cast SRD:Spell Turning so many times per day.
Dragon Knight, 3rd Variant (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Dragon Mage (5e Class) Dragon's companion is written like a novel vs 5e design. Ancient magic needs clarity what is meant to happen. Dragon's perception needs clarity.
Dragon Warrior (3.5e Class) Formatting and grammar need improving
Dragonblood Outcasts (5e Race) Improper grammar for 5e.
Dragonborn Angel (5e Subrace) Inncorrect capitalization/wording throughout. Damage types, movement types, armor, etc are not capitalized. "feet/foot" should be written instead of "ft".
Drakki (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Dunderling (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Dwarves, Sundered (3.5e Race) "This race was originally published in The Complete Book of Dwarves for AD&D 2nd Edition." should be reworded.
Earth Clan (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout such as alignments, race names, etc and vague traits written like notes when they should use first-party wording. Brackets should be avoided as traits should be written like full sentences. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Earth Kingdom (5e Race Variant) wording/capitalization errors. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. You should endeavor to use the same wording as the first party.
Ehlonna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ehlonna#Description" should be reworded.
Element Bender (5e Class) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Missings references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and 5e Class Design Guide for help.
Elemental Assassin (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Elemental Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Elementalist V2.0 (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Empath (5e Class) Needs to adhere with Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Entings (3.5e Race) Grammar is confusing in places; redlinks
Equestrians (Aleithia Supplement) (5e Race) Missing references in several places and the wording is off for a few traits. For example, "You are proficient in the Nature skill." not "You gain proficiency in Nature." Consult the Players Handbook and/or the Musicus_Meter_(5e_Guideline) for the correct wording on such traits.
Erythnul (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erythnul" should be reworded.
Evil Armor (5e Equipment) this item's poor grammar makes the article hard to read, capitalization errors, and there is no "demon" type, only fiend. Also the title could use some improvement.
Evil Henchman (5e Background) Grammatical problems all over.
Evomancer (3.5e Class) Grammar and formatting needs working on.
Fallen Angel, Variant (5e Race) This is... weirdly written I think and not to 5e standard? Wings retract and at night... etc.
Fallen Divinity (5e Class) A number of spelling/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The features need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, skills should be capitalized, ft instead of feet, 8d4 not 8D4, damage types shouldn't be capitalized, etc...
Fary (5e Race) This page lacks the correct wording for various things such as ability scores("Your Dexterity increases by 2." not "+2 Dexterity"), traits(), languages(can they speak, read or write these languages or just understand them? This isn't clear.), etc.
Featherkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. Languages, ability score increases and x need to be written out correctly for example "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1.". Race names should be capitalized. "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill". Etc...
Fell Orc (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. For example, traits that grand advantage should list the ability score they use as per the dwarf's stonecunning trait and there are several things that are seemingly randomly capitalized like alignment, race names, weapons, etc.
Fennec, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "A fennecs size is medium", "You are proficient in the Perception and Survival skill." not "This gives you a proficiency towards all survival and perception skills.", etc...
Fennec (5e Race) Traits are incorrectly worded such as the natural weapons which should use the same wording as the tabaxi's. Several other issues that can be fixed by consulting the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ferengi (Star Trek Supplement) Wording needs corrected.
Fire Nation (5e Race Variant) Capitalization errors. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Fish Men (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/bolding/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, the text seems to be at random bolded, headers are also bolded, several red links, images not in image templates but as external links, sub-subraces, damage types being capitalized, "You are proficient in the Nature skill." not "You have proficiency in Nature skill.", etc...
Fixed Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording in the description needs improving.
Flamefist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) spelling/grammar
Flora Colossus (5e Race) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Forest Hylian (4e Race) Race names shouldn't be capitalized, as they aren't proper nouns.
Free-Runner (3.5e Class) Needs wikilinks, the bonus feats for example.
Frost Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Frost Knight (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See the talk page, Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize, and Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) for info on the class's wording problems and how they can be fixed.
Frost Lance (5e Equipment) spells need their own pages created, then linked in the description, capitalization errors
Frostbite Warknight (3.5e Prestige Class) There's some camel case still to be removed in the text body, but otherwise this looks complete?
Furkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Gallifreyan, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like bullet points on a character sheet. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "Your Strength score increases by 2" not "Strength +2", race names are capitalized, etc...
Gargantuar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Gargoyle (5e Race) Damage types shouldn't be capitalized. Several racial traits are worded incorrectly. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Garl Glittergold (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ...http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garl_Glittergold" should be reworded.
Gasterizer (5e Class) Long, run on sentances
Gemnis (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, spells aren't capitalized, spell are italicized, race names are not capitalized, etc...
Gems, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Gems (5e Race) Traits/ terms need to be fully written out. "hit points" instead of hp/HP, "feet/foot" instead of ft, etc. Grammatical issues should be ironed out as well. Capitalization issues, consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Gigaemon (5e Race) A few of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Creature types, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Gnome, Variant (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Golem (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Goliath Panda (5e Race) There are a few issues here mentioned in the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize such as race names being capitalized.
Gorger (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Gormkaji Orcs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Grave Knight (5e Class) Needs to be more careful with wording. For example Empower's "ability used" reads like it works with ability checks. Also missing a summary
Gravitonic Archer (5e Class) Full of incorrect terminology. STR and INT need to be worded right, the action types need to be explained correctly, and the wording needs to be finely combed through.
Gravity Knight (5e Class) Terminology needs improving (e.g. "successful melee strike" should be "when you hit with a melee weapon attack"; 5e doesn't have "Standard Actions" or a "staggered" condition; "Str save" should be "Strength saving throw", etc)
Gruumsh (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gruumsh" should be reworded.
Gunblade (5e Equipment) Wording could be improved.
Half-Douen (5e Race) Trait wording is vague and broken throughout. Read the 5e Race Design Guide.
Half-Draconic (5e Subrace) Needs correcting for ASI wording.
Half-Fairy (5e Race) Trait wording is off/covoluted, see how traits are written in the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline).
Half-Giant, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race traits should be capitalized, the languages section needs to be fully written, "Your size is Medium." not "Their size is Medium.", "Your Constitution score increases by 2." not "Constitution raises by 2, "You are resistant to thunder and lightning damage." not "You gain resistance to thunder and lightning damage", etc...
Half-Goblin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Half-Goblin Variant (5e Race) Wording throughout is poor.
Half-Golem (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "medium", "Your Strength score increases by 1." not "+1 Strength", damage types aren't capitalized and languages/ability scores are capitalized, 2 week is vague as the period of a week varies from setting to setting(this should be listed in days), etc...
Half-Magala (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "You know common and draconic." not "You can speak, read and write Common and Draconic.", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Charisma score increases by 1." not "You gain +2 Strength and +1 Charisma.", ft should be feet/foot in every case its used here, etc...
Half-changeling (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Half-human (Quarter-orc, quarter-elf) (5e Race) Despite all the traits used being already written and the race doing nothing different the traits are still written incorrectly. See the PHB for the correct wording and consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize if in doubt.
Harpie (3.5e Race) Wording needs some work. Confusingly similar to a harpy.
Harpy, Variant (5e Race) Broken sentences, and capitalization.
Haunted Skull (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Heartless (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, no size category is stated, basic sentence structuring and capitalization, it should be something like "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not something like "STR+2, CON+1", resistance is not capitalized, uses abbreviations like mod and Dex, etc...
Heide knight sword (5e Equipment) Poor grammar throughout.
Helgot Servant Psion (5e Creature) "Pain Shift" is unclear. What is the range on this feature? If it is physically "grappling" another creature, that's a specific condition which shouldn't automatically be inflicted without an attack roll or saving throw. Why would the creature ever slam instead of using this? Why is it called "pain shift"? Surely the blinded condition on a failed save won't last forever, so what would be the duration?
Hellraiser (5e Subclass) This subclass has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Heron Laguz (5e Race) The wiki has a page that tells you Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. So "Deception" should be "Deception". "Fire should be "fire". See also the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing for how to reference key parts of the race.
Hidoran (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Highest AC Possible? (5e Optimized Character Build) Quality of writing is poor and needs improving.
Holy Kick (3.5e Maneuver) Wording needs improving.
Horizontal Mounted Tall Shield (3.5e Equipment) grammar.
Horrid Blight (3.5e Other) Wording could be improved.
Human Subrace Feats (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Human Tradesman (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or clearly misinterpret terminology used. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "considered medium", "Performance(Instrument)" when "instrument" is not a skill, "Your Constitution, Wisdom or Intelligence score increases by 2 and one other ability score of your choice increases by 1." not "Gain +2 to Intelligence, Constitution or Wisdom and +1 to another ability of your choice. As normal, you can not increase an ability beyond 20 in this way.", etc...
Hunter, Variant (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class should also not use the per short/long rest wording.
Hunter of the Undead (3.5e Prestige Class) What is "suffered the loss of a complete level"? Do you mean a negative level?
Hybrid (5e Race Variant) Wording needs to looked at.
Hydris (5e Race) Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and the previously linked 5e race deisng guide for help.
Ikonor's Ring of Power (5e Equipment) in parts written like a casual conversation, in other the syntax is wrong.
Iksar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Imortalist (5e Class) Numerous capitalization errors throughout.
Imp (5e Race) Capitalization errors. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Incorporeal Skeleton (5e Creature) Is this "Incorporeal Skeleton" or "Tormented Soul"?
Inferno (5e Class) In need of numerous spelling, punctuation, and syntax fixes. Such errors are not horrible, but are near ubiquitous.
Infinium, Gun Mage (3.5e Class) Riddled with grammatical errors and poor terminology
Inkling, 2nd Variant (5e Race) The wording/formatting/grammar is funny/broken in several places throughout the page.
Jakello (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Traits need to be full written out and not written like casual conversation. Remember that in 5e, racial traits are worded in the second person, with the exception of the alignment and age sections, which are usually written in the third person.
Japanese Kitsune (5e Race) ability scores are not capitalized, trait names not capitalized, Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Jarkad (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need improvement.
Joy Martial Artist (5e Class) This class has numerous examples of capitalization errors and unclear wording. Many features do not say how they can be used, whiles others like Painless don't make any sense. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Kabaneri (5e Race) English grammar, and Help: When to Italicize and Capitalize are not followed.
Kender: DLCS Conversion (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Key of the King's Law, Bab-ilu (5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Khora (5e Race) There are a few capitalizations which break convention. Race names shouldn't be capitalized, for instance. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ki Fighter (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Kitsune, 3rd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kitsune, Variant (5e Race) There are grammatical errors which deviate from standards; see Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize The wording in several places would be improved if it conformed to 5e norms. Ideally the image would have not only an author and site, but a url link to the page from which it originates.
Kitsune half-blood (5e Subrace) Basic capitalization, grammar and spelling mistakes.
Knight, Teoryran (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Knights of the Zodiac (5e Class) Grammar and spelling needs improvement.
Kord (3.5e Deity) "copied from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kord_(Greyhawk)#Description" should be reworded
Krayak (Pathfinder Environment) the one sentence in the grammar error box has grammar errors
Kreen (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "You have proficiency with the chatkcha, gythka, and ko•." not "Proficient with Chatkcha, Gythka, and Ko•" or "You have advantage on Dexterity (Stealth) checks made to hide while remaining still." not "As a result, it has advantage on Dexterity (Stealth) checks made to hide while keeping still.", however, "When you remain still for at least a minute, you have advantage on Dexterity (Stealth) checks made provided you don't move." would be more preferable since such an advantage is rather strong, combat advantage isn't a 5th edition term, etc...
Kritian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Kryptonian (D20 Modern Class) Wording needs improving.
Kuriboh (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kurikara (5e Equipment) See the holy avenger and staff of magi for how to properly word this item's effects.
Kurotsume (3.5 Race) Spelling errors.
Kydreon,The Insane (5e Creature) Overall, grammar would benefit from revision. Spaces should exist after commas. Many words are capitalized when they shouldn't be.
Lamia, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lamnidroid (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Landless Lord (3.5e Class) Grammar is all over the place.
Languages (3.5e Other) Formatting, spelling, and grammar need overhauling.
Larkoush (3.5e Deity) Writing is substandard. Grammar needs improving.
Lasher (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lemanus Rex (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked over.
Lemurian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Leprechaun (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lichkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Life Force Fighter (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Lightning Genasi (5e Subrace) The two physical description paragraphs should be consolidated.
Lilin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Limus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "expertise" is not 5th edition term, its a class feature the rogue and the bard get.
Lithune, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors such as race names and comma's before "however". Missing references such as skills. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Artifice (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Cartoon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Living Doll variant (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Living Grave (5e Race) There are a number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Lizardfolk, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lizardfolk, 3rd Variant (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need much improvement.
Lizardfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lombax (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Loose Limbs (3.5e Variant Rule) Grammar needs improving
Lost Child (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lost Dragon (5e Class) The description specifically describes a race. If this is intended to be a race-exclusive class, or a hybrid of race and class, it should be treated primarily as a race and include details like racial traits. Other homebrew examples of this include barbed devil and goron. If it doesn't make any sense to multiclass into "lost dragon," then it probably shouldn't be primarily a class.

Class features and race features should generally be written from a second person perspective ("you"), but many of this class's features use a third-person perspective ("the Dragon") or switch between them. Many words are capitalized in an odd way. Even "For" is capitalized in the middle of a sentence. Class and race names are common nouns and usually should not be capitalized. More on this subject can be found in Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.

Lost Elf (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lucario, Variant (5e Race) lesser aura needs to be detailed appropriately, or the spell needs its own page and linked to. Similar with greater aura. race names are not capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence. Mega Evolution is listed an ability but no reference in the traits. Bone rush needs mechanics written in descritoption of spell needs its own article and the bone rush trait links to it in the description.
Lucifer (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names shouldn't be capitalised, ability scores should be, abbreviations should be fully written, etc...
Lumate (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lumen (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Luparathi (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Lupine (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Lupox (5e Race) Traits need to use the same wording as the first party as they either don't match, are vague or are not worded with mechanics in mind. Also consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as there are several inconsistencies on the page such as race names, ability scores, etc. Traits should be fully written out not partially and not use abbreviations.
Machine (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
MagicMystic (3.5e Class) Bizarre wording. What does "You have access to all the spells to the grade that equals your intelligence modifier" mean, for example?
Magnitudian (5e Race) Many traits use poor wording.
Maidmer (5e Race) Spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors throughout.
Majin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "free action", "poison save" aren't 5th edition terms, etc...
Majmun (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Martial Warden (5e Class) Though there are no grevious errors, revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "9th level" instead of "level 9"; consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Matter Thing (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Mazohk (5e Race) A number of bolding/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
MechMaster (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Mecharian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Mechon (5e Race) Overly wordy traits. Several grammatical errors.
Megalosaurasapians (5e Race)
Meick (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Melshaper (5e Class) Spelling could be looked over.
Meltskin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Memory Make Mage (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, or wrote with a seemingly unflavorful, unprofessional tone.
Merdwarf (5e Race) Some traits are poorly worded.
Metamorphic (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Mighty Bow (5e Equipment) Properties could be worded better.
Minecrafter (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar throughout needs fixing.
Mitocabra (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Mogwai (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Mongrel, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/wording errors throughout. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are resistant to cold damage." not "You gain resistance to cold damage." or "Your Strength, Dexterity and Charisma scores each increase by 1." not "Increase your Charisma score by 2, then increase either your Strength or Dexterity score by 1.". Consult the Musicus_Meter_(5e_Guideline) for the correct wording.
Mongrel (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Monohue Magician (4e Paragon Path) Elemental Summoning needs clarification - what do the question marks mean?
Monster/Beast Hunter (5e Class) Some features are worded poorly.
Monster Trainer (5e Class) The entire article is full of grammar and capitalization errors.
Moon Presence (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Moonborn (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Moppling (4e Race) missing the s on many verbs
Moradin (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia .....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moradin" should be reworded.
Morfan (5e Creature) This creature has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Morog (5e Race) A number of capitalization errors. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Mothra Aasimar (5e Subrace) capitalization/wording errors. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. Brackets should be avoided.
Mountain Orc (5e Race) A number of basic capitalization, grammatical and spelling errors.
Movanic Deva (3.5e Racial Class) Does not read through well.
Multiplectic (5e Race) grammar and formatting mistakes
Murder Mite (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Mytuos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nano Spider, Variant (5e Class) Red links, unfilled fields, a number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Neko (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Nen User (Killua) (5e Class) Capitalization needs to fixed throughout.
Nerubian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nescerei (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Newro (5e Race) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Race names, alignments, etc are not capitalized.
Nicodemus (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to looked over.
Nightbleeders (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nightborne (5e Subrace) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nightmare (3.5e Race) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
Niphin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout and the sentences are broken up into multiple lines unnecessarily. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nobody (3.5e Template) spelling
Nordic Warrior (5e Class) Muddled wording throughout, and doesn't use correct 5e terms. See SRD for a composite of 5e terms.
NorthSky (3.5e Pantheon) Try paragraphs; get rid of the camelCase
Not So Fragile Glass Cannon Gish (5e Optimized Character Build) Capitalization, and some wording.
Nymph, Variant (5e Race) Free action isn't a 5th edition term. Alignments shouldn't be capitalized.
OG Armos (5e Creature) Capitalization would be improved if it conformed to D&D norms. E.g., alignments and creature names aren't capitalized. Please consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.

Punctuation is missing or incorrect in several places. Some phrases don't make sense, and sentences seem to cut off before they are finished.

Oath of Silence (5e Subclass) Minor grammatical errors throughout
Oath of the Dragon Gods (5e Subclass) Dragon Soul is unclear, what damage resistances do you gain? A number of other features also have unclear effects, don't mention how the feature is activated, don't have durations, or have grammar problems. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Oblivion (5e Spell) "When something comes in contact with this spell" implies this spell affects an area, but no area is listed. Even "random" movement in 5e by precedent follows some sort of guideline, such as the result of a die roll, but nothing like that is explained in the spell's description. The capitalization of this spell is also questionable.
Okami (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Olidammara (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olidammara#Dungeons_.26_Dragons_3.5_edition_.282003-2007.29 " should be reworded
Onyx Skeleton (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Orristaten (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Other One (5e Race) There are several grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. The traits are overly wordy/ ineloquent when they should be written like the first party does. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help on capitalization.
Otherworldly Patron: Valkyrie (5e Subclass) The wording for many features is poor.
Pandafolk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Panthera (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Pantheran (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Paradox Men (5e Class) Abbreviations should be avoided. Incorrect wording, and capitalization throughout.
Path of Crash (5e Subclass) Grammar and capitalization would benefit from revision. Feature headers should be capitalized, for example.
Pathfinder Magical Rings Wording is a bit muddled.
Pebble Dirgen (5e Equipment) Capitalization, and the description could be reworded.
Phenix, The Creatures of Fire (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Pheonix born (fixed) Writing needs improving.......Yeah but I think it is perfectly able to be used in any game as is.(ArtixVonKreiger)
Phoenix Kin (5e Race) Traits are poorly worded.
Phykke (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Pictsie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Plains Reaver (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Planes Walker (5e Class) Class feature need to be properly worded. Also capatalization.
Plantling (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Podge (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Polar Owls (5e Race) Needs a run through. A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "your size is medium", "You are proficient in the Nature skill." not "You gain proficiency in Nature checks.", "Your Dexterity score increases by 2 and your Strength score decreases by 1." not " +2 Dexterity, -1 Strength", etc...
Polymorphed Dragon (5e Race) This race has capitalization errors, missing punctuation, improperly worded traits, and a host of other grammatical errors. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for the standard grammatical rules the wiki uses.
Pre-Bible Seraphim (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Prehistoric Circle (5e Subclass) Incorrect capitalization throughout. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Pren (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague in places. For example, languages/racial trait names/ability scores should be capitalized, special sights should not be, "ft" or "STR" should not be used as they are abbreviations and should be their full text, all creatures are proficient in their unarmed strikes, etc...
Priaced (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Primal Hunter (5e Class) Lacks punctuation, and the spelling in some places is atrocious.
Prismatic Knight (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the "per long rest" wording and has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Prophet (3.5e Prestige Class) See talk.
Protean (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Protector (5e Class) Uses the per rest wording.
Protector (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, spells are not capitalized, ability scores are as is Armor Class, etc... Consult the 5e Race Design Guide for help.
Prothean (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Psychic (5e Class) This class has several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Pugilist (3.5e Class) Terminology and wording need fixing (they fight with "little weapons"? :)
Pumpkin child (3.5e Race) Terminology issues throughout ("health points"?)
Concept:Pygmy Fox-folk (5e Race) Capitalization.
Pyrotechnician (5e Class) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
Qunari (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
R'lyeh Spawn (5e Class) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Chiropterus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Edentatus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Felis (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references as seen in the 5e Race Design Guide. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Marsupialus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Uses unknown terminology and poor trait placement throughout, size category should be under Size.
Raesokeran Mustilus (5e Race) "reptiles", "feat effects" are not 5e terms. "once per long rest" wording should not be used. Mustilus and Rodentus are not a first party language, explain it(script/ what it sounds like, etc) or use the first party languages. Incorrect capitalization throughout, consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Traits are vague and incorrectly worded throughout and should use the first party's wording.
Raesokeran Rodentus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Raesokeran Ungulus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Ursus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rag Doll, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rage Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rassakar (5e Race) Incorrect and vauge/unesscary wording throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Reaper Aasimar (5e Subrace) Incorrect capitalization and italicization throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Red Orc (5e Race) Words and phrases would be improved if their grammar and formatting better conformed to the norms of D&D 5th edition. E.g., race names like "Red Orc" are common nouns and as such should read "red orc." More guidance on this specifically can be found in the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Aside from this, there are many instances of terms which were present in previous editions, but aren't in 5th; e.g., "Balance, Ride, Escape Artist, Will save." "hp" is always spelled out as hit points, outside of creature stat blocks. Several traits are vague and confusingly worded, making it difficult to know precisely how they are intended to function; in particular, the Orcish Rage and Peon Cower.
Regressed Fists of Balance (5e Equipment) Needs a run through.
Religion (Raesokera Supplement) Should be checked over for grammar.
Researcher (5e Background) Abundant spelling/grammatical errors.
Rhylithic (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
River-Devil (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Roba (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Robot (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ronin of the Blade (3.5e Class) Grammar errors throughout.
Ronso (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rune Blade, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Rynogg (5e Race) Its confusing if the proper plural is "rynogg" or "rynoggs," as these seem to be used interchangeably.
Sacred Artist (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Salamander Faerie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, fae, heat damage, race name capitalization, size category capitalization, etc...
Salve-Maker (5e Class) Terminology issues, see talk page.
Samurai Religion (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Resources (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Warden (5e Class) There are numerous words or phrased Capitalized when standards dictated they should not be. Class names, background names, weapon names, and others are capitalized when they shouldn't be. Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize has further details.
Sangheili (Halo elites) Spelling and grammar need work.
Saru No Otoko (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Saurian (5e Race) Poor grammar throughout.
Scarecrow (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Sciurian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Scorpikis (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague and needs to be simplified. For example, race names aren't capitalized, size category reminders, as well as comments in brackets, aren't needed such as " (10ft x 10ft)" or "(they ARE weapons!)", words should be "hit point" not "hitpoint", "one" not "ONE", etc...
Seafolk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Seedling (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, alignments and spells aren't capitalized, spells should be italicized and link to the SRD, "once per rest" wording, "You are proficient in the Persuasion skill." not "You have proficiency in Persuasion.", etc...
Seeker (5e Race) Traits make little to no sense and need to abide by the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Seeker of Truth (5e Class) Class names, class features, and other many other words are capitalized when they shouldn't be. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Selachin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Selkie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You become proficient in athletics", "Your Wisdom score increases by 1 and your Charisma score increases by 2." not "Your wisdom score increases by 1 and your charisma score increases by 2", there is no such thing as a "base swim speed", what is vulnerable to hot climates? thirsty twice as fast? and other odd bits of wording throughout.
Sentinel (5e Class) See the talk page and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Sepulchral (5e Race) What is meant by "Whilst subterranean your speed is 20 feet" and other odd wording choices is unclear. The capitalization also needs to be improved, consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Servomancer (5e Class) Incorrect damage types.
Shade Diamond (5e Race) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Shade Elf (5e Subrace) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Shadow Pixie (3.5e Race) Multiple grammar errors
Shadow Stalker (5e Class) "1d20+background/race gp. "? Why not make that thieves' tools, since they are proficient with it. Spells should be in lower-case italics. Many features have awkward wording.
Shadowhunter (5e Class) Typos everywhere. Isn't consistent on how the class name should be written. The word "per" shouldn't be anywhere, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline)
Shadows to Steel (Shadow Power) needs touch-up of wording
Sharkin Skeleton (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
Shen Xin (5e Race) Several incorrect capitalizations and wording errors. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline).
Shifter Fey (5e Race) Poor wording throughout.
Shinobi (5e Class) spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors
Shub (5e Race) Wording needs improving. You don't have +1 to a "stat". You don't "force" a saving throw, and so on.
Sidhe, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Sidhe (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, spells shouldn't be capitalized and should be italicized, "Your Dexterity score increases by 1 and your Charisma score increases by 2." not "+2 Charisma, +1 Dexterity.", etc...
Sigil en Din (3.5e Equipment) Some areas could use stronger wording.
Sigmar's Fury (5e Equipment) Poor wording throughout.
Silver Mask (5e Equipment) It is hard understand what the actual mechanical effect this mask has. This page could benefit from a rewrite.
Skaven (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, Size is missing "Your size is Medium.", alignments shouldn't be capitalized as well as random words and text, toxins aren't a 5th edition term as is will save, all creatures have proficiency in their unarmed strikes(see phb errant), "Constitution" not "Con", etc...
Sky Mage, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous grammatical errors and overall has unclear wording, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class as a whole largely needs to be rewritten for clarification and proper terminology.
Sky Mage (5e Class) Class is excessively wordy. Consider moving Domain Spells to 5e Spells.
Slaughterer (5e Class) There are a number of grammatical, spelling, and capitalization errors that would benefit from a spellcheck. Some wording can be confusing: referring to class features as "skills," for example. Consult Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize, as items like class names are not normally capitalized.
Slimanoid Blorbs (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Sliver (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Such as languages, race names, alignment, size category, skills, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Slugfolk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Slyvarian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Snake Dagger (5e Subclass) Needs a run through for grammar.
Sombra Escura (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Soul Bound (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names and conditions aren't capitalized, etc...
Soul Phantom (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Soul Seeker (5e Class) This class's features need a rewrite for clarification and proper terminology. Consider explaining how features are activated, when/if they can only be used once and you must finish a short/long rest to use them again, and other things.
Spartan (5e Class) Words capitalized in the middle of sentences and frequent spelling errors on the subclasses.
Special Eyes Bloodline A number of spelling/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Spectral (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Speedster (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Speiran (5e Race) Spells should be italicized, not capitalized and ideally link to the SRD. Whirlwind should be worded like the dragonborns breath weapon.
Spell Blade, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) D&D wiki uses US English.
Spellfire Wielder (5e Class) This class's features are also not very descriptive of the actual mechanics in 5e that the class uses, and the class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Spiderfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. (editor's note, that's a huge issue, because I don't know American, so I'm not gonna be able to 'fix' my stuff).
Spilarin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Spirit Spear Chastiefol (5e Equipment) Same reason as above, no mechanical sense
Spirit Walker (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/wording/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Spontaneous Gnome Shadow Illusionist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) Hard to read in some places.
Spooky Curse (5e Curse) Many grammatical or terminological errors. "Physical" is not a damage type. Who is the "they/their" whose bones you are seeing? How and why are you damaging yourself? "Self harm" isn't a good enough explanation.
Spynkazaka (5e Race) Race names and alignments shouldn't be capitalized.
Stained Half-Elf (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are proficient in the Arcana skill." not "Stained Elves gain proficiency in the Arcana skill"
Stand User (5e Class) The abilities are confusing, to the degree they cannot be understood.
Star Blade of Wonder of Tritones (5e Equipment) Wording is a bit weak in places.
Star Warriors (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Starforger (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The features need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Stick of Lashing (3.5e Equipment) Some weak wording.
Stoatlet (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Stormborn (5e Class) Revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "1st level" instead of "level 1." Consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Sukkan-Alsama (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Sunbright (5e Equipment) This weapon and its effects don't really may much sense and could benefit from a rewrite. This weapon also has several minor grammatical errors found throughout the page.
Sunsworn Caster (5e Class) This class mentions the movement action, solar fire damage, has round counting, and uses the "per short/long rest" wording among other things. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Super Hero (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling. A lot of terms are contracted or abbreviated when they shouldn't be.
Swampert (5e Race) Some traits could be worded better.
Swarm Golems (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Swashbuckler, Variant (5e Class) Uses "per x rest" wording.
Swift's Inquisitor (5e Class) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Sword Spirit (5e Race) Basical capitalization, grammar, and spelling. For example, uncapitalized sentences, "it's" when it should be "its", "effect" when it should be "affect", race names shouldn't be capitalized. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wording for the traits needs to be improved, for example, instead of saying, you don't need to point it should say that you don't require the somatic components of the spell.
Sword of Dismemberment (5e Equipment) It could use some 5e-ification, and would benefit from less complexity.
Synth (5e Race) This race has numerous instances of improper grammar and the race's traits should largely be clear and concise. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
T-1000 (5e Creature) features/traits are not worded properly such as regeneration. When are the hit points gained? Is there action associated with creating weapons for natural weapons?
Tactician (5e Subclass) Many Traits are poorly worded.
Taninim (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Templar (3.5e Class) Grammar needs improving.
Tenno/Warframe (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ternothirl (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, Race names and spells shouldn't be capitalized, mod instead of modifier, multiplication in racial traits shouldn't be there, etc...
Terry Crews (5e Deity) Vague, and open to different interpretations. See talk page.
Tesso (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Tevi (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Tevi are Medium size class creatures.", "Your Constitution score increases by 1." not "Your Constitution increases by 1.", conditional advantages should be worded like the dwarves Stonecunning trait, use "feet" instead of "ft", etc...
The 6D (5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving (for example, Constitution and DC should be capitalized)
The Bar-Tir (5e Race) A number of spelling/ grammatical/ punctuation/ capitalization/ italicization/ wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
The Devoid (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Perception skill." not "You are proficient with the Wisdom (Perception) skill", "Your Charisma score increases by 2 and your Wisdom score increases by 1." not "Your Charisma decreases by 2, your Intellegence decreases by 1, while your Wisdom increases by 3 but cannot go over 20.", etc...
The Gentlemen (5e Class) The class should not use the per short/long rest wording. There area also a few instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
The True Samurai (3.5e Class) Class names and weapon names are not proper nouns.
The Unapprochable East (3.5e Sourcebook) Spelling and grammar need working on. Could to with an introductory paragraph.
The Witcher (3.5e Class) Some work needs doing improving the language and terminology. I've read through Witcher Styles twice and it's incomprehensible to me.
The crypt (4e Quest) Some basic spelling, grammar and formatting would help.
The dark-one (5e Race) Overall grammar would benefit from revision. Punctuation and capitalization is preferably used.
Therianthrope (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Theurge (3.5e Class) Poor spelling and grammar throughout.
Threat Minimization Charm (5e Charm) This charm can be used as a reaction to what? Reactions have to have a specified trigger. "Fine" is not a size category in 5E. "Per long rest".
Thunder Cleaves (3.5e Prestige Class) Abilities are not written out for most of the progression.
Thundercat (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. Race names shouldn't be capitalized, Claws should be worded like the tabaxi natural weapon, It is "d4" not "D4"
Thunderous Roar (5e Spell) This spell would benefit from using proper 5e wording.
Tiger Anthrolupe (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Tiki-Taka (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Many of the traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, advantages should be written like the stonecunning trait, spells should be italicized and not capitalized, traits/ability score improvement should be fully written, etc...
Timber! (5e Equipment) Comments and design-related questions belong on the talk page, not in the description of an item.
Timebender (5e Class) Features are poorly worded.
Timekeeping Chronomancer (5e Class) This page was copy and pasted here. Many instances of "chronomancer" should be replaced with "timekeeping chronomancer."
Tinkerer (5e Class) Some features could use rewording.
Tlincalli A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation/ notes. For example, the size category isn't given, "When you aren't wearing armor, your AC is 11 + your Dexterity modifier. You can use your natural armor to determine your AC if the armor you wear would leave you with a lower AC. A shield's benefits apply as normal while you use your natural armor. " not "natural armor of 11+str.mod.", "Your Strength score increases by 2, and your Dexterity score increases by 1." not "Your strength score increases by 2, your dexterity score increases by 1, and your constitution increases by 1.", etc...
Toosh (5e Race) Traits needs to be fully written out and worded - Ability Score Improvement, Language, spelling, grammar, capitalization, etc
Trap Tinkerer (5e Class) Has one or more grammatical errors in every single sentence.
Treant, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, race names, and alignments shouldn't be capitalized, "mod" should be "modifier", etc. The Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) should help with some of the incorrect wording.
Tremorian (5e Race) Race names shouldn't be capitalized, size categories should be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Ability score improvements and langauges should be full written out as per the PHB.
Trolling (5e Race) Requires description/fluff
True Wight (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
TruthWeaver (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline). This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Tsuchigumo (5e Race) Traits need to be fully written out - langauge, ability score improvement, etc.
Turtonator (5e Race) ASI says increase modifier, uses wrong saving throw
Tychomancer (5e Class) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Tzaangors (5e Race) Savage Beak should use the same wording as the Lizardfolk race in VGtM and it definitely should not be a bonus action. Race names aren't capitalized. Size categories, languages and ability scores are capitalized.
Uchiha (3.5e Race) Grammar and descriptions need improving.
Undead Sharkin (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
Unliving Savant (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need work.
Unmade (5e Race) This race has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Uroa (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague, written like casual conversation, or incomplete.
Uruk (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. Several broken sentences and incomplete wording.
Valinor Guard (3.5e Class) See above
Vampire (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names are not capitalized, arbitrary rule reminders, "Constitution" not "Con", "modifier" not "mod", "You regain use of this trait once you complete a long rest." not "once per long rest", etc...
Vampyre (5e Class) Full of spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
Vanguard (5e Class) This class has several unclear features, also there is no term for physical saving throws and free actions in 5e. See the wiki's Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Variabilli (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Vasharian (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Vastaya (5e Race) "You can use this once per short rest," and other unconventional phrases would benefit from revision.
Vatranite (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, race names aren't capitalized, "Your Dexterity, Wisdom and Charisma scores each increase by 1." not "Vatranites receive a +1 to Charisma, Dexterity, and Wisdom.", etc...
Vecna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vecna". Could use rewording.
Veilwalkers (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Vellus (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "they are usually on the tall side of medium", basic capitalization, etc...
Virite (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help as it highlights issues present such as races names being capitalized and use of "it's" instead of "its".
Virtue (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names aren't capitalized, it should be once you've completed a long rest not once per long rest(see PHB errata), "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "Your Wisdom score increases by 2." not "Gain + 2 to Wisdom.", etc...
Vitae (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or incomplete.
Vitreon (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Vizison (4e Race) Sentence syntax/grammar needs work.
Void Archer (3.5e Class) Description is grammatically poor, nonsensical in places.
Voodoist (5e Class) Requires large amounts of grammatical help in virtually every area.
Vulcan (5e Race) The traits need to be reworded in order meet 5th edition standards. See how traits are worded in the Players Handbook or if you don't have that on hand the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) can assist. The 5e Race Design Guide and the Help:Improving,_Reviewing,_and_Removing_Templates should also help to inform site/game standards.
Warchief (5e Class) You should try and avoid giving static bonuses, and the class should avoid using the X per short or long rest wording. There is also no resistance to ranged attacks and numerous other features have poor wording or simply have terms not descripted in 5e or D&D. See the Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and the 5e Class Design Guide. It might also help to read up on 5e through the PHB.
Warrior of Fenris (5e Class) Incomplete sentences and grammar issues found throughout the page. Also, some features are worded in odd and confusing ways.
Wasserkind (5e Race) A number of bolding/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague, use incorrect wording or references terminology that doesn't exist.
Wastelander (3.5e Class) Writing is poor.
Way of Thunder and Lightning (5e Subclass) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Way of the Vengful Fist (5e Subclass) Grammar, spelling and formatting needs significantly improving.
WereWorg (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Your base size is medium.", "Your Dexterity score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "As a Wereworg, you gain a +2 bonus to Dexterity and a +1 bonus to Constitution.", etc...
Were human (5e Disease) The two variable game types need to be explained with mechanics.
Werebear (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Werebear (5e Subrace) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Werewolf, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Uses unknown/incorrect terminology such as full round action. Traits are wordy/unnecessary and need to be tightened up.
Whirling Axes (3.5e Equipment) Poor wording in many places.
White Cleric (3.5e Class) grammar needs some work.
Windwalker (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the X times per day wording or per long rest. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Wolf Fey (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Wolf Walker (5e Race) Needs a run through for grammar, specifically capitalization.
Word of the Lord (5e Equipment) The grammar needs a run through.
Wrestler (5e Class) The class has unclear wording and grammatical errors throughout(class names shouldn't be capitalized, there are a few instances of improper punctuation, and the class should not use the "per long rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts).
Wyrm-Dragonborn Class (5e Class) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Xenomorph Life Cycle (5e Class) Class names are not capitalized, many features' effects are unclear/not properly descripted, and the class overall has numerous other example of improper grammar and terminology. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Xilan Warrior (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Yalu (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation/ notations.
Yegul (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Yith (5e Race) The Great Race bits need to be removed where appropriate. Telepathy needs to be its own trait not in the language section. Skill check advantages should be specific, see Stonecunning. Claws should ideally use the same wording as the Tabaxi's natural weapon.
Yondu (5e Class) Features could use a run through.
Yuki Onna (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "temporary difficult terrain", "charm effects", and "movement penalty" are not 5th edition terms. Spells, alignments, damage types, and race names are not capitalized. "Your Wisdom score increases by 2." not "Wisdom increase of 2", etc...
User:ZarHakkar/Folk Deity (5e Class) Improper use of terms: per hour regeneration isn't a thing in 5e, remove uses of ellipses, Faith (level 9) implies that people didn't know whether the character existed or not (have they been invisible? why don't people know they exist? or have they just not met yet?), Divine Demiplane (level 12) lets you create new demiplanes but doesn't let you visit ones you've previously made, Manifest Destiny (level 19) let's you stay in Manifest Destiny form for 30 minutes which is then brought down to a minute and a half (15 rounds, at six seconds a round) with Ascended Deity (level 20), teleport speed isn't a thing, et cetera.
Zhefreet Ahsri (5e Race Variant) Ability wording is incorrect.
Ziurkis (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "You are proficient in the Arcana skill." not "You gain proficiency in Arcana checks.", "Your Constitution score increases by 2." not " You gain +2 to your Strength.", Thieves Cant isn't that kind of language and shouldn't be a racial option to learn, Thaumaturgy is a cantrip, all characters are proficient in unarmed strikes, item capacity and bite attack are not 5th edition terminology, etc...
Zombie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, alignments and cantrips aren't capitalized, "Your size is Small or Medium." not "Small or Medium", etc...
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