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Page Name Notes
Abstraction (5e Race) Incomplete/vague or unnecessarily wordy wording throughout and incorrect capitalization in several places. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Airrans (5e Race) Grammatical errors throughout the page and a number of traits aren't worded correctly.
Alastor (5e Equipment) This weapon has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Alien Grey (5e Race) The wording needs improvement in the race aspect.
All Out Attack (5e Variant Rule) Under 5e rules, it's unclear what is meant by, "A PC must use all of their actions to initiate the all out attack." Normally a player-character only has one action per turn. Does this somehow sacrifice actions on future turns?
Alternian Troll (5e Race) Incomplete/Vague wording in a number of places. "+1 to Strength" should be "Your Constitution score increases by 1.", etc. SRD referencing missing throughout. See the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalizefor help.
Amulet of Storage (5e Equipment) "Status effects" isn't a defined term, and the section on how a creature is affected while in this pocket dimension needs a rewrite for clarification and proper terminology.
Anime Girl (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Antilonoid (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Arborial (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Arcane Diffusion Bomb (5e Spell) Many grammatical errors persist and would benefit from revision: "20D8+150" should be "20d8 + 150"; words like "Spend one Hour Gathering Arcane" shouldn't be capitalized; etc. Please consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Arkin (5e Race) there are grammatical errors and wording issues on this page that needs to be addressed before this can be considered a completed work.
Armament Mage, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armament Mage (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armordillo (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Asari (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing references in several places. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Astral Angels (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Astéri (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/formatting errors throughout. Missing references in several places. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Barraki (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Beast Men (5e Race) Traits are worded incorrectly/poorly, consult the 5e Race Design Guide.
Beastkin (5e Race) The wording for various traits are poorly written/vague.
Biomage (3.5e Class) Formatting and wording needs some work.
Black Blood (5e Class) Typos and capitalization errors everywhere. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for more info.(For example, class names are not capitalized)
Black Blood Angel (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Black Blooded (5e Class) Terminology needs much improvement.
Blood Elf, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Blood Lord (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Body Guard, Whole Hog (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper capitalization and several unclear features. This class also mentions "free actions" and uses the "per long rest" wording. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Book of Tech (3.5e Sourcebook)wip its sub-pages have severe grammar and spelling issues.
Book of Time (5e Equipment) This item has round counting and should not use the once per day wording.
Boon of Monastic Tea (5e Epic Boon) teas are not stylized in 5e format. "Your Intelligence and Wisdom score increase by 2." 5e does not use round counting unless necessary. The durations should be 1 round, 1 minute, 1 hour, etc. Punctuation marks missing and HP needs to be spelled out
Brawler (5e Class) Grammar needs improvement. In particular, the page should be gone through and proper nouns, headers, and the beginnings of sentences need to be capitalized.
Cambion (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Cannibal (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Celestial Hunter (5e Class) Writing, terminology and mechanics are all rough.
Children of Ill-Omens (5e Race) Incomplete, and hard to read.
Chiropterans (5e Race) The lore and the racial traits individually and together don't make much sense. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Chozo Power Armor (5e Equipment) This item should have a defined duration on its effects(instead of after a long rest, you gain temporary hit points), magical item's properties shouldn't be tied to your rest cycles, and instances of per rest should be changed to "the armor regains all uses of this effect at dawn" or something similar. This armor also has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear properties, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Chronarch, Timelord (3.5e Race) Needs a lil' spruce up with capitalisation an' whatnot
Cijelese (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Cliopodans (Pathfinder Race) This race's ability and alternate traits could use being more succinct and to-the-point.
Clockwork (5e Class) Grammar and wording issues are still present.
Coldskin, Variant (5e Race) The traits are badly worded and use incorrect terminology.
Coleoptera (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Commission Hunter (5e Class) This class has numerous grammatical errors and unclear wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) as well.
Complete Werewolf Overhaul (3.5 template variant) I understand this is a WIP, but please take care with your terminology ("mental attributes"?)
Concubus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Corollin (5e Race) A number of fairly simple grammatical rules are broken throughout the page.
Courage-Seeker (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Cranes (4e Race) Stories and descriptions need better wording.
Crown of Zion (5e Equipment) capitalization and typo errors
Crusaders (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Crystalics (3.5e Race) Grammar needs work.
Crystallite (5e Race) traits that do something are missing how they do it, action, bonus actions, etc. SRDs missing
Cubi (3.5e Class) "balanced Tire 3 class."? This is full of typos. Spell list is messy and doesn't adequately explain where the spells can be found.
Cuisiner (5e Class) See talk page
Cyborgs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar needs a lot of work.
Dark Knight, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) The wording on the class features is a bit ropy.
Dark Knight FF (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Death Dealer (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Death Knight (4e Class) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Death Knight Minions (4e Creature) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Demiplanic orb (5e Equipment) Please have a look at spells in the PHB to see if any could be used. 5e SRD:Demiplane springs to mind.
Demon Brawler (3.5e Class) Grammar and terminology need much improvement.
Demon Weapon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Diabolic Soul Tiefling, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Disco Knight (3.5e Class) Some spelling errors.
Dodgey Boi (5e Optimized Character Build) This character build mentions priests(clerics), and generally does not follow Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dominion Overlord (5e Class) see talk talk page and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Doom Guy, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Doomborn (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Dragon (5e Race) Additionally, 5e races should be written in second person, i.e. describing or addressing "you", not "the dragon" or "the player".
Dragon Eater (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling needs improving. Still mentions god devouring in the lead sentence and in other places from a hasty cut-and-paste.
Dragon Knight, 3rd Variant (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Dragon Knight (5e Class) This class has capitalization errors, uses the "per long rest" wording, and overall has unclear wording. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dragon Rider, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Dragon Slayer, Variant (5e Class) The class has unclear wording and grammatical errors throughout and should not use the "per long rest" wording. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dragon Warrior (3.5e Class) Formatting and grammar need improving
Dragonkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Drakki (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Drell (5e Race) Grammar and wording issues throughout.
Dunderling (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Elderwood (5e Race) The traits are largely unclear and/or worded incorrectly. See the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) to see how traits are worded and structured correctly. Issues like "+1 to Constitution" or "Age. 3,000 years" are also present.
Electric Guitar (5e Equipment) Grammar mistakes throughout the entire page, especially spelling.
Element Bender (5e Class) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Missings references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and 5e Class Design Guide for help.
Elemental Adept (5e Class) Grammar needs improving, many traits need rewording
Elemental Assassin (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Elementalist V2.0 (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Eliksni (5e Race) Capitalization would benefit from standardization. Race names and spell names in D&D 5e are lowercase, for instance. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Elixra (3.5e Deity) Spelling needs improving
Empath (5e Class) Needs to adhere with Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Entings (3.5e Race) Grammar is confusing in places; redlinks
Espada (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Evomancer (3.5e Class) Grammar and formatting needs working on.
Fary (5e Race) This page lacks the correct wording for various things such as ability scores("Your Dexterity increases by 2." not "+2 Dexterity"), traits(), languages(can they speak, read or write these languages or just understand them? This isn't clear.), etc.
Fey Prairie Dog (5e Race) The fast majority of traits are wording incorrectly, vague/poorly and this page, in general, lacks basic capitalization and grammatical standards.
Flame Tempest (5e Feat) This feat has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Free-Runner (3.5e Class) Needs wikilinks, the bonus feats for example.
Frost Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Frost Knight (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See the talk page, Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize, and Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) for info on the class's wording problems and how they can be fixed.
Garotte of the Cenobite (5e Equipment) This item has capitalization errors and some unclear wording, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Gems (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Gestalt /Warrior generic class (3.5e Optimized Character Build) There's no need to shout.
Gilldren (5e Race) The wording of this page is broken and vague throughout. Consider reading the 5e Race Design Guide that outlines a step by step guide to filling out the template of your race.
Golem (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Gorger (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Gormkaji Orcs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Grave Knight (5e Class) Needs to be more careful with wording. For example Empower's "ability used" reads like it works with ability checks. Also missing a summary
Gravity Knight (5e Class) Terminology needs improving (e.g. "successful melee strike" should be "when you hit with a melee weapon attack"; 5e doesn't have "Standard Actions" or a "staggered" condition; "Str save" should be "Strength saving throw", etc)
Gwlithenni (3.5e Race) See talk page, pronunciation needs clarifying
Half-Basilisk (5e Race) The trait wording needs work and due to the vagueness of such wording the balance of this page is equally as vague. In addition, the page requires SRD references(see 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing).
Half-Douen (5e Race) Trait wording is vague and broken throughout. Read the 5e Race Design Guide.
Half-Fairy (5e Race) Trait wording is off/covoluted, see how traits are written in the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline).
Half-Goblin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Hanyo (5e Race)
Harpie (3.5e Race) Wording needs some work. Confusingly similar to a harpy.
Hellraiser (5e Subclass) This subclass has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Hidden Skills (5e Reward) Numerous effects are unclear, inadequately explained, or simply don't follow Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Hidoran (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Holy Kick (3.5e Maneuver) Wording needs improving.
Hulking Rage (5e Feat) This feat's effect is still unclear in places.
Hunter, Variant (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class should also not use the per short/long rest wording.
Iksar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Incorporeal Skeleton (5e Creature) Is this "Incorporeal Skeleton" or "Tormented Soul"?
Infinium, Gun Mage (3.5e Class) Riddled with grammatical errors and poor terminology
Inkling, 2nd Variant (5e Race) The wording/formatting/grammar is funny/broken in several places throughout the page.
Joy Martial Artist (5e Class) This class has numerous examples of capitalization errors and unclear wording. Many features do not say how they can be used, whiles others like Painless don't make any sense. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Kabaneri (5e Race) English grammar, and Help: When to Italicize and Capitalize are not followed.
Ki Fighter (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Kitsune, Variant (5e Race) There are grammatical errors which deviate from standards; see Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize The wording in several places would be improved if it conformed to 5e norms. Ideally the image would have not only an author and site, but a url link to the page from which it originates.
Kitsune half-blood (5e Race Variant) Basic capitalization, grammar and spelling mistakes.
Klyntar Host (5e Class) Some odd grammar makes some of these features difficult to follow
Knight, Teoryran (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Krayak (Pathfinder Environment) the one sentence in the grammar error box has grammar errors
Kryptonian (D20 Modern Class) Wording needs improving.
Kurotsume (revised) Spelling errors.
Lamia, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Lamia (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British. The page would also benefit greatly from using SRD referencing cited in the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing.
Lancer of the Shattered Plane (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Landless Lord (3.5e Class) Grammar is all over the place.
Languages (3.5e Other) Formatting, spelling, and grammar need overhauling.
Lasher (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Lemurian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Leprechaun (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Lichkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Life Force Fighter (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Lilin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Living Artifice (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Living Cartoon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Living Metal (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Living Weapon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Lizardfolk, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Lizardfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Lombax (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Loose Limbs (3.5e Variant Rule) Grammar needs improving
Lost Child (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Lost Elf (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Lucario, Variant (5e Race) The sentence structure throughout this page is still really rough. Some of the traits are also confusing in the way that they're worded.
Lupox (5e Race) Number of grammatical errors throughout.
Machine Doll, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Machine Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
MagicMystic (3.5e Class) Bizarre wording. What does "You have access to all the spells to the grade that equals your intelligence modifier" mean, for example?
Magic and Magic Items (City-States In Chaos Supplement) Prose needs some work
Magician Overlord (5e Class) This class has several capitalization errors and many features have unclear wording. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Master of the Sword (5e Class) Nouns that are not proper nouns should not be capitalized ("human", "master of the sword", etc). Headers should not be in bold, and should not be all-caps.
MechMaster (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Megalosaurasapians (5e Race)
Menace (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and a few unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Mind Field (5e Class) A lot of this is hard to follow. It starts with "When creating a field the Mind Field, and up to 49 other creatures..." - wuh? Maybe explain what a "field" is first; and it's a bit confusing because the name of the feature ("field") is similar to the name of the class ("mind field").
Minecrafter (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar throughout needs fixing.
Monohue Magician (4e Paragon Path) Elemental Summoning needs clarification - what do the question marks mean?
Moonborn (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Morfan (5e Creature) This creature has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Mounted Heavy Repeating Crossbow (5e Equipment) Needs a rewrite for clarification and proper 5e terminology. See combat and weapon properties.
Movanic Deva (3.5e Racial Class) Does not read through well.
Multiplectic (5e Race) grammar and formatting mistakes
Mytuos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Naga (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Nai Khanom Tom (3.5e Class) Class features call the class a pugilist, yet that isn't the name of the class. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Nano Spider (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need improving. Class names are not capitalized; the class repeatedly does not capitalize the beginning of sentences and has several instances of improper or missing punctuation marks, among other grammatical errors.
Neko (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Nephilim, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nerubian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Night Blood (5e Class) See talk page
Nightbleeders (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Nightmare (3.5e Race) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
Niphin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout and the sentences are broken up into multiple lines unnecessarily. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nocturne (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
NorthSky (3.5e Pantheon) Try paragraphs; get rid of the camelCase
Nökken (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Oath of the Duelist (5e Subclass) Grammar and phrasing of features not typical of 5th edition design and the grammar throughout the page is poor. Bloodied is not a condition in 5e or needs linked to homebrew material.
Obelisk of many things (5e Trap) Bad grammar throughout.
One For All (5e Feat) Feats shouldn't have a ton of miscellaneous background info and this feat should really be separated into paragraphs or separate bullet points.
Onyx Skeleton (5e Race) This race should not use the per day wording and should instead use, you regain use of this trait after you finish a short/long rest. This race also has numerous instances of improper grammar throughout, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Oral Vore (3.5e Feat) Not clearly worded. Mechanics need clarification. Capitalisation issues. Stars and weird sentence structures everywhere.
Overlord, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Painless Death (5e Trap) Rife with random capitals and erroneous grammar.
Paranoid Agent (5e Background) grammar
Path of the Lumberjack (5e Subclass) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Pheonix born (fixed) Writing needs improving.......Yeah but I think it is perfectly able to be used in any game as is.(ArtixVonKreiger)
Pillar of Flame (5e Spell) This spell has incorrect wording in a few places and insufficient description in others. See 5e SRD:Flame Strike for how to properly word this spell.
Predator (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Primal Hunter (5e Class) Lacks punctuation, and the spelling in some places is atrocious.
Prismatic Knight (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the "per long rest" wording and has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Prophet (3.5e Prestige Class) See talk.
Pseudolich (5e Race) A few spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Psychic (5e Class) This class has several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Pugilist (3.5e Class) Terminology and wording need fixing (they fight with "little weapons"? :)
Pumpkin child (3.5e Race) Terminology issues throughout ("health points"?)
Pyrotechnician (5e Class) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
R'lyeh Spawn (5e Class) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Felis (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references as seen in the 5e Race Design Guide. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Rag Doll, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Rag Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Rallying Shot (5e Equipment) This item should use proper terminology from 5e.
Raptorborn (5e Race) Spelling needs improving (it's "raptor" for a start).
Rassakar (5e Race) Incorrect and vauge/unesscary wording throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Real Dragon (5e Race) Grammar and punctuation need much improvement.
Rebellion (5e Equipment) Needs a rewrite for clarification.
Rhylithic (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Ring of Famine (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and holy avenger for how to properly word rarity and attunement.
Ring of Pestilence (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and holy avenger for how to properly word rarity, attunement, and spells.
Ring of War (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and holy avenger for how to properly word rarity and attunement.
Robes of the Fallen (5e Equipment) This item has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Robot (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Ronin of the Blade (3.5e Class) Grammar errors throughout.
Ronso (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Rune Blade, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Saberon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Salve-Maker (5e Class) Terminology issues, see talk page.
Samurai Religion (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Resources (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Sangheili (Halo elites) Spelling and grammar need work.
Scarecrow (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Sciurian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Sentinel (5e Class) See the talk page and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Shadow (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Shadow Pixie (3.5e Race) Multiple grammar errors
Shadow Stalker (5e Class) "1d20+background/race gp. "? Why not make that thieves' tools, since they are proficient with it. Spells should be in lower-case italics. Many features have awkward wording.
Shadow Walker (5e Class) This class should not use the once per long rest wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline). Also, there is numerous instances of improper terms, wording, and grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Shadowhunter (5e Class) Typos everywhere. Isn't consistent on how the class name should be written. The word "per" shouldn't be anywhere, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline)
Shi Yu Scarf (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Several of this item's effects are also unclear or not adequately descripted as well.
Simulate Magic Item (5e Feat) Wording and terminology needs improving, e.g. "once for long rest" should be "you can use this feature again after you finish a long rest". "Main Attribute bonus" isn't a thing, etc.
Sky Mage, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous grammatical errors and overall has unclear wording, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class as a whole largely needs to be rewritten for clarification and proper terminology.
Sky Mage (5e Class) Class is excessively wordy. Consider moving Domain Spells to 5e Spells.
Slaughterer (5e Class) There are a number of grammatical, spelling, and capitalization errors that would benefit from a spellcheck. Some wording can be confusing: referring to class features as "skills," for example. Consult Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize, as items like class names are not normally capitalized.
Slither sling (5e Equipment) Better wording needed.
Sliver (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Soul Seeker (5e Class) This class's features need a rewrite for clarification and proper terminology. Consider explaining how features are activated, when/if they can only be used once and you must finish a short/long rest to use them again, and other things.
Spartan, Variant (5e Class) Class names are not capitalized, and the class has a number of grammatical errors throughout. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Spectral (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Speedster (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Spell Blade, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) D&D wiki uses US English.
Spellfire Wielder (5e Class) This class's features are also not very descriptive of the actual mechanics in 5e that the class uses, and the class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Spiderfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Spilarin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Stand User (5e Class) Inappropriate language needs to be removed. The abilities are confusing, to the degree they cannot be understood.
Star Warriors (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Sunsworn Caster (5e Class) This class mentions the movement action, solar fire damage, has round counting, and uses the "per short/long rest" wording among other things. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Super Hero (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling. A lot of terms are contracted or abbreviated when they shouldn't be.
Sword of Vanchilia (5e Equipment) Grammar needs improving.
Synth (5e Race) This race has numerous instances of improper grammar and the race's traits should largely be clear and concise. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Templar (3.5e Class) Grammar needs improving.
Temptress (3.5e Class) Variety of minor wording issues going on here.
The Avatar of Hope (5e Creature) Wording needs improvment.
The Dual Paths of Roskenlan (5e Equipment) This item has numerous instances of unclear mechanics among being largely interminable in places.
The Gentlemen (5e Class) The class should not use the per short/long rest wording. There area also a few instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
The Shaed of Shadows (5e Equipment) This item has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
The Slayer's Guide to Trolls (DnD Other) That whole spelling and grammar thing.
The Soups (5e Disease) Diseases are not capitalized and this page has a number of other capitalization/other wording errors.See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
The True Samurai (3.5e Class) Class names and weapon names are not proper nouns.
The Unapprochable East (3.5e Sourcebook) Spelling and grammar need working on. Could to with an introductory paragraph.
The Way of Nine (5e Equipment) This weapons's properties are nigh incompressible and largely need to be rewritten for clarification and proper terminology.
The Witcher (3.5e Class) Some work needs doing improving the language and terminology. I've read through Witcher Styles twice and it's incomprehensible to me.
The crypt (4e Quest) Some basic spelling, grammar and formatting would help.
Theurge (3.5e Class) Poor spelling and grammar throughout.
Thunder Cleaves (3.5e Prestige Class) Abilities are not written out for most of the progression.
Thunderbolt (5e Equipment) The writing quality needs significant improvement. Grammar, spelling and terminology.
Trap Bowl (5e Trap) Needs a rewrite for clarification and proper terminology.
Tritomati (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Trolling (5e Race) Trolling Taunt starts off fine, but the ideas get muddled about halfway through, consider rephrasing.
TruthWeaver (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline). This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Twilight (5e Equipment) Few minor wording issues throughout.
Uchiha (3.5e Race) Grammar and descriptions need improving.
Undead Longbow (5e Equipment) Needs a rewrite for clarification and terminology. I've done the first few sentences.
Unitar (5e Race) There are a number of grammatical and capitalization which would benefit from correction.
Unliving Savant (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need work.
Unmade (5e Race) This race has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Valados (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Valinor Guard (3.5e Class) See above
Vampire, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Vampyre (5e class) Full of spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
Vanguard (5e Class) This class has several unclear features, also there is no term for physical saving throws and free actions in 5e. See the wiki's Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Vastaya (5e Race) "You can use this once per short rest," and other unconventional phrases would benefit from revision.
Veilwalkers (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Viktor's Brand Of Undeath (5e Spell) 5e avoids static bonus/penalties to abilities. Instead use advantage
Vizison (4e Race) Sentence syntax/grammar needs work.
Void Archer (3.5e Class) Description is grammatically poor, nonsensical in places.
Voidblade (5e Class) Garbled in some places, features are poorly worded. For example I have no idea what Gate Onslaught does.
Vulcan (5e Race) The traits need to be reworded in order meet 5th edition standards. See how traits are worded in the Players Handbook or if you don't have that on hand the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) can assist. The 5e Race Design Guide and the Help:Improving,_Reviewing,_and_Removing_Templates should also help to inform site/game standards.
Waraxe of the Dwarvish Lords (5e Equipment) This weapon mentions numerous mechanics not included in 5e. See the talk page.
Warchief (5e Class) There is no once per combat term in 5e, there is only standard durations, you should try and avoid giving static bonuses, and the class should avoid using the X per short or long rest wording. There is also no resistance to ranged attacks and numerous other features have poor wording or simply have terms not descripted in 5e or D&D. See the Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and the 5e Class Design Guide. It might also help to read up on 5e through the PHB.
Warmage 2.0 (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Warrior of Fenris (5e Class) Incomplete sentences and grammar issues found throughout the page. Also, some features are worded in odd and confusing ways.
Wastelander (3.5e Class) Writing is poor.
Way of the Silent Step (5e Subclass) This article would benefit from capitalization that meets the standards of D&D Wiki. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Way of the Vengful Fist (5e Subclass) Grammar, spelling and formatting needs significantly improving.
White Cleric (3.5e Class) grammar needs some work.
Wielder of a Legendary Weapon (5e Class) I don't think the introduction and DMing Speak with Dead are well worded
Wildkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Wilt and Bloom (5e Equipment) The grammar makes the benefits a bit confusing to read, and terminology is incorrect in a few places. "and will be an amendment that her wielder free the slaves"?
Windwalker (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the X times per day wording or per long rest. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Winterweiss (5e Equipment) Wording needs improving, for example the mixed third/second person grammar.
Wolf-Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Wolfir (5e Race) Traits need a rewrite for clarification and proper terminology.
Xilan Warrior (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Yata (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and remember the wiki uses the American English over British.
Ōkami (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
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