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Page Name Notes
+anima (3.5e Bloodline) Spelling and grammar needs improving throughout.
3 Stage Mass Combat (5e Variant Rule) This is incredibly cluttered with a huge number of grammatical and spelling errors that culminate in this being completely indecipherable.
Aakronus (5e Deity) Paragraphs and better grammar needed.
Alchemist of Transmutation (5e Class) Capitalization.
Aloii, Variant (5e Race) race names shouldn't be capitalized. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Altrohan (5e Creature) The description has grammatical errors, lack of capitalization, etc. and would benefit from a rewrite.
Alucard (5e Class) A handful of instances of incomplete wording and capitalization/grammatical issues.
Amphibimen (5e Race) Arbitary use of Italicization, skills/size need to be capitalized, race and subrace names should not be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are also several miswritten traits that should be cleaned up to match the first party wording.
Ancient Warforged (5e Race) Basic grammar issues. Refers to traits that don't exist. Everything after the walking speed under Speed should be its own trait. The wording for most of the traits is incorrect. For example, the natural weapons should use the same wording as the tabaxi's, Ancient History should use that similar to Stonecunning, Machine mind should use the wording for Keen Mind, Maintenance is totally vague("certain ancient arifacts???", etc...)
Animated Shield (5e Race) Spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors. Missing references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Anime Dragonborn (5e Race) A number of spelling and grammatical errors throughout.
Anime Girl (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Aragami (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Arborens, Variant (5e Race) Spin Bark is missing damage type. Resistance to being grappled?
Arcaedia (5e Race) Spectral Limbs is written and mechanically presented as if it were a class feature. I am unsure of which existing fiction this is attempting to replicate but this trait could be vastly simplified/ broken down and ideally should be.
Arcane Assassin (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for some help and see the talk page for several examples.
Arcane Lobber (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Arcania (5e Race) Incorrect capitalization and grammar usage
Ardalkhayan Gnomes (5e Subrace) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Arkin (5e Race) there are grammatical errors and wording issues on this page that needs to be addressed before this can be considered a completed work.
Armament Mage, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armament Mage (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Asari, Variant (5e Race) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Ascendant Tiefling (5e Race Variant) Doesn't use proper grammar throughout.
Ash ones (3.5e Race) The grammar and spelling in this article is lacking.
Awakened Zombie (5e Race) Needs some grammatical/wording fixes as well as some of the more basic capitilization issues fixed. See the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Balthazax (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Barraki (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Beast Men (5e Race) Traits are worded incorrectly/poorly, consult the 5e Race Design Guide.
Beastkin, Variant (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors. The whole tranformation traits need to be fixed wording wise. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Biomage (3.5e Class) Formatting and wording needs some work.
Black Blooded (5e Class) Terminology needs much improvement.
Blade Master, Variant (5e Class) Class names and certain other words are capitalized when they should not be. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Aside from this, several phrases would benefit from conforming to the norms of 5e. For example, "1st level" should replace "level 1," and the boons granted by a class are "features" as opposed to "abilities."
Bladedancer, 2nd Variant (5e Subclass) Does expertise has a definition in 5e? Uses per rest wording.
Blood Elf, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Blood Elf, 5th Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Bloodied Fallen Angel (5e Race) A number of basic grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written casually.
Bobo'gnung (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Boccob (3.5e Deity) "copied from Wikipedia .... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boccob#Description " should be reworded.
Book Dragon (5e Race) Many traits are not worded correctly.
Book of Tech (3.5e Sourcebook)wip its sub-pages have severe grammar and spelling issues.
Brawler (5e Class) Grammar needs improvement. It's level not lvl, Hit Points not Hp, 1d4 not 1D4,etc.
Build A God (5e Class) Numerous grammatical mistakes in its singular ability.
Bulwark, Variant (5e Class) The notes to the primary contributor all over this page need to be addressed, removed, or moved to the talk page.
Bushi (5e Class) "You may decide your Combat Form as a free action any time before combat starts" there are no free actions
"By maintaining a calm dispositon and defensive guard, you gauge your opponent without exposing yourself. No modifiers." what is no modifiers?
"When Focus is activated, you gain the ability to accumulate Fury stacks up to the maximum value; five. You start combat with the maximum amount, five." do I accumulate fury when focus is activated or do I start with 5 stacks? How do I activate focus?
"+3 ATK, limited to one Attack action per Initiative" is this suppose to read like a short rest cooldown feature?
"can be used for no focus cost once every short rest." needs to be reworded so it reads "Once you use this feature you must complete a short or long rest"
more examples throughout.
Candlefolk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Cannibal (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Cannon Fodder Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording is rather confusing.
Caribespeon (5e Race) "You have a flying speed of 6 double jumps" and other glaring errors.
Catfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Cavalier, charming (3.5e Prestige Class) Class names and class features are common nouns and generally shouldn't be capitalized. Some other odd capitalization meanders about, such as "Realms." Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Changeling, 3rd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are proficient in the Arcana, and Deception skills." not "you gain proficiency in these two skills: deception and Arcaca".
Chiasin Amoore (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Chick Thrower (5e Class) Abound with mis-spelled words, incomprehensible sentences, features, and other such problems.
Child Of Cosmos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Children of Ill-Omens (5e Race) Incomplete, and hard to read.
Chiropterans (5e Race) The lore and the racial traits individually and together don't make much sense. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Chosen (5e Class) It's a minor issue, but this content would be improved if more words and phrases followed 5e precedent. E.g., "13th level" is preferred over "level 13." Class names are common nouns and usually shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Chronomancer (5e Class) The whole think needs to be looked over for run on sentences. Periods are barely used and can cause confusion.
Chronomancer (5e Subclass) What is meant by "distortions in time" and "rests"? Be specific, use "short rest" and "long rest". Otherwise, these aren't 5e terms. The wording is odd throughout as well and the features don't really communicate a chronomancer/ wizard subclass.
Cliopodans (Pathfinder Race) This race's ability and alternate traits could use being more succinct and to-the-point.
Cloak of the Witch Queen (5e Equipment) There are grammar and capitalization errors. The features need to be rewritten to make them more clear.
Coleoptera (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/bolding errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
College of Time (5e Subclass) This page requires better wording due to an overreliance on the "For Examples" for consistency. The 14th level feature could simply state any d20 roll.
College of the Troublemaker (5e Subclass) Grammar problems all around. The features do not follow the 5e Class Design Guide.
Connected Twins (5e Race Variant) Capitalization and some wording.
Corellon Larethian (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corellon_Larethian" should be reworded.
Creative Genius (3.5e Prestige Class) Class names shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are some other unusual phrases which would benefit from revision, including lines like, "you must take 5 level."
Creature Features (5e Variant Rule) Incorrect capitalization, and wording throughout.
Creepy Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
CrossBreed (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English.
Crystalisk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Crystallite (5e Race) traits that do something are missing how they do it, action, bonus actions, etc. SRDs missing
Cubi (3.5e Class) "balanced Tire 3 class."? This is full of typos. Spell list is messy and doesn't adequately explain where the spells can be found.
Cyborgs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar needs a lot of work.
Dark Folk (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Dark Knight FF (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dark Spear (5e Equipment) DCs based on hit points is also "sloppy". There's a lot to keep track of or ask and consider when making an attack. This item is very dense. It would benefit from condensing if possible.
Darvatoura's Crazy Carrage (3.5e Equipment) Numerous spelling issues.
Dawn Rosepetal (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Daywalker (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, alignments aren't capitalized, Age/Alignment/Size should be fully written out, Basic sentence structuring, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", etc...
Dead Iron (3.5e Equipment) This is a mess to read and confusing.
Death Knight, 3rd Variant (5e Class) Needs a run through for wording, and especially abbreviations. Think I got most of them.
Death Knight, Variant (5e Subclass) Needs a run through for grammar, and wording.
Death Knight Minions (4e Creature) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Death Monarch (5e Class) Sentences should, have, ends, and no, commas allover. A general grammar cleanup is necessary.
Demiplanic orb (5e Equipment) Please have a look at spells in the PHB to see if any could be used. 5e SRD:Demiplane springs to mind.
Demon Brawler (3.5e Class) Grammar and terminology need much improvement.
Demon Whisperer (5e Class) Many features are worded in a confusing or vague way. Ideally, terms used would more closely following 5th edition precedent. There is minimal description that would benefit from expansion. See the talk page.
Demonkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Diabolic Soul Tiefling, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Dire Damage (5e Variant Rule) Spelling, grammar, and punctuation issues throughout.
Dire Death (5e Variant Rule) Spelling, grammar, punctuation, and terminology issues throughout.
Dire Diseases (5e Variant Rule) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
Dire Diseases and Curses (5e Variant Rule) Numerous spelling errors and erratic capitalization.
Disco Knight (3.5e Class) Some spelling errors.
Diverse Sorcerer (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) please see Natural Evoker (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) for an example of wording
Djin (5e Race) capitalization as per the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dominion Overlord (5e Class) Wording and terminology need significantly improving.
Doom Shaper (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording, and some miss-capitalization.
Doomcannon (5e Equipment) This weapon has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Doomed Undead (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Downtime Activities (Hyrule Supplement) Proofreading and spellchecking would be beneficial.
Draakra (5e Race) A number of grammatical/wording errors throughout. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "You are medium sized.", "You have advantage on saving throws against being knocked prone." not "You have advantage against being knocked prone.", etc...
Draconic Angel, Variant (5e Race) This race features identical wording to Draconic Angel in numerous areas. Charm features round counting.
Dragon Eater (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling needs improving. Still mentions god devouring in the lead sentence and in other places from a hasty cut-and-paste.
Dragon Fang (3.5e Equipment) Spell turning needs formalizing, perhaps just by saying you can cast SRD:Spell Turning so many times per day.
Dragon Warrior (3.5e Class) Formatting and grammar need improving
Dragonborn Angel (5e Subrace) Inncorrect capitalization/wording throughout. Damage types, movement types, armor, etc are not capitalized. "feet/foot" should be written instead of "ft".
Drakki (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Dread Fighter, Variant (5e Class) Class features need to state at which level they are gained.
Drow Stepmaker (3.5e Class) Diffult to read; poor flow, and some grammar.
User:Durza This needs to be in English; this appeared as spam to me before I realised it was a class page.
Dwarves, Sundered (3.5e Race) "This race was originally published in The Complete Book of Dwarves for AD&D 2nd Edition." should be reworded.
Earth Clan (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout such as alignments, race names, etc and vague traits written like notes when they should use first-party wording. Brackets should be avoided as traits should be written like full sentences. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Earth Kingdom (5e Race Variant) wording/capitalization errors. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. You should endeavor to use the same wording as the first party.
Ed Kid (5e Race) Requires a rewrite to use 5th edition terminology and many traits need to actually make sense.
Ehlonna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ehlonna#Description" should be reworded.
Eldritch Hunter (5e Class) So many sentence fragments and run-on sentences that it's difficult to read almost everything on this page.
Element Bender (5e Class) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Missings references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and 5e Class Design Guide for help.
Elemental Assassin (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Elemental Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Elementalist, 2nd Variant (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Elementalist (3.5e Class) The whole spell section should be simplified, or trimmed down.
Eliëis (3.5e Race) Some sections have poor flow, and would benefit from a revision.
Elsen (5e Race) The traits and most the race needs to be rewritten to work in 5th edition rather than whatever verse this is from. For example, natural weapons should be written as per the tabaxis or lizardfolks not as monster manual stat block attacks.
Emotions (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Empath (5e Class) Needs to adhere with Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Entings (3.5e Race) Grammar is confusing in places.
Erythnul (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erythnul" should be reworded.
Evomancer (3.5e Class) Grammar and formatting needs working on.
Evorian (5e Race) Traits needs to be worded with mechanical benefits. What does making out details on objects do?
Faenur (5e Race) Help in capitalization, grammar cleanup needed
Fallen Angel, Variant (5e Race) Traits need to be rewritten to mimic the first party as they are currently ineloquent and vague.
Fallen Divinity (5e Class) A number of spelling/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The features need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, skills should be capitalized, ft instead of feet, 8d4 not 8D4, damage types shouldn't be capitalized, etc...
Fary (5e Race) This page lacks the correct wording for various things such as ability scores("Your Dexterity increases by 2." not "+2 Dexterity"), traits(), languages(can they speak, read or write these languages or just understand them? This isn't clear.), etc.
Fennec, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "A fennecs size is medium", "You are proficient in the Perception and Survival skill." not "This gives you a proficiency towards all survival and perception skills.", etc...
Fennec (5e Race) Traits are incorrectly worded such as the natural weapons which should use the same wording as the tabaxi's. Several other issues that can be fixed by consulting the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ferengi (Star Trek Supplement) Wording needs corrected.
Fifth (5e Race) The traits need a name, and not mechanics in their titles. Wording does not follow standards, see the 5e Race Design Guide.
Fire Borne (First Form) (3.5e Equipment) Writing needs to be improved, the description is difficult to follow.
Fire Nation (5e Race Variant) Capitalization errors. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Fire Wolf Armor (5e Equipment) Lacking proper format, spelling is inconsistent.
Fixed Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording in the description needs improving.
Flame of Wrath (5e Equipment) This page is filled with incorrect terminology and confusing wording. A magical weapon should link to an existing weapon, so what is a broadsword? What is a flame lich? What are souls of the undying and why is the item mentioning bossies/enemies instead of creatures of a certain CR? Ect. In addition, there are numerous instances of incorrect capitalization.
Flamefist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) spelling/grammar
Flora Colossus (5e Race) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Forest Hylian (4e Race) Race names shouldn't be capitalized, as they aren't proper nouns.
Free-Runner (3.5e Class) Needs wikilinks, the bonus feats for example.
Freelancer (5e Class) The inserted text should not start with an exclamation point. The class features need to state at which level they are gained in the text.
Friend of shadows This feat has unclear and grammatical incorrect wording. How many times and when do you regain use of the ability to cast shadow blade? How can you cast the spell on two swords?
Frost Lance (5e Equipment) spells need their own pages created, then linked in the description, capitalization errors
Furkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Gallifreyan, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like bullet points on a character sheet. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "Your Strength score increases by 2" not "Strength +2", race names are capitalized, etc...
Gargantuar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Gargoyle (5e Race) Damage types shouldn't be capitalized. Several racial traits are worded incorrectly. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Garl Glittergold (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ...http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garl_Glittergold" should be reworded.
Gemnis (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, spells aren't capitalized, spell are italicized, race names are not capitalized, etc...
Gems, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Glacier (5e Spell) Grammar problems are in abundance on this page.
Gladiator Beast (5e Subrace) Sentences are not complete. Traits are incorrect.
Gnome, Variant (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Goliath Panda (5e Race) There are a few issues here mentioned in the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize such as race names being capitalized.
Gorger (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Grand Kings Armor (5e Equipment) The wording and terminology of all the traits needs improving.
Gravitonic Archer (5e Class) Full of incorrect terminology. STR and INT need to be worded right, the action types need to be explained correctly, and the wording needs to be finely combed through.
Greater Hellhound (5e Race) Several features need to be reworded.
Gruumsh (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gruumsh" should be reworded.
Gunslinger, Pathfinder Variant (5e Class) Features should be in second person point of view ('the gunslinger' -> 'you').
Half-Celestial Born (5e Race) Traits need to be written in full and follow the first parties wording scheme.
Half-Draconic (5e Subrace) Needs correcting for ASI wording.
Half-Goblin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Half-Goblin Variant (5e Race) Wording throughout is poor.
Half-Golem (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "medium", "Your Strength score increases by 1." not "+1 Strength", damage types aren't capitalized and languages/ability scores are capitalized, 2 week is vague as the period of a week varies from setting to setting(this should be listed in days), etc...
Half-human (Quarter-orc, quarter-elf) (5e Race) Despite all the traits used being already written and the race doing nothing different the traits are still written incorrectly. See the PHB for the correct wording and consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize if in doubt.
Half Vampire (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Hanson Clan Static (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/bolding/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing for how to reference correctly. Nonmagical lightning damage, random capitalizations, external-internal links to SRD's,
Harpie (3.5e Race) Wording needs some work. Confusingly similar to a harpy.
Harpy, Variant (5e Race) Broken sentences, and capitalization.
Haunted Skull (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Heartless (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, no size category is stated, basic sentence structuring and capitalization, it should be something like "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not something like "STR+2, CON+1", resistance is not capitalized, uses abbreviations like mod and Dex, etc...
Helgot Servant Psion (5e Creature) "Pain Shift" is unclear. What is the range on this feature? If it is physically "grappling" another creature, that's a specific condition which shouldn't automatically be inflicted without an attack roll or saving throw. Why would the creature ever slam instead of using this? Why is it called "pain shift"? Surely the blinded condition on a failed save won't last forever, so what would be the duration?
Hellraiser (5e Subclass) This subclass has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
HemoGoblin (5e Race) Traits are incorrectly worded throughout.
Herbalist (5e Class) Features are not worded right. See the 5e Class Design Guide.
Heron Laguz (5e Race) The wiki has a page that tells you Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. So "Deception" should be "Deception". "Fire should be "fire". See also the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing for how to reference key parts of the race.
Hexer Origin (5e Subclass) This subclass has numerous grammatical mistakes and several places where the wording is unclear or non-standard(you can use this x once after a long rest). See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Hidoran (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Holy Kick (3.5e Maneuver) Wording needs improving.
Horrid Blight (3.5e Other) Wording could be improved.
Human Tradesman (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or clearly misinterpret terminology used. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "considered medium", "Performance(Instrument)" when "instrument" is not a skill, "Your Constitution, Wisdom or Intelligence score increases by 2 and one other ability score of your choice increases by 1." not "Gain +2 to Intelligence, Constitution or Wisdom and +1 to another ability of your choice. As normal, you can not increase an ability beyond 20 in this way.", etc...
Hunter, Variant (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class should also not use the per short/long rest wording.
Hunter of the Undead (3.5e Prestige Class) What is "suffered the loss of a complete level"? Do you mean a negative level?
Hybrid (5e Race Variant) Wording needs to looked at.
Hydris (5e Race) The traits are worded poorly, not just in terms of failing to meet the sites Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize guide and basic grammatical standards but also in terms of matching first-party wording. The traits are often convoluted and need to be rewritten to be more concise and mechanically significant.
Imaginary Blade Wording needs to be tightened up. Does it take an action to use this sword? An attack? Neither? One possible interpretation of its property it that you can use it to automatically hit any number of creatures within 60 feet of you, just with an unopposed Wisdom check. Is that how it's intended to work, or is it just vaguely written?
Incarnated Barrier of the Void (5e Equipment) Features need significantly improving for grammar and terminology.
Inferno (5e Class) In need of numerous spelling, punctuation, and syntax fixes. Such errors are not horrible, but are near ubiquitous.
Infinium, Gun Mage (3.5e Class) Riddled with grammatical errors and poor terminology
Inkling, 2nd Variant (5e Race) The wording/formatting/grammar is funny/broken in several places throughout the page.
Japanese Kitsune (5e Race) Unclear and confusing wording. Also Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Jarkad (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need improvement.
Kender, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kenitic Empower (4e Ritual) The wording is a bit confusing.
Kettle of Toin (3.5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving.
Key of the King's Law, Bab-ilu (5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Kitsune, 3rd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kitsune, Variant (5e Race) There are grammatical errors which deviate from standards; see Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize The wording in several places would be improved if it conformed to 5e norms. Ideally the image would have not only an author and site, but a url link to the page from which it originates.
Kitsune half-blood (5e Subrace) Basic capitalization, grammar and spelling mistakes.
Klyntar Host (5e Class) Please ensure it is not a plagiaristic copy.
Knight, Teoryran (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Kobold, 2nd Variant (5e Race Variant) This race variant's traits need to be cleaned up so its traits follow the wording of 1st party traits.
Kord (3.5e Deity) "copied from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kord_(Greyhawk)#Description" should be reworded
Krayak (Pathfinder Environment) the one sentence in the grammar error box has grammar errors
Kritian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Kryptonian (D20 Modern Class) Wording needs improving.
Kurikara (5e Equipment) See the holy avenger and staff of magi for how to properly word this item's effects.
Kurotsume (3.5e Race) Spelling errors.
Kydreon,The Insane (5e Creature) Overall, grammar would benefit from revision. Spaces should exist after commas. Many words are capitalized when they shouldn't be.
Lamia, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Landless Lord (3.5e Class) Grammar is all over the place.
Languages (3.5e Other) Formatting, spelling, and grammar need overhauling.
Larkoush (3.5e Deity) Writing is substandard. Grammar needs improving.
Lemanus Rex (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked over.
Lemurian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Life Force Fighter (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Life Givetaker (3.5e Class) The abilities are confusing to the degree that they are not understandable.
Life Hunt (5e Subclass) Class features are written incorrectly. See 5e Class Design Guide.
Limus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "expertise" is not 5th edition term, its a class feature the rogue and the bard get.
Lithune, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors such as race names and comma's before "however". Missing references such as skills. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Artifice (5e Template) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Living Doll variant (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Lizardfolk, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lizardfolk, 3rd Variant (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need much improvement.
Lizardfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lombax (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Loose Limbs (3.5e Variant Rule) Grammar needs improving
Lords of the secret citadel (4e Quest) Capitalization, and wording could be stronger.
Lost Dragon (5e Class) The description specifically describes a race. If this is intended to be a race-exclusive class, or a hybrid of race and class, it should be treated primarily as a race and include details like racial traits. Other homebrew examples of this include barbed devil and goron. If it doesn't make any sense to multiclass into "lost dragon," then it probably shouldn't be primarily a class.

Class features and race features should generally be written from a second person perspective ("you"), but many of this class's features use a third-person perspective ("the Dragon") or switch between them. Many words are capitalized in an odd way. Even "For" is capitalized in the middle of a sentence. Class and race names are common nouns and usually should not be capitalized. More on this subject can be found in Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.

Love Princess (3.5e Class) Spells should be lowercase.
Lovers Quarrel (5e Equipment) See talk page. Aside from that the page contains a number of grammatical and spelling errors.
Lowly Peasant (5e Class) The wording is jumbled in some places.
Lucario, 2nd Variant (5e Race) Capitalization and italization. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Lucario, Variant (5e Race) lesser aura needs to be detailed appropriately, or the spell needs its own page and linked to. Similar to greater aura. race names are not capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence. Mega Evolution has listed an ability but no reference in the traits. Bone rush needs mechanics written in the description of spell needs its own article and the bone rush trait links to it in the description.
Lumate (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Luparathi (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Lupox (5e Race) Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as there are several inconsistencies on the page such as race names, ability scores, etc. Traits should be fully written out not partially and not use abbreviations.
Machine (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Magnitudian (5e Race) Many traits use poor wording.
Man for the job (Human varient) Page name is misspelled.
Martial Warden (5e Class) Though there are no grevious errors, revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "9th level" instead of "level 9"; consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Martian (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Masked (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague, have excessive waffle or are written casually. Race names, alignments shouldn't be capitalized for example.
Masks of Forms (5e Equipment) keywords like Brave, Dwarven Toughness, and other racial traits need written out. Players shouldn't be expected to research or refer to other pages to know what their stuff does.
Master Ninja (5e Class) The class features are mostly written in sentence fragments
Matter Thing (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Mechon (5e Race) Overly wordy traits. Several grammatical errors.
Megalosaurasapians (5e Race)
Melshaper (5e Class) Spelling could be looked over.
Meltskin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Memory Make Mage (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, or wrote with a seemingly unflavorful, unprofessional tone.
Metalborn (5e Race) race names aren't capitalized
Metamorphic (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Meteor Hammer, Variant (3.5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar needs improving
Mighty Bow (5e Equipment) Properties could be worded better.
Mogwai (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Mongrel, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/wording errors throughout. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are resistant to cold damage." not "You gain resistance to cold damage." or "Your Strength, Dexterity and Charisma scores each increase by 1." not "Increase your Charisma score by 2, then increase either your Strength or Dexterity score by 1.". Consult the Musicus_Meter_(5e_Guideline) for the correct wording.
Mongrel (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Monk's Bow (5e Equipment) This weapon has numerous instances of improper grammar with many capitalization and punctuation problems as well as several instances of terms being improperly worded(use 3rd level instead of level 3, Dexterity instead of dex, ect.). See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Monster Trainer (5e Class) The entire article is full of grammar and capitalization errors.
Moon Zerker (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording. Stacks are called 'moon's fury' but later called 'moon stacks'. What are basic skills in the 'full moon' feature? Many capitalization mistakes. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Moonborn (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Moradin (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia .....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moradin" should be reworded.
Morfan (5e Creature) This creature has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Mountain Orc (5e Race) A number of basic capitalization, grammatical and spelling errors.
Movanic Deva (3.5e Racial Class) Does not read through well.
Multiplectic (5e Race) grammar and formatting mistakes
Murder Mite (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Mytuos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Naruto Ninja, Variant (3.5e Class) This class's features are often confusing/don't make sense while also having a ton of grammar mistakes found throughout the page. All, in all could use some significant clean up. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Nen User (Killua) (5e Class) Capitalization needs to fixed throughout.
Nerubian (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nicodemus (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to looked over.
Nightborne (5e Subrace) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nightmare (3.5e Race) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
Ninja, 2nd Variant (5e Class) Features need to be looked through for proper grammar.
Ninja, Variant (5e Class) Not well worded, uses "per rest" wording. In addition, many words that shouldn't be capitalized are.
Nobody (3.5e Template) spelling
Nonon (5e Race) Nonsensically worded.
Nordic Warrior (5e Class) Muddled wording throughout, and doesn't use correct 5e terms. See SRD for a composite of 5e terms.
NorthSky (3.5e Pantheon) Try paragraphs; get rid of the camelCase
North Shaman (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Not So Fragile Glass Cannon Gish (5e Optimized Character Build) Capitalization, and some wording.
Nymph, Variant (5e Race) Free action isn't a 5th edition term. Alignments shouldn't be capitalized.
OG Armos (5e Creature) Capitalization would be improved if it conformed to D&D norms. E.g., alignments and creature names aren't capitalized. Please consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.

Punctuation is missing or incorrect in several places. Some phrases don't make sense, and sentences seem to cut off before they are finished.

Oath of Silence (5e Subclass) Minor grammatical errors throughout
Oath of the Dragon Gods (5e Subclass) Dragon Soul is unclear, what damage resistances do you gain? A number of other features also have unclear effects, don't mention how the feature is activated, don't have durations, or have grammar problems. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Okami (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Olidammara (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olidammara#Dungeons_.26_Dragons_3.5_edition_.282003-2007.29 " should be reworded
Osmosian (5e Race) Traits are exceedingly wordy and need to be cut down as well as simplified. Other glaring wording errors throughout.
Other One (5e Race) There are several grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. The traits are overly wordy/ ineloquent when they should be written like the first party does. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help on capitalization.
Panthera (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Pantheran (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Path of Crash (5e Subclass) Grammar and capitalization would benefit from revision. Feature headers should be capitalized, for example.
Pebble Dirgen (5e Equipment) Capitalization, and the description could be reworded.
Pet Lover (5e Background) Various grammar and spelling issues.
Phantom Thief Of Hearts (5e Class) CamelCase all over.
Phenix, The Creatures of Fire (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Pheonix born (3.5e Class) Writing needs improving.......Yeah but I think it is perfectly able to be used in any game as is.(ArtixVonKreiger)
Phoenix Kin (5e Race) Traits are poorly worded.
Pictsie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Plane Touched (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Planes Walker (5e Class) Class feature need to be properly worded. Also capitalization.
Plantling (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Prehistoric Circle (5e Subclass) Incorrect capitalization throughout. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Pren (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague in places. For example, languages/racial trait names/ability scores should be capitalized, special sights should not be, "ft" or "STR" should not be used as they are abbreviations and should be their full text, all creatures are proficient in their unarmed strikes, etc...
Priaced (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Prismatic Knight (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the "per long rest" wording and has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Prophet (3.5e Prestige Class) See talk.
Protean (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Protector (5e Class) Uses the per rest wording.
Protector (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, spells are not capitalized, ability scores are as is Armor Class, etc... Consult the 5e Race Design Guide for help.
Psychic (5e Class) This class has several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Pugilist (3.5e Class) Terminology and wording need fixing (they fight with "little weapons"? :)
Pumpkin child (3.5e Race) Terminology issues throughout ("health points"?)
Pyrotechnician (5e Class) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
Qinar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Qunari (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Race names are not capitalized.
Raesokeran Chiropterus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Edentatus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Felis (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references as seen in the 5e Race Design Guide. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Marsupialus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Uses unknown terminology and poor trait placement throughout, size category should be under Size.
Raesokeran Mustilus (5e Race) "reptiles", "feat effects" are not 5e terms. "once per long rest" wording should not be used. Mustilus and Rodentus are not a first party language, explain it(script/ what it sounds like, etc) or use the first party languages. Incorrect capitalization throughout, consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Traits are vague and incorrectly worded throughout and should use the first party's wording.
Raesokeran Rodentus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Raesokeran Ungulus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Ursus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rag Doll, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rage Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Re-equip Ring (5e Equipment) Should be written in second-person, not third-person, and overall writing needs improving, the fluff text needs extracting from the mechanics text or removed entirely.
Reaper (3.5e Race) This race needs some touch up work, many sentences are missing punctuation, race names and other random words should not be capitalized, ect.
Red Orc (5e Race) Words and phrases would be improved if their grammar and formatting better conformed to the norms of D&D 5th edition. E.g., race names like "Red Orc" are common nouns and as such should read "red orc." More guidance on this specifically can be found in the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Aside from this, there are many instances of terms which were present in previous editions, but aren't in 5th; e.g., "Balance, Ride, Escape Artist, Will save." "hp" is always spelled out as hit points, outside of creature stat blocks. Several traits are vague and confusingly worded, making it difficult to know precisely how they are intended to function; in particular, the Orcish Rage and Peon Cower.
Religion (Raesokera Supplement) Should be checked over for grammar.
Researcher (5e Background) Abundant spelling/grammatical errors.
Rhylithic (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ring of Shadows (Pathfinder Equipment) Wording is a bit muddled.
Rite of Rebirth (5e Background) Several sections were taken directly from [1]. This needs to be reworded.
River-Devil (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ronin of the Blade (3.5e Class) Grammar errors throughout.
Ronso (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rubert’s Staff (5e Equipment) The wording on many of this staff's spell like properties need to proper terminology from spells to clarify their effects. (Ex: line attacks should follow the wording of lightning bolt, how teleporting works needs to be explained, ect.). The properties on this item also need to state how they can be used (action, bonus action, ect), what rolls are increases by the +3 quarterstaff need to be explained, and the item has various other grammatical issues, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Rugbysta (5e Class) Are grammar and misspellings part of the joke?
Rune Blade, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Sacred Artist (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Salamander Faerie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, fae, heat damage, race name capitalization, size category capitalization, etc...
Salve-Maker (5e Class) Terminology issues, see talk page.
Samurai Religion (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Resources (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Warden (5e Class) There are numerous words or phrased Capitalized when standards dictated they should not be. Class names, background names, weapon names, and others are capitalized when they shouldn't be. Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize has further details.
Sangheili (Halo elites) Spelling and grammar need work.
Saru No Otoko (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Saurian (5e Race) Poor grammar throughout.
Sciurian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Seedling (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, alignments and spells aren't capitalized, spells should be italicized and link to the SRD, "once per rest" wording, "You are proficient in the Persuasion skill." not "You have proficiency in Persuasion.", etc...
Seeker (5e Race) Traits make little to no sense and need to abide by the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Seeker of Truth (5e Class) Class names, class features, and other many other words are capitalized when they shouldn't be. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Sendo Monk (5e Class) Does not follow the standards. See talk page.
Sentient Automaton (5e Race) This race has some confusing writing and lots of small grammatical mistakes such as capitalizing races when they shouldn't be, not capitalizing ability scores, the Purpose Built trait is incorrectly worded, and various other small grammar mistakes can be found throughout. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Shade Elf (5e Subrace) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Shadow Pixie (3.5e Race) Multiple grammar errors
Shadow Stalker (5e Class) "1d20+background/race gp. "? Why not make that thieves' tools, since they are proficient with it. Spells should be in lower-case italics. Many features have awkward wording.
Shadowhunter (5e Class) Typos everywhere. Isn't consistent on how the class name should be written. The word "per" shouldn't be anywhere, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline)
Shadows Dweller (3.5e Class) May be grammatical errors.
Shadows to Steel (Shadow Power) needs touch-up of wording
Shambali (5e Class) Numerous spelling, capitalization and grammar issues.
Sharkin Skeleton (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
Shen Xin (5e Race) Several incorrect capitalizations and wording errors. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline).
Shub (5e Race) Wording needs improving. You don't have +1 to a "stat". You don't "force" a saving throw, and so on.
Sidhe (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, spells shouldn't be capitalized and should be italicized, "Your Dexterity score increases by 1 and your Charisma score increases by 2." not "+2 Charisma, +1 Dexterity.", etc...
User:Sie Talpa de Redstoneville/Conqueratomurs (5e Race) Spelling, grammar, and terminology need much improvement. This race is supposedly made for 5th edition, but frequently uses terms from other editions of D&D.
Sigil en Din (3.5e Equipment) Some areas could use stronger wording.
Sigmar's Fury (5e Equipment) Poor wording throughout.
Simic Hybrid, Variant (5e Race) This page has a number of different grammatical problems, lists things that are not terms in 5e(expertise is a class feature, per day wording is not used, see the dragonborn's breath weapon as an example), among a number of other problems.
Sky Mage, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous grammatical errors and overall has unclear wording, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class as a whole largely needs to be rewritten for clarification and proper terminology.
Sky Mage (5e Class) Class is excessively wordy. Consider moving Domain Spells to 5e Spells.
Slaughterer (5e Class) There are a number of grammatical, spelling, and capitalization errors that would benefit from a spellcheck. Some wording can be confusing: referring to class features as "skills," for example. Consult Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize, as items like class names are not normally capitalized.
Slender Nightmare (5e Feat) This feat should not use the "per day" wording, see 1st party feats for how features with uses are worded. In addition, there are grammatical errors everywhere, with most being capitalization and punctuation.
Slimanoid Blorbs (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Sliver (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Such as languages, race names, alignment, size category, skills, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Slugfolk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Snake Dagger (5e Subclass) Needs a run through for grammar.
Sombra Escura (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Songstress (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, and don't use proper DnD language.
Soul Keeper (3.5e Class) This is not in english.
Soul Phantom (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Soul Seeker (5e Class) This class's features need a rewrite for clarification and proper terminology. Consider explaining how features are activated, when/if they can only be used once and you must finish a short/long rest to use them again, and other things.
Soulbound (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names and conditions aren't capitalized, etc...
Spartan (5e Class) Words capitalized in the middle of sentences and frequent spelling errors on the subclasses.
Spectral Knight (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the "per long rest" wording and has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Speedster (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Spell Blade, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) D&D wiki uses US English.
Spellfire Wielder (5e Class) This class's features are also not very descriptive of the actual mechanics in 5e that the class uses, and the class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Spiderfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. (editor's note, that's a huge issue, because I don't know American, so I'm not gonna be able to 'fix' my stuff).
Spiral Deformity (5e Equipment) The weapons name should be written in full, capitalized, and italicized. The weapon property need to be written to be more concise.
Spontaneous Gnome Shadow Illusionist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) Hard to read in some places.
Spooky Curse (5e Curse) Many grammatical or terminological errors. "Physical" is not a damage type. Who is the "they/their" whose bones you are seeing? How and why are you damaging yourself? "Self harm" isn't a good enough explanation.
Stained Half-Elf (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are proficient in the Arcana skill." not "Stained Elves gain proficiency in the Arcana skill"
Star Warriors (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Starforger (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The features need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Stick of Lashing (3.5e Equipment) Some weak wording.
Stoatlet (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Storage Magician (5e Class) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Storm Stone (5e Equipment) Sentience could be worded in a way that feels natural.
Stormborn (5e Class) Revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "1st level" instead of "level 1." Consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Sukkan-Alsama (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Super Hero (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling. A lot of terms are contracted or abbreviated when they shouldn't be.
Swarm Golems (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Swashbuckler, Variant (5e Class) Uses "per x rest" wording.
Swift's Inquisitor (5e Class) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Sword of Dismemberment (5e Equipment) It could use some 5e-ification, and would benefit from less complexity.
Sylvans (3.5e Race) Page has Random Capitalization Syndrome, incorrect D&D terminology used in places e.g. "and for 5 rounds heals 1d8 points of health back", "Gets all buffs and perks that the Plant Modifier", etc.).
T-1000 (5e Creature) features/traits are not worded properly such as regeneration. When are the hit points gained? Is there action associated with creating weapons for natural weapons?
Tactician (5e Subclass) Many Traits are poorly worded.
Taninim (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Teardrop (Kite) Shield (5e Equipment) The description is unintelligible, and not adequate.
Templar (3.5e Class) Grammar needs improving.
Tenno/Warframe (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Terry Crews (5e Deity) Vague, and open to different interpretations. See talk page.
Tevi (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Tevi are Medium size class creatures.", "Your Constitution score increases by 1." not "Your Constitution increases by 1.", conditional advantages should be worded like the dwarves Stonecunning trait, use "feet" instead of "ft", etc...
The 6D (5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving (for example, Constitution and DC should be capitalized)
The Bar-Tir (5e Race) A number of spelling/ grammatical/ punctuation/ capitalization/ italicization/ wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help (race names are not capitalized).
The Black Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Cold (5e Disease) The effect needs to be worded more clearly.
The Crypt (4e Quest) Some basic spelling, grammar and formatting would help.
The Gray Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Great Ones (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
The Green Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Hillgiant's Holy Hamwich (5e Equipment) Unclear how this interacts with other magical items, how it's level is increased, etc.
The Red Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The True Samurai (3.5e Class) Class names and weapon names are not proper nouns.
The Unapprochable East (3.5e Sourcebook) Spelling and grammar need working on. Could to with an introductory paragraph.
The White Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Witcher (3.5e Class) Some work needs doing improving the language and terminology. I've read through Witcher Styles twice and it's incomprehensible to me. The entire bit about geralt being the only ever white hair witcher is also wrong. Wanted to try this but reading how wrong the OP was turned me off it.
The dark-one (5e Race) Overall grammar would benefit from revision. Punctuation and capitalization is preferably used.
Therianthrope (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Theurge (3.5e Class) Poor spelling and grammar throughout.
Threat Minimization Charm (5e Charm) This charm can be used as a reaction to what? Reactions have to have a specified trigger. "Fine" is not a size category in 5E. "Per long rest".
Thunder Cleaves (3.5e Prestige Class) Abilities are not written out for most of the progression.
Thundercat (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. Race names shouldn't be capitalized, Claws should be worded like the tabaxi natural weapon, It is "d4" not "D4"
Tiki-Taka (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Many of the traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, advantages should be written like the stonecunning trait, spells should be italicized and not capitalized, traits/ability score improvement should be fully written, etc...
Timebender (5e Class) Features are poorly worded.
Timekeeping Chronomancer (5e Class) This page was copy and pasted here. Many instances of "chronomancer" should be replaced with "timekeeping chronomancer."
Tinkerer (5e Class) Some features could use rewording.
Toosh (5e Race) Traits needs to be fully written out and worded - Ability Score Improvement, Language, spelling, grammar, capitalization, etc
Trap Tinkerer (5e Class) Has one or more grammatical errors in every single sentence.
Treant, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, race names, and alignments shouldn't be capitalized, "mod" should be "modifier", etc. The Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) should help with some of the incorrect wording.
Tremorian (5e Race) Race names shouldn't be capitalized, size categories should be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Ability score improvements and langauges should be full written out as per the PHB.
Trenosant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Trolling (5e Race) Requires description/fluff
Trophy Fighter (5e Race) Proofreading would be beneficial. Run-on sentence problems.
True Alpha (5e Creature) Numerous spelling mistakes throughout.
TruthWeaver (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline). This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Tsuchigumo (5e Race) Traits need to be fully written out - langauge, ability score improvement, etc.
Tychomancer (5e Class) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Uchiha (3.5e Race) Grammar and descriptions need improving.
Umbra Witch (5e Class) There are a lot of things that should not be capitalized, as well as incorrect language in the class features.
Undead Sharkin (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
Unliving Savant (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need work.
UrRu (5e Race) Besides darkvision, this race's traits do not conform with mechanics used in 5e and general 5e verbiage. For example mentions of many skills not in 5e, the "racial bonus" term, mentions of creature types not in 5e (Outsider), ect.
Uruk (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. Several broken sentences and incomplete wording.
Valinor Guard (3.5e Class) See above
Valkyrie, Variant (5e Class) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Vampire, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names are not capitalized, arbitrary rule reminders, "Constitution" not "Con", "modifier" not "mod", "You regain use of this trait once you complete a long rest." not "once per long rest", etc...
Vampyre, Variant (5e Class) Words capitalized in the middle of sentences and frequent spelling errors in subclasses.
Vampyre (5e Class) Full of spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
Vanguard (5e Class) This class has several unclear features, also there is no term for physical saving throws and free actions in 5e. See the wiki's Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Variabilli (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Vasharian (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Vastaya (5e Race) "You can use this once per short rest," and other unconventional phrases would benefit from revision.
Vecna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vecna". Could use rewording.
Vellus (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "they are usually on the tall side of medium", basic capitalization, etc...
Vince The Vine (5e Equipment) Grammar and capitalization need to be fixed throughout. Many of the traits need to be reworded for clarity.
Virite (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help as it highlights issues present such as races names being capitalized and use of "it's" instead of "its".
Virtue (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names aren't capitalized, it should be once you've completed a long rest not once per long rest(see PHB errata), "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "Your Wisdom score increases by 2." not "Gain + 2 to Wisdom.", etc...
Vitae (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or incomplete.
Vitreon (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Void Archer (3.5e Class) Description is grammatically poor, nonsensical in places.
Void Blade (5e Equipment) Properties are written in shorthand, description has some grammar issues.
Voodoist (5e Class) Requires large amounts of grammatical help in virtually every area.
Warchief (5e Class) You should try and avoid giving static bonuses, and the class should avoid using the X per short or long rest wording. There is also no resistance to ranged attacks and numerous other features have poor wording or simply have terms not descripted in 5e or D&D. See the Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and the 5e Class Design Guide. It might also help to read up on 5e through the PHB.
Warrior of Fenris (5e Class) Incomplete sentences and grammar issues found throughout the page. Also, some features are worded in odd and confusing ways.
Wastelander (3.5e Class) Writing is poor.
Way of Invulnerability (5e Subclass) The note at the beginning should belong in a Design Note or on the talk page. Some typos such as "strenght" and "additionnal". The wording for many features could use a lot of work; for example, instead of saying "you may sacrifice 5 AC (-5 to your AC) until the start of your next turn" it would be much simpler to say "you may reduce your AC by 5 until the start of your next turn". What is a "missile" ranged attack? If you are referring to physical projectiles and not magical projectiles, you'd say a "ranged weapon attack", not a "missile" or a "missile ranged attack". "Once per short or long rest" - this is incorrect, please read the Class Design Guide for an explanation of why.
Way of the Abandon Ache (5e Subclass) Class features are sentence fragments at best.
Way of the Empty Hand (5e Subclass) Wiklinks need adding, writing needs improving (e.g. what does "ability to insight yourself" mean?), references to feats should be completely removed
Way of the Mastered Hand (5e Subclass) Running a spell check would be beneficial. Ideally terms would better conform to the standards of D&D 5e formatting norms, such as capitalizing "dc," only using the word "skill" when it applies to skills, etc.
WereWorg (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Your base size is medium.", "Your Dexterity score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "As a Wereworg, you gain a +2 bonus to Dexterity and a +1 bonus to Constitution.", etc...
Were human (5e Disease) The two variable game types need to be explained with mechanics.
Werebear (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Werebear (5e Template) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Werewolf, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Uses unknown/incorrect terminology such as full round action. Traits are wordy/unnecessary and need to be tightened up.
Werewolf (5e Class) Capitalization errors, text written as casual conversation, could benefit from tighter wording.
Whip Suzerain (5e Feat) Does not use correct terminology, and whatever this is doing to spells is not clear.
Whirling Axes (3.5e Equipment) Poor wording in many places.
White Cleric (3.5e Class) grammar needs some work.
Windwalker (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the X times per day wording or per long rest. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Wolf Fey (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Wolf Walker (5e Race) Needs a run through for grammar, specifically capitalization.
Wyrm-Dragonborn Class (5e Class) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Xenomorph Life Cycle (5e Class) Class names are not capitalized, many features' effects are unclear/not properly descripted, and the class overall has numerous other example of improper grammar and terminology. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Xilan Warrior (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Yalu (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation/ notations.
User:ZarHakkar/Folk Deity (5e Class) Improper use of terms: per hour regeneration isn't a thing in 5e, remove uses of ellipses, Faith (level 9) implies that people didn't know whether the character existed or not (have they been invisible? why don't people know they exist? or have they just not met yet?), Divine Demiplane (level 12) lets you create new demiplanes but doesn't let you visit ones you've previously made, Manifest Destiny (level 19) let's you stay in Manifest Destiny form for 30 minutes which is then brought down to a minute and a half (15 rounds, at six seconds a round) with Ascended Deity (level 20), teleport speed isn't a thing, et cetera.
Zhefreet Ahsri (5e Race Variant) Ability wording is incorrect.
Ziurkis (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "You are proficient in the Arcana skill." not "You gain proficiency in Arcana checks.", "Your Constitution score increases by 2." not " You gain +2 to your Strength.", Thieves Cant isn't that kind of language and shouldn't be a racial option to learn, Thaumaturgy is a cantrip, all characters are proficient in unarmed strikes, item capacity and bite attack are not 5th edition terminology, etc...
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