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Page Name Notes
Airrans (5e Race) Grammatical errors throughout the page and a number of traits aren't worded correctly.
Alien Grey (5e Race) The wording needs improvement in the race aspect.
Archer of Infinite Blades (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armament Mage, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armament Mage (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Beastkin (5e Race) The wording for various traits are poorly written/vague.
Berserk Warrior (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much, MUCH improvement.
Biomage (3.5e Class) Formatting and wording needs some work.
Bionicle- Kraata-Kal (5e Race) Incorrect grammar, spacing and wording throughout the page.
Black Blood (5e Class) Typos and capitalization errors everywhere. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for more info.(For example, class names are not capitalized)
Black Blooded (5e Class) Terminology needs much improvement.
Blade Master (5e Class) Many class features are unclear, have round counting, have once a turn wording, have negative ability scores, have the once before doing a long rest wording, or other errors. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Book of Tech (3.5e Sourcebook)wip its sub-pages have severe grammar and spelling issues.
Book of Time (5e Equipment) This item has round counting and should not use the once per day wording.
Book of the Dead (5e Equipment) Spells are italicized and not capitalized and this item should not use the once per day wording.
Brawler (5e Class) Grammar needs improvement. In particular, the page should be gone through and proper nouns, headers, and the beginnings of sentences need to be capitalized.
Cannibal (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Celestial Hunter (5e Class) Writing, terminology and mechanics are all rough.
Children of Ill-Omens (5e Race) Incomplete, and hard to read.
Chiropterans (5e Race) The lore and the racial traits individually and together don't make much sense. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Chronarch, Timelord (3.5e Race) Needs a lil' spruce up with capitalisation an' whatnot
Complete Werewolf Overhaul (3.5 template variant) I understand this is a WIP, but please take care with your terminology ("mental attributes"?)
Corollin (5e Race) A number of fairly simple grammatical rules are broken throughout the page.
Courage-Seeker (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Cranes (4e Race) Stories and descriptions need better wording.
Crusaders (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Cryomancer 2.0 (5e Class) There are still numerous grammatical errors, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Crystalics (3.5e Race) Grammar needs work.
Cubi (3.5e Class) "balanced Tire 3 class."? This is full of typos. Spell list is messy and doesn't adequately explain where the spells can be found.
Cyborgs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar needs a lot of work.
Dark Knight, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) The wording on the class features is a bit ropy.
Dark Knight FF (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dark Undeath Domain (5e Subclass) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Death Dealer (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Death Knight (4e Class) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Death Knight Minions (4e Creature) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Demiplanic orb (5e Equipment) Please have a look at spells in the PHB to see if any could be used. 5e SRD:Demiplane springs to mind.
Demon Brawler (3.5e Class) Grammar and terminology need much improvement.
Diplomacy (5e Equipment) This weapon has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Disco Knight (3.5e Class) Some spelling errors.
Dodgey Boi (5e Optimized Character Build) This character build mentions priests(clerics), and generally does not follow Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dominion Overlord (5e Class) see talk talk page
Dragon (5e Race) Some outdated language; for example, special abilities aren't classified as extraordinary or supernatural abilities in 5th edition. Additionally, 5e races should be written in second person, i.e. describing or addressing "you", not "the dragon" or "the player". The dragon class needs to explain how all the effects work as well.
Dragon Eater (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling needs improving. Still mentions god devouring in the lead sentence and in other places from a hasty cut-and-paste.
Dragon Knight Variant 3 (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Dragon Rider (variant) (5e Class) This class should not use the per long rest wording. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Dragon Slayer (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Dragon Slayer (Demon Slayer Variant) (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Dragon Warrior (3.5e Class) Formatting and grammar need improving
Drakki (5e Race) Grammar issues throughout the page. Traits are worded very poorly.
Drell (5e Race) Grammar and wording issues throughout.
Elderwood (5e Race) The traits are largely unclear and/or worded incorrectly. See the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) to see how traits are worded and structured correctly. Issues like "+1 to Constitution" or "Age. 3,000 years" are also present.
Elemental Adept (5e Class) Grammar needs improving, many traits need rewording
Elemental Assassin (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Elementalist V2.0 (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Elixra (3.5e Deity) Spelling needs improving
Empath (5e Class) Needs to adhere with Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Entings (3.5e Race) Grammar is confusing in places; redlinks
Evomancer (3.5e Class) Grammar and formatting needs working on.
Fary (5e Race) This page lacks the correct wording for various things such as ability scores("Your Dexterity increases by 2." not "+2 Dexterity"), traits(), languages(can they speak, read or write these languages or just understand them? This isn't clear.), etc.
Fey Prairie Dog (5e Race) The fast majority of traits are wording incorrectly, vague/poorly and this page, in general, lacks basic capitalization and grammatical standards.
Force Dragon Blade (5e Equipment) This item shouldn't use the X times per day wording, and magical items don't regain uses when you take a rest.
Free-Runner (3.5e Class) Needs wikilinks, the bonus feats for example.
Frieza Clan (5e Race) Grammar would benefit from some revision. Of note is that many improper nouns are capitalized (e.g., "Race" and "Purple"). Race names themselves are also generally not capitalized, though the face "Frieza" is the name of an individual, "Frieza clan" might be the best capitalization for this race.
Frost Knight (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See the talk page, Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize, and Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) for info on the class's wording problems and how they can be fixed.
Garotte of the Cenobite (5e Equipment) This item has capitalization errors and some unclear wording, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Gestalt /Warrior generic class (3.5e Optimized Character Build) There's no need to shout.
Gilldren (5e Race) The wording of this page is broken and vague throughout. Consider reading the 5e Race Design Guide that outlines a step by step guide to filling out the template of your race.
Grave Knight (5e Class) Needs to be more careful with wording. For example Empower's "ability used" reads like it works with ability checks. Also missing a summary
Gravity Knight (5e Class) Terminology needs improving (e.g. "successful melee strike" should be "when you hit with a melee weapon attack"; 5e doesn't have "Standard Actions" or a "staggered" condition; "Str save" should be "Strength saving throw", etc)
Gunslinger, Intellect (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Gwlithenni (3.5e Race) See talk page, pronunciation needs clarifying
Half-Basilisk (5e Race) The trait wording needs work and due to the vagueness of such wording the balance of this page is equally as vague. In addition, the page requires SRD references(see 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing).
Half-Douen (5e Race) Trait wording is vague and broken throughout. Read the 5e Race Design Guide.
Half-Fairy (5e Race) Trait wording is off/covoluted, see how traits are written in the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline).
Half-Troll, Variant (5e Race) The traits, lore and headings all need rewording. SRD references would help significantly as well as tightening up the page so everything is more concise.
Hanyo (5e Race)
Harpie (3.5e Race) Wording needs some work. Confusingly similar to a harpy.
Hidden Skills (5e Reward) Numerous effects are unclear, inadequately explained, or simply don't follow Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Holy Kick (3.5e Maneuver) Wording needs improving.
Hulking Rage (5e Feat) This feat's effect is still unclear in places.
Hunter, Variant (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class should also not use the per short/long rest wording.
Incorporeal Skeleton (5e Creature) Is this "Incorporeal Skeleton" or "Tormented Soul"?
Infinium, Gun Mage (3.5e Class) Riddled with grammatical errors and poor terminology
Inkling, 2nd Variant (5e Race) The wording/formatting/grammar is funny/broken in several places throughout the page.
Kabaneri (5e Race) English grammar, and Help: When to Italicize and Capitalize are not followed.
Ki Fighter (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Kitsune half-blood (5e Race Variant) Basic capitalization, grammar and spelling mistakes.
Klyntar Host (5e Class) Some odd grammar makes some of these features difficult to follow
Knight, Teoryran (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Krayak (Pathfinder Environment) the one sentence in the grammar error box has grammar errors
Kryptonian (D20 Modern Class) Wording needs improving.
Kurotsume (revised) Spelling errors.
Lancer of the Shattered Plane (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Landless Lord (3.5e Class) Grammar is all over the place.
Languages (3.5e Other) Formatting, spelling, and grammar need overhauling.
Loose Limbs (3.5e Variant Rule) Grammar needs improving
Lupox (5e Race) Number of grammatical errors throughout.
MagicMystic (3.5e Class) Bizarre wording. What does "You have access to all the spells to the grade that equals your intelligence modifier" mean, for example?
Magic and Magic Items (City-States In Chaos Supplement) Prose needs some work
Magician Overlord (5e Class) This class has several capitalization errors and many features have unclear wording. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Master of the Sword (5e Class) Nouns that are not proper nouns should not be capitalized ("human", "master of the sword", etc). Headers should not be in bold, and should not be all-caps.
MechMaster (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Megalosaurasapians (5e Race)
Menace (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and a few unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Mind Field (5e Class) A lot of this is hard to follow. It starts with "When creating a field the Mind Field, and up to 49 other creatures..." - wuh? Maybe explain what a "field" is first; and it's a bit confusing because the name of the feature ("field") is similar to the name of the class ("mind field").
Minecrafter (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar throughout needs fixing.
Monohue Magician (4e Paragon Path) Elemental Summoning needs clarification - what do the question marks mean?
Morfan (5e Creature) This creature has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Mounted Heavy Repeating Crossbow (5e Equipment) Needs a rewrite for clarification and proper 5e terminology. See combat and weapon properties.
Movanic Deva (3.5e Racial Class) Does not read through well.
Multiplectic (5e Race) grammar and formatting mistakes
Nai Khanom Tom (3.5e Class) Class features call the class a pugilist, yet that isn't the name of the class. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Night Blood (5e Class) See talk page
Nightmare (3.5e Race) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
NorthSky (3.5e Pantheon) Try paragraphs; get rid of the camelCase
Onyx Skeleton (5e Race) This race should not use the per day wording and should instead use, you regain use of this trait after you finish a short/long rest. This race also has numerous instances of improper grammar throughout, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Overlord (variant) (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Painless Death (5e Trap) Rife with random capitals and erroneous grammar.
Paranoid Agent (5e Background) grammar
Path of the Lumberjack (5e Subclass) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Pheonix born (fixed) Writing needs improving.......Yeah but I think it is perfectly able to be used in any game as is.(ArtixVonKreiger)
Pillar of Flame (5e Spell) This spell has incorrect wording in a few places and insufficient description in others. See 5e SRD:Flame Strike for how to properly word this spell.
Primal Hunter (5e Class) Lacks punctuation, and the spelling in some places is atrocious.
Prophet (3.5e Prestige Class) See talk.
Psychic (5e Class) This class has several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Pugilist (3.5e Class) Terminology and wording need fixing (they fight with "little weapons"? :)
Pumpkin child (3.5e Race) Terminology issues throughout ("health points"?)
Pyromancer (5e Class) This class has capitalization errors and unclear wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) as well.
Pyrotechnician (5e Class) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
Raptorborn (5e Race) Spelling needs improving (it's "raptor" for a start).
Real Dragon (5e Race) Grammar and punctuation need much improvement.
Ring of Famine (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and holy avenger for how to properly word rarity and attunement.
Ring of Pestilence See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and holy avenger for how to properly word rarity, attunement, and spells.
Ring of War (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and holy avenger for how to properly word rarity and attunement.
Robes of the Fallen (5e Equipment) This item has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Ronin of the Blade (3.5e Class) Grammar errors throughout.
Rune Blade, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Saiyan Fighter (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Salve-Maker (5e Class) Terminology issues, see talk page.
Samurai Religion (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Resources (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Sangheili (Halo elites) Spelling and grammar need work.
Shadow Pixie (3.5e Race) Multiple grammar errors
Shadow Stalker (5e Class) "1d20+background/race gp. "? Why not make that thieves' tools, since they are proficient with it. Spells should be in lower-case italics. Many features have awkward wording.
Shadow Walker - Variant (5e Class) This class should not use the once per day wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline). Also, there is numerous instances of improper terms, wording or grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Shattered (5e Class) Grammar and wording issues are present throughout the entire class. You've made a cool class, but please address these problems! :)
Shi Yu Scarf (5e Equipment) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Several of this item's effects are also unclear or not adequately descripted as well.
Simulate Magic Item (5e Feat) Wording and terminology needs improving, e.g. "once for long rest" should be "you can use this feature again after you finish a long rest". "Main Attribute bonus" isn't a thing, etc.
Sky Mage (5e Class) Class is excessively wordy. Consider moving Domain Spells to 5e Spells.
Slither sling (5e Equipment) Better wording needed.
Soul Reaper, Variant 2 (5e Class) There are a number of spelling and grammatical errors present as well as incorrect capitalization's on this page. Refer to the sites When to Italicize and Capitalize rules.
Spell Blade, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) D&D wiki uses US English.
Spellfire Wielder (5e Class) This class's features are also not very descriptive of the actual mechanics in 5e that the class uses, and the class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Stand User (5e Class) Inappropriate language needs to be removed. The abilities are confusing, to the degree they cannot be understood.
Super Hero (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling. A lot of terms are contracted or abbreviated when they shouldn't be.
Templar (3.5e Class) Grammar needs improving.
The Avatar of Hope (5e Creature) Wording needs improvment.
The Dual Paths of Roskenlan (5e Equipment) This item has numerous instances of unclear mechanics among being largely interminable in places.
The Gentlemen (5e Class) The class should not use the per short/long rest wording. There area also a few instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
The Shaed of Shadows (5e Equipment) This item has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
The Slayer's Guide to Trolls (DnD Other) That whole spelling and grammar thing.
The True Samurai (3.5e Class) Class names and weapon names are not proper nouns.
The Unapprochable East (3.5e Sourcebook) Spelling and grammar need working on. Could to with an introductory paragraph.
The Witcher (3.5e Class) Some work needs doing improving the language and terminology. I've read through Witcher Styles twice and it's incomprehensible to me.
The crypt (4e Quest) Some basic spelling, grammar and formatting would help.
Theurge (3.5e Class) Poor spelling and grammar throughout.
Thunder Cleaves (3.5e Prestige Class) Abilities are not written out for most of the progression.
Transmutation Alchemist (5e Class) Needs general cleanup and a few grammatical corrections
Trolling (5e Race) Trolling Taunt starts off fine, but the ideas get muddled about halfway through, consider rephrasing.
Twilight (5e Equipment) Few minor wording issues throughout.
Uchiha (3.5e Race) Grammar and descriptions need improving.
Undead Longbow (5e Equipment) Needs a rewrite for clarification and terminology. I've done the first few sentences.
Unliving Savant (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need work.
Unmade (5e Race) This race has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Valinor Guard (3.5e Class) See above
Vampyre (5e class) Full of spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
Vanguard (5e Class) This class has several unclear features, also there is no term for physical saving throws and free actions in 5e. See the wiki's Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Vizison (4e Race) Sentence syntax/grammar needs work.
Void Archer (3.5e Class) Description is grammatically poor, nonsensical in places.
Voidblade (5e Class) Garbled in some places, features are poorly worded. For example I have no idea what Gate Onslaught does.
Waraxe of the Dwarvish Lords (5e Equipment) This weapon mentions numerous mechanics not included in 5e. See the talk page.
Warchief (5e Class) There is no once per combat term in 5e, there is only standard durations, you should not give static bonuses to initiative, and the class should avoid using the X per short or long rest wording. There is also no resistance to ranged attacks and numerous other features have poor wording or simply have terms not descripted in 5e or D&D. See the Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and the 5e Class Design Guide. It might also help to read up on 5e through the PHB.
Warmage 2.0 (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Warrior of Fenris (5e Class) Incomplete sentences and grammar issues found throughout the page. Also, some features are worded in odd and confusing ways.
Wastelander (3.5e Class) Writing is poor.
Wendigo (5e Race) The grammar/spelling and wording is poor/incomplete throughout. Please check your work before submitting it.
White Cleric (3.5e Class) grammar needs some work.
Wielder of a Legendary Weapon (5e Class) I don't think the introduction is well worded
Windwalker (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the X times per day wording or per long rest. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Xilan Warrior (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
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