Talk:Para Genasi (5e Subrace)

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Just made some minor changes, what do people think? I feel like Magma and ICe genasi seem like one of the stronger choices atm, I might have to move some stuff around so every one gets something very unique.

--- Hello again, this is my second 5th race I am putting up. Just wondering if some one can go through it with a brush to tidy it up a bit, I will be doing some more updates soon.--Vladmere.Labefactum (talk) 01:06, 7 October 2015 (MDT) 5:35 7/10/2015

Hi, I'm going to have a look through now and leave feedback here. Marasmusine (talk) 10:30, 10 October 2015 (MDT)
  • Grammar: Race names are not proper nouns, so it's "genasi" rather than "Genasi". Spell names are lower case italics (e.g. fog butt)
  • Unarmed attacks dealing bonus damage: This makes genasi monks overpowered. Suggest making these a separate action, e.g. "Frost Bite. You can use your action to make a melee spell attack. Your attack bonus is 8 + your Constitution modifier + your proficiency bonus. It deals 1d4 + your Constitution modifier cold damage on a hit. This increases to 2d4 damage at 12th level and 4d4 damage at 18th level. If you are grappling a creature, you can make this attack against that creature as a bonus action."
  • Earth tremor is from the Player's Companion, so add a reference.[1]Marasmusine (talk) 10:42, 10 October 2015 (MDT)
  1. Like this
hey maramusine. i could not get the reference thing to work for some reason. im not sure what im doing wrong.--Vladmere.Labefactum (talk) 07:08, 21 November 2015 (MST)

Hey marasmusine, thanks for the feedback, I felt like the bonus damage on unarmed strikes was strong but was having a hard time finding a way to use it >.< But your idea seems like the way to go so I will transfer it to that, I will put the Earth tremor spell reference in as well. Will get on it soon ^,,^ --Vladmere.Labefactum (talk) 21:55, 14 October 2015 (MDT)

Hello, I was wondering if the Void(Vacuum) could get some sort of modified Blindsight given theyr from the Void. --MOFD (talk) 22:42, 10 November 2015 (MST)

makes sense that they should have blindsight, good point i will edit it in. thanks--Vladmere.Labefactum (talk) 06:48, 21 November 2015 (MST)

This is broken, just like all of the other pages on this wiki. This is a very interesting concept, but very broken. - ErrorIam

I have gone through it again errorIam with some new balance changes and some modifications to all the subraces, I have done several play tests and now they seem a alot better. If anyone has some feedback that would be fantastic thanks. --Vladmere.Labefactum (talk) 19:)34, 4 February 2016 (MST)

Yes, it would be nice if you say which bit you think is broken (not just unbalanced, but broken?) Marasmusine (talk) 02:53, 5 February 2016 (MS)
Yes lol that would of been a bit more helpful if he/she had told me which parts were broken.--Vladmere.Labefactum (talk) 16:53, 11 February 2016 (MST)

Gone through it again to check if everything seems to be going well so far, let me know if you have any feedback. --Vladmere.Labefactum (talk) 21:58, 22 February 2016 (MST)

To the person who edited Dust Genasi, they are a very intelligent lot and tend to favor researching and investigation instead of combat so their stats are related to their personalities and heritage giving them str and dex would not make much sense unless you have a reason why they would? Let me know whats on your mind.--Vladmere.Labefactum (talk) 21:01, 9 June 2016 (MDT)

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