Talk:Corrupted Human Bandit (4e Creature)

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Candidate for Deletion[edit]

I've cleaned up the statistic block, but there's not much more I can do for this page - there's no flavor text to work with, and it is unclear what direction the original author intended the creature to go in. --Dracomortis 13:58, 7 April 2009 (MDT)

Yeah, I would say that if you want to, you should just adopt this and take a direction you would like to with this creature. --Green Dragon 14:03, 7 April 2009 (MDT)
I think I'll do that. The statistics are mostly solid (except for the missing ability scores, which I've reverse-engineered from the existing stats) and, if written correctly, this could be generic enough to work with most campaigns. I'll see what I can do. --Dracomortis 14:23, 7 April 2009 (MDT)
Flavor text has been added, some of the abilities have been renamed, and a few stats have been changed. However, I think it could still use some more work. Specifically, I'm concerned about its name - it seems to imply some relation to the human bandit in the Monster Manual, but there is almost no connection between the two. I think it needs to be reworked so that it either more closely resembles the human bandit, or so that it is just a general "corrupted humanoid". Perhaps convert it into a template and use the corrupted human bandit as a sample creature? --Dracomortis 15:23, 7 April 2009 (MDT)
I've removed Template:Delete from this page, as I feel that it has been improved to the point that it no longer needs to be deleted, and I will be actively working on this page to further improve it. If anyone feels that this article is still sub-par, please re-add the template along with a brief description of what you think needs to be improved upon. -- Dracomortis 11:59, 22 April 2009 (MDT)
I would also say that you have changed it enough to adopt this article, at the least. --Green Dragon 12:16, 22 April 2009 (MDT)
Is there anything special that needs to be done to denote it as adopted? -- Dracomortis 12:44, 22 April 2009 (MDT)
Nope. Just Template:Author changed to Template:Adopted Article. --Green Dragon 12:46, 22 April 2009 (MDT)
Alright, I've swapped the templates, and I've left a message on Cptroot's talk page letting him know that I've adopted the article, in case he becomes active again. -- Dracomortis 13:57, 22 April 2009 (MDT)
tried to add lore text there. Don't know if that helps but thought it was worth a try --jaican 09:16, 26 febuary 2012 (MDT)
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