https://www.dandwiki.com/w/api.php?action=feedcontributions&user=Viziton&feedformat=atomD&D Wiki - User contributions [en]2024-03-29T10:02:28ZUser contributionsMediaWiki 1.35.8https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:3.5e_Races&diff=552575Talk:3.5e Races2012-03-01T21:04:18Z<p>Viziton: /* 3.5 Race Guideline */ new section</p>
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<div>==To Do==<br />
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* Verify that each race has its categories set correctly: SIZE, TYPE, SUBTYPE, and LA.<br />
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==Lock?==<br />
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Could you lock the Neko? I think this is the place, right?<br />
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:I will lock the Neko, but you were supposed to say this in the Neko's Discussion tab. No worries however. --[[User:Green_Dragon|Green_Dragon]]<br />
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==Should this be changed?==<br />
Because this is longer than 45K, and many browsers have problems editing it correctly, should all LA +0 be moved to their own page, all the LA +1 moved to their own page, etc? I think this might solve the problem. Ideas? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 14:12, 12 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:Perhaps we should divide them by alphabetical order? Would make it a bit less... Biased in a way against the Higher LA Races. People sometimes don't like the higher ones, and would be more helpful to get the people's ideas out to people... LA would be such a small page as well.--[[User:Pz.Az.04Maus|Pz.Az.04Maus]] 14:15, 12 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::I was thinking about alphabetical order... but, people do not want to browse through races, just to find one that works, they would rather look for the LA they want, and go from there. Although, the problem with LA is that the LA +0 and LA +1 might get to big.... We need to think of something. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:46, 12 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::''One thought on shrinking the page a bit, and adding to the organization - grouping subraces into a single heading which opens to it's own page. The catgirls, for instance. Does each subrace need to be listed separately on this page, or could we have a ''Catgirl'' link, and mention there are several subspecies in the Overview here, then have the individual subraces overview on the Catgirl page itself? Same thing could be done for variants of the PHB races - all Elf subraces could have the overview on their own page, all the Dwarf subraces on their own, etc. I ask because I have a couple of races myself with subraces - grouping them would only create two entries on the first page, listing them all would add about 10. Also, can someone explain to me the "Race Groups" at the bottom of the page? Is that for groups of people working on a particular race, or is it akin to the suggestion I just made, just in its own section?'' [[User:Oneiros|--Oneiros]] 11:35, 24 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::Okay... The upper list is for '''all''' the races, and I want it to stay that way. The bottom is for racial groups, like a list of all the catgirls on [[Main Page|D&D Wiki]], just so if you are looking for all the catgirls you do not need to look through everything to find them, then miss one or two. Anyway, I think we need to make this shorter and finish it. So, could seomeone please finish this (with the Description, LA, etc)? And could someone please make these into LA groups (LA 0 one page, LA 1 another page, etc)? Tell me if you can, thanks. Also, I hope I made sense. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 06:16, 28 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::''I created links for the LA groups and I'll break the list up to their own separate pages. That means the "All Races" list on this page essentially goes away, correct?'' --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 07:32, 28 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Yes, that is correct the '''all''' list goes. Although, I see that you already did that. Thanks. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 06:30, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::''Level Adjustment-based pages done. Also, I went through and tweaked the race tables ''alot'' to remove redundant formatting. The overall page sizes have dropped, so that should allow the LA 0 page to expand quite a bit before we get into editing problems again.'' --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 08:27, 28 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Good, it looks very good how it was done (although for new wiki-users categories are confusing....). I hope it will work well. The only problem, as I can see, is that it is very hard to add a new race if you are new to wiki format.. We need to fix that with this: <br />
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<inputbox><br />
type=create<br />
width=20<br />
break=no<br />
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::::::Play around with this box and see if you can find a good way to make it work. Thanks so much for doing all this. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 06:30, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::'''Kay - another Wiki challenge for the novice. The new Race Input Box is in place. How'd I do? :)'' --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 10:16, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::Okay... I did not want it on [[3.5e Races]] at all, I wanted it on all the other pages. Could you add it to them and get rid of it from [[3.5e Races]]? The reason for this is I want [[3.5e Races]] simple but the other pages to have all the information. Your opinion on this? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 04:22, 4 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::''Done. Though one other option would be to add a simple link on the [[3.5e Races]] page that would take a user to an ''Add a New Monster Page'' where the input box could live by itself.'' --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 13:17, 5 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::I like that idea more, could you do that please? But make the link on the '''top''' of the page. Also, The link should go to [[Add a new Race to D&D Wiki]], or you can decide the name. Thanks in advance --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 03:47, 9 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::::''Done.''--[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 10:06, 10 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::::Could you add that to '''every''' page that is linked to be [[3.5e Races]] and all the LA pages? I already did it to [[:Category:User Races]], just make it look like that and put it on all. Thanks so much. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 13:28, 11 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::''Okay... all of the Unknown LA creatures are done except some I thought merited discussion. I also coverted all of the Level Adjustment group pages to actual Categories, so they wouldn't clutter up the Articles listing for 3.5e Races. That means the old article pages should be deleted. Sorry about that. Still expanding my Wiki skills :) Now I'm going though all the races to add categories to them based on Type/Subtype.''--[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 14:04, 29 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Good, and it seems to be working well. Thanks for doing all this, it really needed to get done. Thanks. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 06:30, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::''There are a couple of race pages which are locked and so they didn't get appropriate Category tags. Just FYI.''--[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 10:16, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::Could you give me a list please, so I could change them? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 04:17, 4 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::''[[Lapruni (3.5e Race)]], [[Neko (3.5e Race)]] and [[Kitsune (3.5e Race)]]'' --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 15:41, 5 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::I hope I did them right, how do they look? Do they need to be changed? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 03:54, 9 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::::''Looks good to me. Humanoids usually have a subtype, but none of those really fall into the existing ones, and unless the authors come up with new races of the same subtype, I don't think we need to add them. '' --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 10:06, 10 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::So, I made the Racial Groups into their own page because they make the [[3.5e Races]] look funny. Is this good, or should it be changed? I kinda like it more... --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 06:35, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::''I think it looks fine. Just a note, when I went through and added categories, I did put things like ''Moogle Races'' and ''Catgirl Races'', which could roll up to a "DnD Race Groups" category, so the page could populate itself. Want me to tweak? ''--[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 10:16, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::I dont get what you are saying... Could you please explain this better? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 04:23, 4 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::''Well, to demonstrate, I changed [[DnD Race Groups]] to [[:Category: DnD Race Groups]] (the old page still exists); then added categories to the other pages as subcategories of the Race Groups page. (Easy to change back if you don't like.)'' --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 13:21, 5 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::It's good, thanks. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 03:47, 9 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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== Ideas for more categories of race... ==<br />
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* By Alphabet.<br />
* By Creature type (Thanks, Oneiros)<br />
* By Creator<br />
* Others?<br />
--[[User:Pz.Az.04Maus|Pz.Az.04Maus]] 08:19, 29 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
:Are you talking about having a page built for each category, complete with the "overview" type table like the LA pages have? That would be a lot of redundant work and always be in danger of getting out of sync. (Unless the Wiki has an ability to generate the tables? I know this isn't a relational database, so I'm guessing not. Or could we just use the '''Category''' links more to better organize? Like so: <br />
:*[[:Category: DnD Races|Races by Name]] <br />
:*[[:Category: Elf Races|Elf Races]]<br />
:I've already started to add categories at the bottom of some of the races as I prune the [[LA Unknown Races]] list. <br />
:Other categories I'd suggest<br />
:*Anthromorphic (trying to avoid "Furries"), which would have its own subcategories (Catgirls, for instance.) <br />
:*Anime-Inspired (base on a slight trend I've seen in some of the entries.)<br />
:--[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 11:12, 29 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::Note: Catgirls are '''''NOT''''' Furry. FYI. Also, the categories of creatures thing sounds a bit like an idea. *Strokes furbeard*. --[[User:Pz.Az.04Maus|Pz.Az.04Maus]] 21:25, 29 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:What about categorizing them by racial HD and/or ECL? By LA is good, but it gives no indication of the starting ECL without knowing how many racial HD they have. --[[User:Sledged|Sledged]] 19:18, 29 June 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::About the Racial HD. I was thinking maybe we should include that into the LA, seeing that it works the same. So, we would change around all the races LA that have racial HD by adding them together to get the new LA. Is this a good idea? Or not? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 06:33, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::That would be good idea. Limiting the number a pages a user needs to navigate through is good. But I recommend using the term "ECL" instead of "LA." Although "LA," "racial HD," and "ECL" (not to mention "class level" and "character level") are interrelated, they each have specific and separate definitions and shouldn't be identified as the same.--[[User:Sledged|Sledged]] 10:37, 3 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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::::Would anyone like to do this please? I dont care what we would call the new LA, but could someone please do this? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 04:26, 4 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::I don't know if I saw any races with additional racial HD, but I can go through and check. --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]]<br />
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::::::Technically, the Machall Moogles have 1, but it can be replaced with a normal class level. FYI ^___^--[[User:Pz.Az.04Maus|Pz.Az.04Maus]] 16:25, 5 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::So, is it done? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 03:55, 9 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:I suggest we should have subcategories of races (base, templates, and bloodlines) in a similar fashion to way the [[DnD Classes]] are subdivided. &mdash;[[User:Sledged|Sledged]] 13:42, 23 December 2006 (MST)<br />
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::I say go for it... I think it would be much easier to find what one is looking for. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 19:22, 23 December 2006 (MST)<br />
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== Recategorizing ==<br />
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I've gone back thru the user races and changed all their categories to make them easier to use with the DPL (see the '''[[Talk:Main Page|discussion]]''' on the main page; category lists '''[[User:Oneiros/Categories|here]]'''). However, the three locked races need to be changed again. Could someone update these races as follows:<br />
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{| cellpadding="10px"<br />
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'''[[Kitsune (3.5e Race)]]'''<br />
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[[Category:DnD]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid]]<br />
[[Category:Canine]]<br />
[[Category:LA1]]<br />
[[Category:ECL2]]<br />
[[Category:Completed Pages]]<br />
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'''[[Lapruni (3.5e Race)]]'''<br />
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[[Category:DnD]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid]]<br />
[[Category:Rodent]]<br />
[[Category:LA0]]<br />
[[Category:ECL1]]<br />
[[Category:Completed Pages]]<br />
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'''[[Neko (3.5e Race)]]'''<br />
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[[Category:DnD]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid]]<br />
[[Category:Feline]]<br />
[[Category:LA0]]<br />
[[Category:ECL1]]<br />
[[Category:Completed Pages]]<br />
</pre><br />
|}<br />
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Thanks in advance. --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 08:02, 25 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
:Kitsune have an ECL of 2, Lapruni ECL 1, and Neko ECL 1. --[[User:Sledged|Sledged]] 13:01, 25 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
::Oh, yeah... I was totally forgetting to add class HD. Fixed now. Might have to go through the races and fix a few more :P --[[User:Oneiros|Oneiros]] 13:32, 25 July 2006 (MDT)<br />
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:::I just went through and changed the ones above, apparently someone forgot to earlier. Then, I made sure all the locked races had the correct categories. The problem should now be fixed. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 23:59, 2 December 2006 (MST)<br />
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==Lost Lapruni==<br />
I've never been very good at editing wikis, I noticed that my race, the Lapruni, weren't listed under the "L" section for homebrew races, although I found them easily enough with the search box. Could we fix that? --[[User:ChimericPhase|ChimericPhase]]<br />
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:The problem came from the fact that it was using old categories. I'm going to have to go through all the races and make sure all their categories are using the new method. Anyway, the race is better now, right? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 12:36, 30 November 2006 (MST)<br />
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== TODOs ==<br />
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Just wanted to keep a running list of things that need to be done to the 3.5e Races. I've also put them in my personal TODO list.<br />
* Re-assign ECL categories. There's no such thing as an [[:Category:ECL0|ECL 0]] race.<br />
* sub categorize the races into base races, templates, and bloodlines.<br />
* Apply some much needed cosmetic and uniform layout changes to the races.<br />
* Create [[DnD Creatures|creature entries]] for races that don't already have one.<br />
* Make sure the page titles are in plural form (e.g. "Ogrillorcs" instead of "Ogrillorc")<br />
&mdash;[[User:Sledged|Sledged]] 17:37, 21 January 2007 (MST)<br />
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:Got everything I could think of... However, what Layout changes are you proposing? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 18:46, 21 January 2007 (MST)<br />
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::Little things, like some pages don't list the racial traits in bullets (e.g. [[Aranac (3.5e Race)|Aranac]]), and make sure any tables used have the d20 class. Maybe identify which races don't list heights, weights, and age categories. &mdash;[[User:Sledged|Sledged]] 20:30, 21 January 2007 (MST)<br />
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:::I will quickly go and fix a couple of the non-bulleted. Also, should we need to create a list (here?) that shows all the races without age, weight, and age? Also, one for races without bullets? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 22:03, 21 January 2007 (MST)<br />
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:::: I do not see too much of a great importance in age/weight/height. I would rely on the age/weight/height of basic races and use common sense when matching one of those with the new homebrew race. The "Monster as Characters" section of each monster entry with a LA in the Monster Manuel never includes it.--[[User:DeadChainer|Chainer]] 18:26, 5 February 2008 (MST) <br />
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== ECL ==<br />
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Why are most of the races lacking their proper ECL? Most just have question marks. It seems whoever did the reformating did not notice that each race has their ECL in their category bar.--[[User:DeadChainer|Chainer]] 18:39, 4 February 2008 (MST)<br />
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:It's just that [[User:Aarnott|Aarnott]] did not get around to adding them. It was just more undo work, I guess. Thanks for adding them! --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 13:55, 5 February 2008 (MST)<br />
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== Link to Templates ==<br />
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Should there be a handy link to [[3.5e Creature Templates|Templates]] listed on the races, since, well, they can be used for making characters as well? --[[User:Ganteka|Ganteka]] 19:26, 29 November 2008 (MST)<br />
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:I added the link. Got tired of waiting for a response (and just asked a bunch of users in the [[Special:TheTavern|Tavern]] with a unanimous "yes" vote). --[[User:Ganteka|Ganteka]] 23:16, 9 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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== Races by ECL ==<br />
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Yeah, just added in [[3.5e User Races by ECL]] and was checking out the formatting on the little table. Is there a reason (aesthetic or otherwise) for the black boxes above the listings for the categories (on both the ECL listing and LA listing)? Also, is there a way to make a small space between those two tables so that they don't touch? --[[User:Ganteka|Ganteka]] 23:44, 30 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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== 3.5 Race Guideline ==<br />
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I'm new to 3.5, but i think there should be a 3.5 Race Design Guideline for the people are making new races, explaining what is what and so on, the 4e Race Design Guideline by [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] is awesome, I think someone needs to make one for 3.5--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 14:04, 1 March 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=552522Vizison (4e Race)2012-03-01T17:22:55Z<p>Viziton: </p>
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== Vizison ==<br />
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'''' Vizison were once the rulers of the Underdark. Now they fight against the Drow for control. '''''<br />
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{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Intelligence +2, Dexterity +2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison, Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana +2, Stealth + 2<br />
|trait1= Time Trance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hit points without spending surges .<br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= You are proficient with the dagger and the scimitar.<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= You gain the Battle Pause ability. If you're a rogue, assassin, or a related class, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
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}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner= Race<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Attack<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target= Creatures in burst/blast.<br />
|attack= Intelligence<br />
|defense= Will<br />
|attackextra= Arcana check 10<br />
|hit= no damage<br />
|miss= User is slowed(save ends)<br />
|effect= Creatures in burst/blast area are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and -5 penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
}}<br />
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<- Vizison are the masters of time, capable of freezing time in a instant. They Were once the Proud rulers of UnderDark, untill the drow came and took over, soon after large amounts of Vizison started t take back their land, resulting in a all-out war.Vizison worship the god of time Vizison. Vizison Are tall pale Humanoids with interesting eyes-><br />
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Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rogue,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
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=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
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Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is either pure white or jet black, and they have no facial hair. Their eyes are very unique. Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
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=== Vizison History ===<br />
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Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of the Underdark, until the Drow society came and took over, making the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions have spread thoughout the Underdark, sparking a war. It's been hundreds of years since it began, and it still rages on.<br />
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You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't if they can. This curiousity helps them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in the Vizison language. Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
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''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, other-worldly, Quick, Chatty, and Curious<br />
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'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
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'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
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=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
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you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
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1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
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2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
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3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
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4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
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5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
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You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
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=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
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Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
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Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
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Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
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Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
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You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
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== Vizison ==<br />
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'''' Vizison were once the rulers of the Underdark. Now they fight against the Drow for control. '''''<br />
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{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Intelligence +2, Dexterity +2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison, Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana +2, Stealth + 2<br />
|trait1= Time Trance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hit points without spending surges .<br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= You are proficient with the dagger and the scimitar.<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= You gain the Battle Pause ability. If you're a rogue, assassin, or a related class, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner= Race<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Attack<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target= Creatures in burst/blast.<br />
|attack= Intelligence<br />
|defense= Will<br />
|attackextra= Arcana check 10<br />
|hit= no damage<br />
|miss= User is slowed(save ends)<br />
|effect= Creatures in burst/blast area are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and -5 penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
}}<br />
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<- Vizison are the masters of time, capable of freezing time in a instant. They Were once the Proud rulers of UnderDark, untill the drow came and took over, soon after large amounts of Vizison started t take back their land, resulting in a all-out war.Vizison worship the god of time Vizison. Vizison Are tall pale Humanoids with interesting eyes-><br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rogue,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is either pure white or jet black, and they have no facial hair. Their eyes are very unique. Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of the Underdark, until the Drow society came and took over, making the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions have spread thoughout the Underdark, sparking a war. It's been hundreds of years since it began, and it still rages on.<br />
<br />
You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't if they can. This curiousity helps them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in the Vizison language. Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, other-worldly, Quick, Chatty, and Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
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{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=552507Vizison (4e Race)2012-03-01T17:18:10Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|Missing fluff.}}<br />
{{wording|Grammatical, mainly sentence structure and spacing, and formatting problems, for example "''Int+2''" is not correct.}}<br />
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== Vizison ==<br />
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'''' Vizison were once the rulers of the Underdark. Now they fight against the Drow for control. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Intelligence +2, Dexterity +2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison, Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana +2, Stealth + 2<br />
|trait1= Time Trance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hit points without spending surges .<br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= You are proficient with the dagger and the scimitar.<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= You gain the Battle Pause ability. If you're a rogue, assassin, or a related class, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner= Race<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Attack<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target= Creatures in burst/blast.<br />
|attack= Intelligence<br />
|defense= Will<br />
|attackextra= Arcana check 10<br />
|hit= no damage<br />
|miss= User is slowed(save ends)<br />
|effect= Creatures in burst/blast area are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and -5 penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
}}<br />
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<br />
<- Vizison are the masters of time, capable of freezing time in a instant. They Were once the Proud rulers of UnderDark, untill the drow came and took over, soon after large amounts of Vizison started t take back their land, resulting in a all-out war.Vizison worship the god of time [[User:Viziton|Viziton]] . Vizison Are tall pale Humanoids with interesting eyes-><br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rogue,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is either pure white or jet black, and they have no facial hair. Their eyes are very unique. Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of the Underdark, until the Drow society came and took over, making the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions have spread thoughout the Underdark, sparking a war. It's been hundreds of years since it began, and it still rages on.<br />
<br />
You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't if they can. This curiousity helps them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in the Vizison language. Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, other-worldly, Quick, Chatty, and Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
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{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=552327Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-29T19:14:04Z<p>Viziton: /* Grammar Help NEEDED */ new section</p>
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<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
<br />
[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
<br />
==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
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"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
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"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed<br />
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== Vizison images!! ==<br />
<br />
I've hired my brother to draw a picture of a Vizison male and female, and it will uploaded onto the page after it's uploaded I'd like to hear people's thoughts<br />
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== It Is Complete!!!!!!! ==<br />
<br />
I've finished everything but the picture making it a complete Race and should go on the small list up there, what does everyone else think?<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:08, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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I can't make the picture appear on the page, I tried uploading it but it doesn't macth MIME tpye and I don't know what it means<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:22, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:I'm afraid Time Trance is still broken, since it removes a core resourcing mechanic. I get the idea, and I suggest something like "When you take a short rest, you gain a +2 bonus to your healing surge value."<br />
:4e isn't supposed to have unique racial languages, so I suggest dropping Vizison as a language.<br />
:I still can't make any sense of Battle Pause. It targets arcana check 10? Wut? :) Racial traits shouldn't be specific to classes - that's what race/class combo feats are for. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:50, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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I was planning to make a campain setting after the Vizison were set and ready to give the language some use,and I'll make some changes with Battle Pause <br />
I make sense of what target for.--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:24, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Spell check and Grammar ==<br />
<br />
I liked the idea behind the race but I had difficulty understanding a good bit of it. Could you go back over it and tweak the spelling and grammar mistakes?--[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 09:52, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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Sure,but it will take awhile I did all of this on kindle and I'm not good with grammar or spelling--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:12, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Alignment and Religion ==<br />
<br />
What alignment would the Vizison typically be, and what religion would they follow? --[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 11:07, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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:They're useually unaligned unless their messed with,and they worship Viziton, the god of time--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:55, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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::What [[SRD:Alignment|alignment]] are they? What are the tenets of the Viziton faith? These are a couple of good things to include.--[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 09:16, 7 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== What is Fluff? ==<br />
<br />
so I have a question, what is fluff for?--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 06:13, 5 February 2012 (MST)<br />
:Look at your Player's Handbook in the Character Races section. For each race, the "fluff" is everything underneath the Racial Traits box - two or three paragraphs on physical description; a "Playing a..." section which gives advice on how to roleplay this race; and three example adventurers, one paragraph each. Basically everything that isn't "crunch" (i.e. the mechanics). [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 06:26, 5 February 2012 (MST)<br />
:Whilst you're looking at your PHB, you should also look at the "how to read a power" section starting on page 54, so that you can fix your power. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 06:27, 5 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Grammar Help NEEDED ==<br />
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The two things I'm bad about is grammar and spelling, any help would be awesome of you--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 12:14, 29 February 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Marasmusine/Archive_1&diff=552326User talk:Marasmusine/Archive 12012-02-29T18:39:58Z<p>Viziton: /* Adminship */</p>
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Concerning your comments on traps, the DMG says that traps can indeed be Solo. The Soul Gem is the only example provided, but the text indicates that they should be complex and require a skill challenge in order to defeat. Minion traps are difficult for me to imageine. When i think of minions, i think "one-hit-kill", and traps cannot be killed, in the traditional sense. One way you might make them "miniony" is to make their damamge (if any) constant; such as 5 fire damage rather than 1d10 fire damage, or similar. Otherwise, they might as well just be easier traps or have several of them compose a larger trap? I know i've seen a trap with several pressure plates and points of danger. Hope this helps, albiet perhaps a little late in coming. [[User:Techpriest|Techpriest]] 17:05, 3 October 2009 (MDT)<br />
:Hah, here is your belated reply. I think that the effects of "minion traps" would be so minor, that they could instead be treated as a terrain effect. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:14, 8 July 2011 (MDT)<br />
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Um, this has nothing to do with welcoming you, but in response to what you sent me on my talk page, I posted a response there, and I decided to post it here too.Well, here goes:<br />
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It's ok. I do think we should collaborate, though. Below is a suggested goblin race.<br />
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==Goblin==<br />
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''''Goblins are sly, dangerous creatures.''''<br />
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{{Template:4e Racial Traits<br />
<br />
|height=3&rsquo;0&rdquo;&ndash;4&rsquo;5&rdquo<br />
<br />
|weight=60&ndash;90lb.<br />
<br />
|abilities=+2 Dexterity, +2 Charisma<br />
|size=Small<br />
|speed=6<br />
|vision=Normal<br />
|languages=Common, Goblin<br />
|skills=+2 Diplomacy, +2 Acrobatics<br />
|trait1=Goblin Reflex<br />
|description1=You gain a +2 bonus to to Reflex defense.<br />
|trait2=Taunt<br />
|description2=You can use ''taunt'' as an at-will power.<br />
|trait3=Jump<br />
|description3=You can use ''jump'' as a daily power<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name=Taunt<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Goblin<br />
|type=Utility<br />
|usage=At-Will<br />
|flavor=You tease your enemies and they charge, ready for vengeance<br />
|keyword1=Charm<br />
|actiontype=Minor Action<br />
|range=Close burst<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=All enemies in burst<br />
|effect=All enemies within close burst bull charge you.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name=Jump<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Goblin<br />
|type=Utility<br />
|usage=Daily<br />
|flavor=You jump, avoiding a would-be lethal attack<br />
|keyword1=Personal<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Action<br />
|range=Melee personal<br />
|trigger=You are hit by an attack that would kill you.<br />
|target=You<br />
|effect=The attack does no damage.<br />
}}<br />
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I hope you like this idea, but I'm open to suggestions. You'll notice I didn't include part of the goblin race. It's the part that's hardest for me, so I thought you could come up with that.Until next time, --Korinn 16:07, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:Hi. Try "+2 Dexterity, +2 Charisma or +2 Constitution". Goblins don't strike me as being particularly diplomatic. Taunt allows the player to move all the enemies on the field, three times a round, every round, every encounter. It could be modified into an encounter power that only taunts one enemy. Jump should be an Immediate Reaction, and a level 2 (or higher) racial utility power. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 01:46, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Comment ==<br />
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I noticed your comment on [[Arcane Tank (4e Optimized Character Build)]] about how that table looked like it does not belong in 4e. I actually made that table based off the 4e tables in the books, however any advice or comments you have about that table would be appreciated so I can improve it. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 14:55, 28 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Thanks, I've left some feedback, I'll probably have some more suggestions later down the line too. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:22, 28 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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::Thanks. I now see that you were referring to the table's content not the actual table itself. Sorry about the confusion. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:26, 28 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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Thanks a lot! Here is a barnstar. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:44, 30 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Thanks! I'm on a quest to review all the 4e races, and then improve any that look promising. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:13, 31 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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== Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus Topics (Race, Feats, Powers, etc) ==<br />
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Hello Marasmusine, <br />
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As I read on your user talk page here you are interested in improving and expanding all user created races and their relative content, and I am exceptionally glad you contacted me via [[User talk:Argent Fatalis|my user talk page]] regarding the content I am developing. I have little experience with D&D and have but a few fragments of what is mixed 4e and 3.5e (and I believe even earlier content like 3e) in my possession. However, I have several concepts and ideas that I would like to see played out and experimented with. Many of the balance issues come from lack of experience, or from design ideals with the [[Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus (4e Race)|Maioribus race]], such as a philosophy of equilibrium, where some aspects such as magic are exchanged for greater, and more natural melee prowess, along side ideals of sacrifice; playing a Large creature alone seems to come with reasonable and expected penalty, but a Quadruped on top of this offers even greater weaknesses, and benefits, be them game mechanics and more importantly, roleplaying encounters.<br />
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Seeing as you are much more well versed in D&D than I, I again appreciate your notification and appropriate flagging of the pages in question. I would like to ask for your assistance in discussion and refinement of both the Sentient Smilodon as a race, but also aid with its inherent mechanical issues (Large quadrupedal Beast, lack of conventional weapons, magical void), to create a powerful, yet well balanced race that differs from the normal format.<br />
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--[[User:Argent Fatalis|Argent Fatalis]] 13:08, 11 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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Hello again Marasmusine,<br />
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Thank you for your [[User talk:Argent Fatalis|quick reply]] to my message here on your talk page. Hoping that I might better be able to supply general concepts and ideals for the Sentient Smilodon as a race to you, I have [[Talk:Talk:Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus (4e Race)|edited the talk page for the race]]. Regarding the changes, I absolutely not mind any edits made if they could be discussed with myself, primarily for the reasoning that I would like to know what is considered "in bounds" and or what the issue is as a learning exercise. I have absolutely no issues with commentary, critique, modification and the like, but would rather avoid having to completely reformat functions in the future. That said, I believe many of the issues of balance (such as Mortal Bite and Maim) come from my lack of understanding of 4e scaling, and in some part, miscommunication and, given the raw amount of information I've crafted thus far, some English failures or sentences not worded correctly. I hope that on the Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus' talk page that I've better explained things that may not have been clear, worded poorly, or are just not obvious. For example, Darkvision seems to be convoluted in the area of true "night vision" and "pitch black vision", where in the case of Maioribus, it is simply the ability to see with minimal light, but function normally in day time, typical of other felines.<br />
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A "Design Declaimer" I believe is a must, as the whole idea, while I believe would be just fine to any party, I admit is certainly not for everyone, and I make numerous references to Dungeon Master discretion for exceptions within the talk page information, which could lead to significant problems in some scenarios, so caution is absolutely advised.<br />
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There are indeed images of the closest relative to this otherwise fictional creature, in the actual (but now extinct) ''Smilodon populator'', along with its relatives including the famous ''Smilodon fatalis''. I can certainly acquire a picture.<br />
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--[[User:Argent Fatalis|Argent Fatalis]] 15:35, 11 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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Hello Marasmusine,<br />
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I noted you made mention of a possibility of a Race-Class restriction in the [[Talk:Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus (4e Race)|Smilodon Maioribus talk page]], where certain Powers (and some Feats) could be disassociated from Racial restrictions and implemented into a specific class, in order to solve major mechanical flaws, such as weapons, armor, Power damage, Feat scaling, etc. This idea had come to me in earlier times, but I was unsure as to the rules regarding the idea of making Maioribus limited to one (or a handful) of Race specific classes, which would have the specific features (outside of explicitly racial, such as Large, Quadruped, Beast, etc) contained within them. Is this reasonable possibility? While I can believe some users who may review the race will be disappointed, I equally believe a Disclaimer could be included stating that the race may not function well for all 4e Campaigns, and that it would be up to a Dungeon Master's decision if he or she would allow the Greater Smilodon race, and additionally, deviation from its specific Class-Race type(s), so as not to rule out possibility.<br />
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With this, I again appreciate your assistance and patience with the construction, refinement, balancing and ultimate publishing of [[Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus (4e Race)|Smilodon Maioribus]] on the Dungeons and Dragons Wiki.<br />
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--[[User:Argent Fatalis|Argent Fatalis]] 12:53, 12 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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Hello Marasmusine,<br />
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I've made several adjustments to the [[Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus (4e Race)|Smilodon Maioribus page]] including the addition of the Race-Class and its functions, such as Setup, Feral Challenge, and the migration of Hemorrhaging Wounds and Mortal Bite to that area. I would like your opinion on its current status and possible approval should it seem solid and well rounded before we progress to modifying the Racial Feats (and ultimately creating Class Feats). One of the former Racial Feats, [[Intensity (4e Feat)|Intensity]] has been modified accordingly to 4e Standards (instead of using 3e and 3.5e).<br />
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When possible, if you could re-review the entirety of the Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus race to see if I missed any details or if it includes portions that are no longer applicable. Thank you for your continued assistance, Marasmusine.<br />
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--[[User:Argent Fatalis|Argent Fatalis]] 10:13, 16 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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Hello Marasmusine,<br />
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As I write this I must inform you that I have been called to duty, starting this Monday, January 23rd 2012, and thus will be out of contact for some time, likely several months. I write this message to you to express my sincerest thanks for your astounding efforts in not only editing and improving all of the 4e content, but namely my personal projects, which you extended your assistance too in full. I truly and honestly thank you for this, and hope that you continue to provide support in this manner to others, like me, who may come and wish to participate on the D&D Wiki.<br />
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With my topic of Sentient, Smilodon Maioribus now on hold for several months, as I will likely have limited access to the Internet, I give you permission to edit it, keeping in the spirit of its design and overall feeling, as you see fit. I hope that if you choose to do so, that you find great success and satisfaction in doing so. I will certainly return as soon as possible, and wish to speak with you again in the future.<br />
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With best regards and thanks,<br />
--[[User:Argent Fatalis|Argent Fatalis]] 11:58, 21 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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==Spam==<br />
Do you ever get the feeling that they're doing it just to mess with us? [[User:Silverkin|Silverkin]] 10:48, 13 January 2012 (MST)<br />
:Ha ha, I've seen wikis in a worse state. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 11:11, 13 January 2012 (MST)<br />
::Me too, but this is a D&D wiki - I could understand selling D&D-related products, but these spam posts have nothing at all to do with D&D. No one will ever even see those posts (except to delete them), because nothing on this wiki has anything to do with them. -[[User:Silverkin|Silverkin]] 11:45, 13 January 2012 (MST)<br />
:Ah but you must realise these are bots, not people. All that matters is that maybe 1 person in 10,000 clicks on that link. Adding recaptcha to new account creation would stop all this :) 11:54, 13 January 2012 (MST)<br />
::I see, that makes more sense. -[[User:Silverkin|Silverkin]] 11:58, 13 January 2012 (MST)<br />
:::That said, there are [http://www.dndwiki.com some wikis] that stop spam before it gets as bad as it is here :-P<br />
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== [[Neo Reploid (4e Race)|Neo Reploid]] ==<br />
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A question about my Neo Reploid race, do I really have to have attack bonuses per tier? --[[User:Axl|Axl]] 18:00, 21 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:Ah, thanks for explaining. If I have tiered damage rolls, is that fine? --[[User:Axl|Axl]] 17:33, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::Thanks for answering my questions. --[[User:Axl|Axl]] 17:43, 28 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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==Reviews==<br />
Is there somewhere I can post to ask for reviews on a page? I'm trying to improve one of my PrCs that I put together, but nobody has reviewed it so I don't know what needs to be changed. -[[User:Silverkin|Silverkin]] 10:42, 22 January 2012 (MST)<br />
:Hi Silkverkin, I'm flattered that you think that I might know! I can't see any formal review request system, so can only suggest the main talk page, or asking individual editors. I'd be happy to look at it myself, although it's been a few years since I've played 3.5 so I may not be able to suggest much. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 10:57, 22 January 2012 (MST)<br />
::I suppose I could ask Green Dragon about it, to be sure. If there isn't one already, maybe we (the wiki as a whole) should start one. I know that I at least am somewhat uncertain when making new content, with regard to balance and whatnot. Balance is one of my sticking points - I like to make sure that even my April Fools submissions are properly balanced. -[[User:Silverkin|Silverkin]] 11:53, 22 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Post Review ==<br />
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Hey. First off, thanks for helping me balance my 4e race. But I'm just wondering, after I get everything fixed, can I remove that notice on my own and put it back into the 'races without improving template' section on my own? Or should I wait for someone to give the changes a once over first? --[[User:Fortis|Fortis]] 23:23, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:Yes, and you are asked to. I tried to make the wording on the [[Template:Reviewing Template]] understandable in this regard. For example, it says "''When the mechanics have been changed so that this template is no longer applicable please remove this template.''" Do you find this wording clear? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 00:23, 28 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== spam template ==<br />
It's so tempting sometimes, you know what I mean? Imagine it - being able to report spam just by adding <nowiki>{{spam}}</nowiki> to the page, and have all the details filled in automatically. So simple, so elegant... and yet so not worth the time it would take to actually create such a thing. <br />
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On a side note, something tells me I've been awake for far too long. -[[User:Silverkin|Silverkin]] 01:54, 27 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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:I've done a little digging and apparently spammers have found an exploit in reCaptcha that allows their spambots through about 40% of the time, hence the increase in spam from January onwards. A lot of wikis and forums have been suffering with this. Hopefully my admin application will go through and I can zap the spam as I see it (feel free [[Requests for Adminship/Marasmusine|to comment!]]. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:27, 27 February 2012 (MST)<br />
::I hope it goes through. I'm behind you all the way! On a side note, perhaps looking into WP Captcha Free might be useful as well. From what I hear they're pretty effective, but I have no idea how it works or if it would be any help solving our problem. I think it may be well worth investigating, but that's just my opinion. -[[User:Silverkin|Silverkin]] 07:48, 27 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Adminship ==<br />
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Welcome to Adminship. You are now part of "The Face" of D&D Wiki. You have more burden on yourself now that you are an admin because users will be looking at you for editing help, knowledge about pages, etc. Make sure to familiarize yourself with [[Meta Pages]] to help address this burden. I recommend you take a look at [[Special:ListGroupRights]] if you have not already. Some of the the new feature's uses follow. You can now delete pages, protect pages, rollback edits, block users and IP's, edit every page, patrol edits, and do a couple more minor things.<br />
* Deleting pages is normally done through [[:Category:Candidates for Deletion]]. Anything with a good reason to be deleted on that page should be deleted. Other times pages should be deleted is in the case of vandalism, spam, or even when someone makes a page and after a few edits they either blank the page or replace it with something like "Please delete this". If this page consisted of close to just the preload it is fine to just delete it.<br />
* Protecting pages has quite a few different times when it should be used. Pages should be protected according to the author's wishes (with [[Template:Locked Page]] added to the top of the page in question), in case of conflict (with [[Template:Temp Locked Page]] added to the top of the page in question), in case of [[Help:FAQ#What are OGL, OGC, SRD, and GNU FPL?|OGC]] published materials (with [[Template:OGL Top]] added to the top of the page in question and [[Template:OGL Bottom]] added to the bottom), or finally if the page is a vital part of D&D Wiki's organization. Also, if it deals with D&D Wiki's organization the page needs to be protected. For Example [[3.5e Homebrew]] is protected from all non-sysop edits whereas a different page like [[LA 0 Races]] is only protected from IP edits. No template needs to be added to pages if they are part of D&D Wiki's organization (even though some do exist like [[Template:Admin Locked Page]])<br />
* Blocking a user or IP should be used with respect to [[Meta Pages#Policies|policy]]. To block someone just click "block" (found on [[Special:Recentchanges|Recent Changes]], the diff in question, the userpage, etc) and fill out the corresponding form. For a typical vandalism attack I normally block the user for two weeks. Certain things demand a longer block and others a shorter. No standards have been set for block lengths so use your best judgment.<br />
* Editing every page on D&D Wiki mostly means you can now edit the [[SRD:System Reference Document|SRD]] and the [[MSRD:Modern System Reference Document|MSRD]]. Feel free to edit them if inaccuracies are found. If interested further please look at the [[SRD Talk:System Reference Document#SRD ToDo List|SRD ToDO List]] or the [[MSRD Talk:Modern System Reference Document#Tasks|MSRD tasks]]; I am sure your help will be appreciated.<br />
Now that you are an admin I would say more burden is placed on you, but I really hope you enjoy being an admin and I hope you decide to stay around on D&D Wiki for a while more to come. Welcome to Adminship. Again, you're now part of "The Face" of D&D Wiki. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 09:17, 28 February 2012 (MST)<br />
:Congratulations! You've earned it. -[[User:Silverkin|Silverkin]] 12:54, 28 February 2012 (MST)<br />
::Thanks for your support guys, I look forward to improving and maintaining the wiki. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 13:38, 28 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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Congratulatoins! I have no dout that you'll be an awesome Admin.--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 11:39, 29 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Deletion ==<br />
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When deleting pages "''Only author requests deletion''", and similar reasonings, are meaningless. Anyone can request that any page gets deleted. The main contributor (what you are using the word author to mean) does get a say, but like anyone main contributors can be wrong. Just be careful, and use the page as the base not the contributors.<br />
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In addition please remember to delete the talk pages of every page you delete. If the page gets restored the talk page will get restored as well. Likewise, if the page gets deleted so does the talk page. Also after deleting a page remember to check "What links here". If anything links to the deleted page it needs to be addressed; by removing the link, striking it though, etc. Looks good though! --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 09:55, 29 February 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Discussion:House_rules,_lets_share.&diff=550396Discussion:House rules, lets share.2012-02-12T04:58:24Z<p>Viziton: /* my house rules --~~~ */ new section</p>
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<div>== Everyone have some, what about yours? == <br />
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If I am DM I usually use this house rules, if I am player I talk with the DM about why I like them and why he should use them. Of course usually he uses another set of house rules.<br />
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==== Easier Skills ====<br />
No double cost for cross class skills; the maximum rank remains unchanged. I think players like a little more freedom, and I usually let them decide few skill are always in-class based on the character background.<br />
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==== Fractions! ====<br />
In order to reduce the penalty of multiclassing we use a slightly different way to calculate Saving Throws and Base Attack Bonus. <br />
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A / 3 + B / 2 + 2 * C<br />
A = number of levels in a class with 'Good Save'<br />
B = number of levels in a class with 'Bad Save'<br />
C = number of classes with 'Good Save'<br />
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Base Attack Bonus:<br />
A + B*2/3 + C/2<br />
A = number of levels in a class with 'Best Attack'<br />
B = number of levels in a class with 'Medium Attack'<br />
C = number of levels in a class with 'Worst Attack'<br />
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Of course the final value is truncated. This way you cannot have a Level 2 Something / Level 2 Somethingother with still a 0 save.<br />
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==== Diverse Feat Requirement ====<br />
A Character can take a Feat ignoring the Ability Requisites, but she does not have any Benefit if she does not meet them.<br />
If the Feat was used to take other Feats those are disabled too: the Ability Requisite is implicitly of those Feats too.<br />
Those Feats do not allows to join Prestige Classes.<br />
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I always found strange that a Fighter with 10 of Intelligence and a Band of Intellect +6 cannot take `Combat Expertise', this is the reason of this house rule; of course if that Fighter loses the Band he wont be able of use the feat anymore.<br />
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==== 2 + Int skill points, what Int? ====<br />
If a player constantly have an increased (or decreased) intelligence we consider that modified value as bonus for skill points.<br />
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So? What small rules modification your party adopt? Do you like them?<br />
=== [[User:Jamesja12|James]]&nbsp;<small><small>20:18, 26 May 2010 (UTC)</small></small> ===<br />
Some of the house rules I use is that you can have fumbles on skills but not crits. Also for the dragon born I use two versions. Bahumat and Tiamet. Also I have a rule that you can give up your armor bonus to AC and roll 1d20+base attack bonus, but you get a -4 attack next turn. This is called parrying and you cant do it without a weopon.<br />
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my house rules are few,but there might be more in the furture(I'd started playing for two months)<br />
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'''Dualweilding'''<br />
When weilding two one-hand Weapons, you have two new basic attacks<br />
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*'''The Rule''' almost the same as the normal melee attack,expeact that you can two creatures and you deal 1[W] damage to each,or you could use both weapons upon one creature and deal it 2[W] damage.<br />
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'''Staff Fighting'''<br />
me and my player's characters weapons can turn into double bladed staffs,in wich casue i needed to make some new rules. Here they are.<br />
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*'''The Rule''' same as dualwelding,expect when attacking two creatures,they must be at oppitse sides of you.</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Admin&diff=550390User talk:Admin2012-02-12T01:23:11Z<p>Viziton: /* What does it take? */</p>
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== Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives ==<br />
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So, getting straight to it, the first things come directly from the Wizards website. They have a few old archives, the oldest of which being the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/retired Retired Articles and Archives]. there is the notice attached to this archive, reading:<br />
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"Looking for a series that you used to read? We keep our retired series online for a time here. They won't stay here forever, though, so we recommend that you print out old series for yourself, as once they leave this area, they live only in memory. "<br />
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Most of the artcles within aren't of much interest or use to this wiki, but two of them have usable material in them; the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/mm Monster Mayhem] article and the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/sb Spellbook] article. They both have unique monsters and spells, respectively, that currently are not kept anywhere else. Of course, being part of the retired articles archive means they won't be there forever. I would like to preserve the entires in these articles on this site.<br />
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In case anyone is thinking, I don't think there are any real issues with doing so. These things are posted up on a free-access website for the world to see. And, as retired archives that won't be kept forever, they explicitly say to make your own copies if you wish to keep using them after removal. Copies that, theoretically, could be replicated and distibuted freely and indefinitely after the fact. In that sense, is there any difference between "printing" if you do it electronically rather than physically?<br />
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With an administrator approval consensus, I'd like to take the entries from these two articles and add them to the SRD of this site, of course with respect to their origins by either putting a note on the pages themselves or creating their own subsections.<br />
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Discuss/What say you? -- [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 19:37, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:So long as they are OGL, I am in full support. Also, that old Psionics column wasn't bad; I think it was called Mind's Eye. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 22:23, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::...does anyone else have anything to say about this? This project isn't going to go anywhere without more administrator input. [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 18:18, 10 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::What's wrong with one administrator giving you the go-ahead? If anyone has an issue with it, they can take it up with me. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 19:21, 10 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Partially I wanted to see what all the other admins thought of it, but mostly I hoped someone would be able to reinforce of weaken whether my case of it being okay to transcribe the archives here. However, if you're saying "go for it", then I guess I will, after a few more details are worked out. [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 11:13, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::I'd hold off on it. I emailed WotC via their customer support. It was submitted in their "copyright" category, so it would have immediately gone to the right place. When they received it, however, the first thing they did was escalate it to a higher level. I do believe that means that, instead of having a set answer, they're considering it. I'll let you know what they say, but in the meantime I'd say don't put it on the site. --[[User:Daniel Draco|Daniel Draco]] 12:08, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Whoa, that sounds kinda heavy. I'm curious, what exactly did your message contain?<br />
::::::And it's probably too late for this, but one of the details I wanted to work out was getting the -whole- pages, mechanics plus flavor stuff (except for specific names, of course), on the same grounds as doing this in the first place; once they're gone, they're gone since they don't exist anywhere else, and I want to preserve them. Though, since as I've said it's probably already too late to ask for anything more, I won't complain if mechanics are all we get (if we get even that ''':/''' ). [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 23:08, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::"Escalating to a higher level" just means the person he emailed tossed it to their boss. At the very least, I'd suggest making sure you have all the pages saved. [[User:Dragon Child|Dragon Child]] 23:10, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::We would have to make an entire new section. Something like "Wizards Articles". Are you really interested in doing this or do you think it would be too much work or who knows what? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 00:42, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::Why would we need a new section? Just have a little header on the top, something like ''"This article was originally published by Wizards of the Coast under their (Insert Name Here) section"'', kind of like what's done with some Tome articles. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 09:44, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::I was thinking a new section would have to be made, but I don't have enough experience working with this site to do that. I'd need someone else to do that, but I'm confident I can get all the actual pages myself once a section's created.<br />
::::::::::Besides, this is -nothing- compared to another project I have in mind when this is over... why do you think this is only "Project #1"? '''>:]'''<br />
::::::::::Hey, what the heck? Who changed that? Fixing...Done. --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 12:23, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::::I would be more then willing to help create the infrastructure of a Wizards archive like section and help out a bit however do you know what the license is on the Wizards archives? I looked though Wizards [http://ww2.wizards.com/Company/Default.aspx?doc=SiteLegalNotice Wizards.com & Gleemax.com Website Terms of Use] a bit and [http://ww2.wizards.com/Company/Default.aspx?doc=Privacy Wizards web site privacy statement] however I did not see anything relating to their archive section. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:32, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::::Daniel Draco and I (well, pretty much just Daniel Draco) have been working on that particular detail this whole time, by e-mailing Wizards. Right now we've been stalled on a reply. When Daniel knows, we'll know. --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 15:46, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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{{Discussion Indentation Revert}}<br />
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:Damn it all, wizards responded to Draco and said no. That's projects #1, 2, and 4 down the drain. However, an unrelated project that I am absolutely sure will work can now get underway. I'll post details later so we can get started.<br />
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::In any case [[Main Page]] &rarr; [[3.5e Open Game Content]] &rarr; [[Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives]]. Their you go. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:49, 5 September 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::One, that wasn't a malicious edit (as it was all my own stuff originally), but if you have not yet realized, Wizards. Said. No. We cannot have their archives. You must take down that page, as I have said [[Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives|here]], or they will very likely sue you! But hey, if you want to have them file a lawsuit against you, that's fine by me... --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 16:06, 5 September 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::You are talking about a '''whole''' different subject. I am referring to content which we are legally '''allowed''' to have (not copyrighted things). See also [[Talk:Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives]]. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 23:01, 3 November 2009 (MST)<br />
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==Propositions for Addition/Expansion of this Wiki==<br />
<br />
(making a new section here is how someone suggested I should do this)<br />
<br />
So, I'm fairly new to this site, but I've got a few (official, not homebrew) things I'd like to see added, if possible. There a number of such things, but I'm only going to go one at a time, and I'm putting them up here for administrator discussion.<br />
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===Project #2===<br />
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Alright. The project that was planned for #3 is now #2. This project is not about articles from Wizards sites. This project is for copying down OG content from a sourcebook. And it ''is'' under the OGL, it states that and even has a specific license in the back of the book. If I get started on this project, a word-for-word copy of the specific OGL will be the first thing I put up.<br />
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Now, the book itself. And, don't freak out or anything when you read the title, let me explain first. The book is "World of Warcraft: The Roleplaying Game". Yes. It's Warcraft. But hear this first. I don't really care for the Warcraft setting. I've never played WoW or the original Warcraft games (Starcraft for the win ''':P''' ). The -only- reason I want to copy down this content is for one thing; the Tinker base class and the rules for creating steampunk Technological Devices. Seriously, it's all freakin' awesome ''':3''' That's the only reason I'm interested. Now, with that said, the book also has a number of other new rules, all of which are completely compatible with existing D&D rules. New feats and feat types, new takes on a few base classes, of course the rules for Technological Devices and Firearms (best I've seen them handled yet), even rules for making statistics of communities and cities, and more. All these things can make fine additions to DanDwiki. Just like Unearthed Arcana and all the new rules it brought about.<br />
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Now, of course, due to the nature of the OGL, only rules and mechanics can be posted, none of the actual flavor (which is perfectly fine with me). If there are no other suggestions, I will probably follow a format similar to the one we have for the actual SRD, because this book is also laid out in a similar way. As for the actual copying down, I will be attempting to do so word-for-word wherever possible (minus the flavor-only sections which won't be copied at all, of course), but in some cases I will have to paraphrase to omit flavor and setting references. I will leave a note on each page where this happens. Also, a good amound of the content is identical to stuff already in the SRD, as it works like a "replacement" Player's Handbook and DMG; in these cases, I will simply link to the existing SRD. In some cases, the name is the only thing different. In this case, I will make a redirect to the SRD. But for anything new or different, I will make the new page for.<br />
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To get started, all I will need is a new section to do so, and a new page identified (homebrew and regular stuff has "article" as the tab, SRD pages are "srd", Unearthed stuff is "ua", discussions are "discussion", etc. For the new section, it can just be "Warcraft" or "World of Warcraft", and that can be put in the navigation box under UA, and the pages can be "wrd", for "Warcraft Reference Document".<br />
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So. What does everyone think?<br />
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== SRD weapons & armor error? ==<br />
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There appears to be a problem with sevearl SRD weapons and armor pages, particularity in the enchantment area. An example would be the Morningstar. [http://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/SRD:Morningstar] Is there anyway to fix it? {{unsigned|98.22.233.36}}<br />
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:The wiki's having problems right now. Rest assured that the coding on those pages is fine, it's just that the back end stuff that supports that coding is currently out of order. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 16:44, 5 July 2010 (UTC)<br />
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== Broken Redirects Oddity ==<br />
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You guys have any way to fix this? Over at [[Special:BrokenRedirects]] it is listing ''"Humans, Æskmann (DnD Race)"'' and ''"Form:4e Class Power"'' as the only two broken redirects, but neither actually exist. &nbsp;<small><span style="border: 1px solid black; -moz-border-radius:10px">[[User:Hooper|'''<span style="background-color:White; color:Black; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> Hooper </span>''']][[User talk:Hooper|<span style="background-color:Black; color:white; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;talk&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Hooper|<span style="background-color:black; color:white">&nbsp;&nbsp;contribs&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Emailuser/Hooper|<span style="background-color:black; color:white; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:10px; -moz-border-radius-topright:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;email&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]]</span></small> 10:15, 9 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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:Fixed one (partially). See also [[Talk:3.5e Flaws#Flaw Form]]. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:46, 9 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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::That odd one might be fixed now. &mdash; <span style="color:#002137;">[[User:Blue Dragon|Blue Dragon]] <small> ([[User_talk:Blue Dragon|talk]])</small></span> 16:19, 12 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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== DnD Links ==<br />
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:''Discussion moved to [[Talk:DnD Links#Social Networking]].'' <small>--[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 16:38, 21 June 2011 (MDT)</small><br />
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== Site nominated for an Award ==<br />
*See: [[Talk:Main_Page#Site_nominated_for_an_Award]] {{User:Hooper/autosig2}} 18:54, 14 August 2011 (MDT)<br />
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== Accidentally Locked a page ==<br />
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Hi Admins<br />
I wanted to add a feat I found in the Complete Warrior and I also wanted it to look right on the page so I borrowed some code from [[SRD:Shield Bash|Shield Bash]] but after I uploaded it I can no longer edit it because I don't have the necessary clearance. Could you undo my last two updates to the [[Shield Slam(3.5e Feat)]]? Thanks before hand --<span style="font-family:albertus mt; font-variant:small-caps; margin-left:4px; border:2px solid #501010;"><span style="background:#CA2020; border:3px solid #7B0E0E; padding:0px 5px 0px 5px;">'''[[User:ElvenKingSlave|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;">ElvenKingSlave</span>]]'''&nbsp;<font color="white">&middot;</font>&nbsp;[[Exalted Wiki:Human|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;" title="I will drown you in daggers!">Weapons Summoner</span>]]&nbsp;<font color="white">&middot;</font>&nbsp;[[User talk:ElvenKingSlave|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;" title="Contact me">Talk</span></span>]]</span> 11:54, 5 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Was this related to cloudflare perchance? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 13:33, 9 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Please delete my rubbish. ==<br />
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Please can an admin please delete my page [[Rebelstar (4e Campaign Setting)]] and its subpages? I won't be developing it any further. Thank-you. I've also noticed a backlog at [[Category:Candidates for Deletion]]. If more hands are needed, I might nominate myself for adminship :) [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:55, 17 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Per our policy I can't delete it outright, but I have added the {{tl|delete}} template; next time someone goes through the category for deletion it will likely be deleted. As for admin, feel free to [[RFA|nominate yourself officially]], though (and I mean no offense) since you have not made many edits. Stick around and you never know; there is waaaaay more work around here than we have workers. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 17:54, 26 December 2011 (MST)<br />
::Thanks! [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 01:47, 28 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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== 4e types and subtypes ==<br />
<br />
I've noticed something confusing about our categorization system for 4e races. What we are calling "Subtype" is actually "Type", and what we are calling "Type" is actually "Origin" (see Monster Manual p. 6). For example, it should be "Humanoid Type" and "Natural Origin", not "Natural Type" and "Humanoid Subtype". I've also seen pages with keywords ("undead" etc) used as subtypes. It will be a pain changing the categories on all the 4e race articles, but I'm prepared to put the work in if the admins give me the go-ahead. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:12, 7 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:That would be very appreciated if you corrected the categories for races. Creatures are also in the same boat. When you are organizing the category please add [[:Category:4e]] to the 4e types as well as add it to the new origin categories. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 17:03, 7 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::Do we want categories like [[:Category:Humanoid Type]] which has mixed 3e and 4e content? I was thinking of separating them ("Category: Humanoid 4e Type"), particularly to avoid the above confusion where Beast is a 3e Subtype but a 4e Type. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 14:14, 8 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:::I understand that they are not the same thing, however I feel that just having [[:Category:4e]] added is sufficient. The pages in the category will have their appropriate identifier and that as well as having the category be a part of the 4e category tree should work. If one wants just the 4e pages they can make a dpl. Also none of the other categories have been edition specific (for example [[:Category:Race]]). --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 14:40, 8 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::::Okay, thanks, I'll get to work on that. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:34, 9 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Racial Feats ==<br />
<br />
Hello. Me again :)<br />
<br />
I wanted to find a better way of presenting racial feats on the main race article, so that readers can get a better overview of what the feats do. I did some script-kiddying and tried some code from [[4e Racial Feats]] and applied it to [[Barbed Devil (4e Race)]]. (To get this to work, I added a "Barbed Devil Feat" category to the feat pages... perhaps there's a different way?). I just want to make sure that this isn't going to blow the wiki up or cause some other problem. Thanks, [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 12:03, 12 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:Nah, it should be fine. I only *just* understand the DPL code, so I always copy/paste it from somewhere else as well. And as far as I know, there'd be no way to do it without creating a category; this way is MUCH cleaner (and more accurate) than going around trying to manually add all the feats. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 18:08, 15 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::I made [[:Category:Weapon Summoner Bonus Feat]] so it can have a feat list like the [[SRD:Fighter|fighter]]. I find that this is a good way to go. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 12:00, 19 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== 4e Race Vizison ==<br />
<br />
I finished adding a new race [[Vizison (4e Race)]] about 5 days ago,and I keep wondering «are they too powerful? Timecontrol is pretty epic. Nah I put ''huge'' penalties to them if they fail to meet the Arcana. I keep wondering through. Could one of you guys review it and tell me what you think? --[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 16:18, 1 February 2012 (UTC)<br />
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:I took a look at it. For future reference please use {{tl|requestreview}} to get something reviewed. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 10:35, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== What does it take? ==<br />
<br />
I'm hoping sooner or later,that I would become a major contributer, but I don't know what it would take, maybe a thousand contributions and being well known and trusted? I don't want to be an admin. I also thought maybe this should be a Title, and it should be earned the same way adminship--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]]<br />
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:Technically it takes nothing to become an admin. See also [[Requests for Adminship]]. I would recommend having an understanding of syntax, showing commitment, and showing dedication. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 11:10, 10 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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that seems to me to make good sense,thanks :] --[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 12:39, 11 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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:Think quality, not quantity :) [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 13:39, 11 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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I'm aware that got about 5 to 8 things in progress at the momment,I'm just putting in my basic things.--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 18:23, 11 February 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Viziton&diff=550369User:Viziton2012-02-11T19:59:26Z<p>Viziton: /* Races in Progress */</p>
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<div>==Greetings==<br />
I am a awesome editor,whose about to dump his fantasy universe in D&D,there will be awesome,there will be godliness,and there will be VIZITON. hope you'll enjoy my page :]<br />
<br />
===About Me===<br />
<br />
'''Real Name:'''Gavyn<br />
<br />
'''Nicknames:'''Gavon,Viziton<br />
<br />
'''Editions Played:''' 4th (I started playing about a two months ago)<br />
<br />
'''Character's Name:''' Marrock<br />
<br />
'''Character's Race:''' Lythari Elf<br />
<br />
'''Character's Class:''' Blood Warrior<br />
<br />
===Races Created===<br />
[[Vizison (4e Race)|Vizison]],<br />
<br />
===Races in Progress===<br />
[[Toa]],<br />
[[Lythari (4e Race)|Lythari]]<br />
<br />
===Creature Created===<br />
none yet<br />
<br />
===Creatures in Progress===<br />
[[Vizison Blademaster]]<br />
<br />
===Classes Created===<br />
none yet but one is almost done<br />
<br />
===Classes in Progress===<br />
[[Blood Warrior]],<br />
<br />
===Paragon Paths Created===<br />
not even touch that yet<br />
<br />
===Paragon Paths in Progress===<br />
none yet<br />
<br />
===Epic Destinies Created=== <br />
none yet<br />
<br />
<br />
===Epic Destinies in Progress===<br />
[[The Vizison King]],<br />
<br />
===Powers Created===<br />
[[Battle Ready (4e Power)]],[[Battle Wrath (4e Power)]],[[Defensive Stand (4e Power)]],[[Duelist's Assault (4e Power)]],[[Mobile Blade (4e Power)]],[[Nimble Position (4e Power)]],[[Steady Position (4e Power)]],[[Power Strike(4e Power)]],[[Blood Mark (4e Power)]].<br />
<br />
===Powers in Progress===<br />
working on all the powers for the [[Blood Warrior Powers (4e Power List)|Blood Warrior]]<br />
<br />
===Comments=== <br />
<br />
if you want to ask or tell me something, go to my [[User talk:Viziton|talk page]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Viziton&diff=550368User:Viziton2012-02-11T19:58:56Z<p>Viziton: /* Races in Progress */</p>
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<div>==Greetings==<br />
I am a awesome editor,whose about to dump his fantasy universe in D&D,there will be awesome,there will be godliness,and there will be VIZITON. hope you'll enjoy my page :]<br />
<br />
===About Me===<br />
<br />
'''Real Name:'''Gavyn<br />
<br />
'''Nicknames:'''Gavon,Viziton<br />
<br />
'''Editions Played:''' 4th (I started playing about a two months ago)<br />
<br />
'''Character's Name:''' Marrock<br />
<br />
'''Character's Race:''' Lythari Elf<br />
<br />
'''Character's Class:''' Blood Warrior<br />
<br />
===Races Created===<br />
[[Vizison (4e Race)|Vizison]],<br />
<br />
===Races in Progress===<br />
[[Toa]],<br />
[[Lythari(4e Race)|Lythari]]<br />
<br />
===Creature Created===<br />
none yet<br />
<br />
===Creatures in Progress===<br />
[[Vizison Blademaster]]<br />
<br />
===Classes Created===<br />
none yet but one is almost done<br />
<br />
===Classes in Progress===<br />
[[Blood Warrior]],<br />
<br />
===Paragon Paths Created===<br />
not even touch that yet<br />
<br />
===Paragon Paths in Progress===<br />
none yet<br />
<br />
===Epic Destinies Created=== <br />
none yet<br />
<br />
<br />
===Epic Destinies in Progress===<br />
[[The Vizison King]],<br />
<br />
===Powers Created===<br />
[[Battle Ready (4e Power)]],[[Battle Wrath (4e Power)]],[[Defensive Stand (4e Power)]],[[Duelist's Assault (4e Power)]],[[Mobile Blade (4e Power)]],[[Nimble Position (4e Power)]],[[Steady Position (4e Power)]],[[Power Strike(4e Power)]],[[Blood Mark (4e Power)]].<br />
<br />
===Powers in Progress===<br />
working on all the powers for the [[Blood Warrior Powers (4e Power List)|Blood Warrior]]<br />
<br />
===Comments=== <br />
<br />
if you want to ask or tell me something, go to my [[User talk:Viziton|talk page]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Admin&diff=550365User talk:Admin2012-02-11T19:39:05Z<p>Viziton: /* What does it take? */</p>
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== Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives ==<br />
<br />
So, getting straight to it, the first things come directly from the Wizards website. They have a few old archives, the oldest of which being the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/retired Retired Articles and Archives]. there is the notice attached to this archive, reading:<br />
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"Looking for a series that you used to read? We keep our retired series online for a time here. They won't stay here forever, though, so we recommend that you print out old series for yourself, as once they leave this area, they live only in memory. "<br />
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Most of the artcles within aren't of much interest or use to this wiki, but two of them have usable material in them; the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/mm Monster Mayhem] article and the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/sb Spellbook] article. They both have unique monsters and spells, respectively, that currently are not kept anywhere else. Of course, being part of the retired articles archive means they won't be there forever. I would like to preserve the entires in these articles on this site.<br />
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In case anyone is thinking, I don't think there are any real issues with doing so. These things are posted up on a free-access website for the world to see. And, as retired archives that won't be kept forever, they explicitly say to make your own copies if you wish to keep using them after removal. Copies that, theoretically, could be replicated and distibuted freely and indefinitely after the fact. In that sense, is there any difference between "printing" if you do it electronically rather than physically?<br />
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With an administrator approval consensus, I'd like to take the entries from these two articles and add them to the SRD of this site, of course with respect to their origins by either putting a note on the pages themselves or creating their own subsections.<br />
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Discuss/What say you? -- [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 19:37, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:So long as they are OGL, I am in full support. Also, that old Psionics column wasn't bad; I think it was called Mind's Eye. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 22:23, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::...does anyone else have anything to say about this? This project isn't going to go anywhere without more administrator input. [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 18:18, 10 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::What's wrong with one administrator giving you the go-ahead? If anyone has an issue with it, they can take it up with me. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 19:21, 10 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Partially I wanted to see what all the other admins thought of it, but mostly I hoped someone would be able to reinforce of weaken whether my case of it being okay to transcribe the archives here. However, if you're saying "go for it", then I guess I will, after a few more details are worked out. [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 11:13, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::I'd hold off on it. I emailed WotC via their customer support. It was submitted in their "copyright" category, so it would have immediately gone to the right place. When they received it, however, the first thing they did was escalate it to a higher level. I do believe that means that, instead of having a set answer, they're considering it. I'll let you know what they say, but in the meantime I'd say don't put it on the site. --[[User:Daniel Draco|Daniel Draco]] 12:08, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Whoa, that sounds kinda heavy. I'm curious, what exactly did your message contain?<br />
::::::And it's probably too late for this, but one of the details I wanted to work out was getting the -whole- pages, mechanics plus flavor stuff (except for specific names, of course), on the same grounds as doing this in the first place; once they're gone, they're gone since they don't exist anywhere else, and I want to preserve them. Though, since as I've said it's probably already too late to ask for anything more, I won't complain if mechanics are all we get (if we get even that ''':/''' ). [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 23:08, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::"Escalating to a higher level" just means the person he emailed tossed it to their boss. At the very least, I'd suggest making sure you have all the pages saved. [[User:Dragon Child|Dragon Child]] 23:10, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::We would have to make an entire new section. Something like "Wizards Articles". Are you really interested in doing this or do you think it would be too much work or who knows what? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 00:42, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::Why would we need a new section? Just have a little header on the top, something like ''"This article was originally published by Wizards of the Coast under their (Insert Name Here) section"'', kind of like what's done with some Tome articles. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 09:44, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::I was thinking a new section would have to be made, but I don't have enough experience working with this site to do that. I'd need someone else to do that, but I'm confident I can get all the actual pages myself once a section's created.<br />
::::::::::Besides, this is -nothing- compared to another project I have in mind when this is over... why do you think this is only "Project #1"? '''>:]'''<br />
::::::::::Hey, what the heck? Who changed that? Fixing...Done. --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 12:23, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::::I would be more then willing to help create the infrastructure of a Wizards archive like section and help out a bit however do you know what the license is on the Wizards archives? I looked though Wizards [http://ww2.wizards.com/Company/Default.aspx?doc=SiteLegalNotice Wizards.com & Gleemax.com Website Terms of Use] a bit and [http://ww2.wizards.com/Company/Default.aspx?doc=Privacy Wizards web site privacy statement] however I did not see anything relating to their archive section. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:32, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::::Daniel Draco and I (well, pretty much just Daniel Draco) have been working on that particular detail this whole time, by e-mailing Wizards. Right now we've been stalled on a reply. When Daniel knows, we'll know. --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 15:46, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:Damn it all, wizards responded to Draco and said no. That's projects #1, 2, and 4 down the drain. However, an unrelated project that I am absolutely sure will work can now get underway. I'll post details later so we can get started.<br />
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::In any case [[Main Page]] &rarr; [[3.5e Open Game Content]] &rarr; [[Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives]]. Their you go. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:49, 5 September 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::One, that wasn't a malicious edit (as it was all my own stuff originally), but if you have not yet realized, Wizards. Said. No. We cannot have their archives. You must take down that page, as I have said [[Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives|here]], or they will very likely sue you! But hey, if you want to have them file a lawsuit against you, that's fine by me... --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 16:06, 5 September 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::You are talking about a '''whole''' different subject. I am referring to content which we are legally '''allowed''' to have (not copyrighted things). See also [[Talk:Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives]]. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 23:01, 3 November 2009 (MST)<br />
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==Propositions for Addition/Expansion of this Wiki==<br />
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(making a new section here is how someone suggested I should do this)<br />
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So, I'm fairly new to this site, but I've got a few (official, not homebrew) things I'd like to see added, if possible. There a number of such things, but I'm only going to go one at a time, and I'm putting them up here for administrator discussion.<br />
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===Project #2===<br />
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Alright. The project that was planned for #3 is now #2. This project is not about articles from Wizards sites. This project is for copying down OG content from a sourcebook. And it ''is'' under the OGL, it states that and even has a specific license in the back of the book. If I get started on this project, a word-for-word copy of the specific OGL will be the first thing I put up.<br />
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Now, the book itself. And, don't freak out or anything when you read the title, let me explain first. The book is "World of Warcraft: The Roleplaying Game". Yes. It's Warcraft. But hear this first. I don't really care for the Warcraft setting. I've never played WoW or the original Warcraft games (Starcraft for the win ''':P''' ). The -only- reason I want to copy down this content is for one thing; the Tinker base class and the rules for creating steampunk Technological Devices. Seriously, it's all freakin' awesome ''':3''' That's the only reason I'm interested. Now, with that said, the book also has a number of other new rules, all of which are completely compatible with existing D&D rules. New feats and feat types, new takes on a few base classes, of course the rules for Technological Devices and Firearms (best I've seen them handled yet), even rules for making statistics of communities and cities, and more. All these things can make fine additions to DanDwiki. Just like Unearthed Arcana and all the new rules it brought about.<br />
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Now, of course, due to the nature of the OGL, only rules and mechanics can be posted, none of the actual flavor (which is perfectly fine with me). If there are no other suggestions, I will probably follow a format similar to the one we have for the actual SRD, because this book is also laid out in a similar way. As for the actual copying down, I will be attempting to do so word-for-word wherever possible (minus the flavor-only sections which won't be copied at all, of course), but in some cases I will have to paraphrase to omit flavor and setting references. I will leave a note on each page where this happens. Also, a good amound of the content is identical to stuff already in the SRD, as it works like a "replacement" Player's Handbook and DMG; in these cases, I will simply link to the existing SRD. In some cases, the name is the only thing different. In this case, I will make a redirect to the SRD. But for anything new or different, I will make the new page for.<br />
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To get started, all I will need is a new section to do so, and a new page identified (homebrew and regular stuff has "article" as the tab, SRD pages are "srd", Unearthed stuff is "ua", discussions are "discussion", etc. For the new section, it can just be "Warcraft" or "World of Warcraft", and that can be put in the navigation box under UA, and the pages can be "wrd", for "Warcraft Reference Document".<br />
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So. What does everyone think?<br />
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== SRD weapons & armor error? ==<br />
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There appears to be a problem with sevearl SRD weapons and armor pages, particularity in the enchantment area. An example would be the Morningstar. [http://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/SRD:Morningstar] Is there anyway to fix it? {{unsigned|98.22.233.36}}<br />
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:The wiki's having problems right now. Rest assured that the coding on those pages is fine, it's just that the back end stuff that supports that coding is currently out of order. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 16:44, 5 July 2010 (UTC)<br />
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== Broken Redirects Oddity ==<br />
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You guys have any way to fix this? Over at [[Special:BrokenRedirects]] it is listing ''"Humans, Æskmann (DnD Race)"'' and ''"Form:4e Class Power"'' as the only two broken redirects, but neither actually exist. &nbsp;<small><span style="border: 1px solid black; -moz-border-radius:10px">[[User:Hooper|'''<span style="background-color:White; color:Black; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> Hooper </span>''']][[User talk:Hooper|<span style="background-color:Black; color:white; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;talk&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Hooper|<span style="background-color:black; color:white">&nbsp;&nbsp;contribs&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Emailuser/Hooper|<span style="background-color:black; color:white; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:10px; -moz-border-radius-topright:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;email&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]]</span></small> 10:15, 9 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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:Fixed one (partially). See also [[Talk:3.5e Flaws#Flaw Form]]. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:46, 9 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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::That odd one might be fixed now. &mdash; <span style="color:#002137;">[[User:Blue Dragon|Blue Dragon]] <small> ([[User_talk:Blue Dragon|talk]])</small></span> 16:19, 12 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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== DnD Links ==<br />
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:''Discussion moved to [[Talk:DnD Links#Social Networking]].'' <small>--[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 16:38, 21 June 2011 (MDT)</small><br />
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== Site nominated for an Award ==<br />
*See: [[Talk:Main_Page#Site_nominated_for_an_Award]] {{User:Hooper/autosig2}} 18:54, 14 August 2011 (MDT)<br />
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== Accidentally Locked a page ==<br />
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Hi Admins<br />
I wanted to add a feat I found in the Complete Warrior and I also wanted it to look right on the page so I borrowed some code from [[SRD:Shield Bash|Shield Bash]] but after I uploaded it I can no longer edit it because I don't have the necessary clearance. Could you undo my last two updates to the [[Shield Slam(3.5e Feat)]]? Thanks before hand --<span style="font-family:albertus mt; font-variant:small-caps; margin-left:4px; border:2px solid #501010;"><span style="background:#CA2020; border:3px solid #7B0E0E; padding:0px 5px 0px 5px;">'''[[User:ElvenKingSlave|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;">ElvenKingSlave</span>]]'''&nbsp;<font color="white">&middot;</font>&nbsp;[[Exalted Wiki:Human|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;" title="I will drown you in daggers!">Weapons Summoner</span>]]&nbsp;<font color="white">&middot;</font>&nbsp;[[User talk:ElvenKingSlave|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;" title="Contact me">Talk</span></span>]]</span> 11:54, 5 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Was this related to cloudflare perchance? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 13:33, 9 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Please delete my rubbish. ==<br />
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Please can an admin please delete my page [[Rebelstar (4e Campaign Setting)]] and its subpages? I won't be developing it any further. Thank-you. I've also noticed a backlog at [[Category:Candidates for Deletion]]. If more hands are needed, I might nominate myself for adminship :) [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:55, 17 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Per our policy I can't delete it outright, but I have added the {{tl|delete}} template; next time someone goes through the category for deletion it will likely be deleted. As for admin, feel free to [[RFA|nominate yourself officially]], though (and I mean no offense) since you have not made many edits. Stick around and you never know; there is waaaaay more work around here than we have workers. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 17:54, 26 December 2011 (MST)<br />
::Thanks! [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 01:47, 28 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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== 4e types and subtypes ==<br />
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I've noticed something confusing about our categorization system for 4e races. What we are calling "Subtype" is actually "Type", and what we are calling "Type" is actually "Origin" (see Monster Manual p. 6). For example, it should be "Humanoid Type" and "Natural Origin", not "Natural Type" and "Humanoid Subtype". I've also seen pages with keywords ("undead" etc) used as subtypes. It will be a pain changing the categories on all the 4e race articles, but I'm prepared to put the work in if the admins give me the go-ahead. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:12, 7 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:That would be very appreciated if you corrected the categories for races. Creatures are also in the same boat. When you are organizing the category please add [[:Category:4e]] to the 4e types as well as add it to the new origin categories. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 17:03, 7 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::Do we want categories like [[:Category:Humanoid Type]] which has mixed 3e and 4e content? I was thinking of separating them ("Category: Humanoid 4e Type"), particularly to avoid the above confusion where Beast is a 3e Subtype but a 4e Type. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 14:14, 8 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:::I understand that they are not the same thing, however I feel that just having [[:Category:4e]] added is sufficient. The pages in the category will have their appropriate identifier and that as well as having the category be a part of the 4e category tree should work. If one wants just the 4e pages they can make a dpl. Also none of the other categories have been edition specific (for example [[:Category:Race]]). --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 14:40, 8 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::::Okay, thanks, I'll get to work on that. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:34, 9 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Racial Feats ==<br />
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Hello. Me again :)<br />
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I wanted to find a better way of presenting racial feats on the main race article, so that readers can get a better overview of what the feats do. I did some script-kiddying and tried some code from [[4e Racial Feats]] and applied it to [[Barbed Devil (4e Race)]]. (To get this to work, I added a "Barbed Devil Feat" category to the feat pages... perhaps there's a different way?). I just want to make sure that this isn't going to blow the wiki up or cause some other problem. Thanks, [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 12:03, 12 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:Nah, it should be fine. I only *just* understand the DPL code, so I always copy/paste it from somewhere else as well. And as far as I know, there'd be no way to do it without creating a category; this way is MUCH cleaner (and more accurate) than going around trying to manually add all the feats. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 18:08, 15 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::I made [[:Category:Weapon Summoner Bonus Feat]] so it can have a feat list like the [[SRD:Fighter|fighter]]. I find that this is a good way to go. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 12:00, 19 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== 4e Race Vizison ==<br />
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I finished adding a new race [[Vizison (4e Race)]] about 5 days ago,and I keep wondering «are they too powerful? Timecontrol is pretty epic. Nah I put ''huge'' penalties to them if they fail to meet the Arcana. I keep wondering through. Could one of you guys review it and tell me what you think? --[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 16:18, 1 February 2012 (UTC)<br />
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:I took a look at it. For future reference please use {{tl|requestreview}} to get something reviewed. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 10:35, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== What does it take? ==<br />
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I'm hoping sooner or later,that I would become a major contributer, but I don't know what it would take, maybe a thousand contributions and being well known and trusted? I don't want to be an admin. I also thought maybe this should be a Title, and it should be earned the same way adminship--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]]<br />
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:Technically it takes nothing to become an admin. See also [[Requests for Adminship]]. I would recommend having an understanding of syntax, showing commitment, and showing dedication. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 11:10, 10 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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that seems to me to make good sense,thanks :] --[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 12:39, 11 February 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Admin&diff=550293User talk:Admin2012-02-10T05:27:11Z<p>Viziton: /* What does it take? */ new section</p>
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== Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives ==<br />
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So, getting straight to it, the first things come directly from the Wizards website. They have a few old archives, the oldest of which being the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/retired Retired Articles and Archives]. there is the notice attached to this archive, reading:<br />
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"Looking for a series that you used to read? We keep our retired series online for a time here. They won't stay here forever, though, so we recommend that you print out old series for yourself, as once they leave this area, they live only in memory. "<br />
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Most of the artcles within aren't of much interest or use to this wiki, but two of them have usable material in them; the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/mm Monster Mayhem] article and the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/sb Spellbook] article. They both have unique monsters and spells, respectively, that currently are not kept anywhere else. Of course, being part of the retired articles archive means they won't be there forever. I would like to preserve the entires in these articles on this site.<br />
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In case anyone is thinking, I don't think there are any real issues with doing so. These things are posted up on a free-access website for the world to see. And, as retired archives that won't be kept forever, they explicitly say to make your own copies if you wish to keep using them after removal. Copies that, theoretically, could be replicated and distibuted freely and indefinitely after the fact. In that sense, is there any difference between "printing" if you do it electronically rather than physically?<br />
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With an administrator approval consensus, I'd like to take the entries from these two articles and add them to the SRD of this site, of course with respect to their origins by either putting a note on the pages themselves or creating their own subsections.<br />
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Discuss/What say you? -- [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 19:37, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:So long as they are OGL, I am in full support. Also, that old Psionics column wasn't bad; I think it was called Mind's Eye. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 22:23, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::...does anyone else have anything to say about this? This project isn't going to go anywhere without more administrator input. [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 18:18, 10 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::What's wrong with one administrator giving you the go-ahead? If anyone has an issue with it, they can take it up with me. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 19:21, 10 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Partially I wanted to see what all the other admins thought of it, but mostly I hoped someone would be able to reinforce of weaken whether my case of it being okay to transcribe the archives here. However, if you're saying "go for it", then I guess I will, after a few more details are worked out. [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 11:13, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::I'd hold off on it. I emailed WotC via their customer support. It was submitted in their "copyright" category, so it would have immediately gone to the right place. When they received it, however, the first thing they did was escalate it to a higher level. I do believe that means that, instead of having a set answer, they're considering it. I'll let you know what they say, but in the meantime I'd say don't put it on the site. --[[User:Daniel Draco|Daniel Draco]] 12:08, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Whoa, that sounds kinda heavy. I'm curious, what exactly did your message contain?<br />
::::::And it's probably too late for this, but one of the details I wanted to work out was getting the -whole- pages, mechanics plus flavor stuff (except for specific names, of course), on the same grounds as doing this in the first place; once they're gone, they're gone since they don't exist anywhere else, and I want to preserve them. Though, since as I've said it's probably already too late to ask for anything more, I won't complain if mechanics are all we get (if we get even that ''':/''' ). [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 23:08, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::"Escalating to a higher level" just means the person he emailed tossed it to their boss. At the very least, I'd suggest making sure you have all the pages saved. [[User:Dragon Child|Dragon Child]] 23:10, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::We would have to make an entire new section. Something like "Wizards Articles". Are you really interested in doing this or do you think it would be too much work or who knows what? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 00:42, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::Why would we need a new section? Just have a little header on the top, something like ''"This article was originally published by Wizards of the Coast under their (Insert Name Here) section"'', kind of like what's done with some Tome articles. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 09:44, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::I was thinking a new section would have to be made, but I don't have enough experience working with this site to do that. I'd need someone else to do that, but I'm confident I can get all the actual pages myself once a section's created.<br />
::::::::::Besides, this is -nothing- compared to another project I have in mind when this is over... why do you think this is only "Project #1"? '''>:]'''<br />
::::::::::Hey, what the heck? Who changed that? Fixing...Done. --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 12:23, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::::I would be more then willing to help create the infrastructure of a Wizards archive like section and help out a bit however do you know what the license is on the Wizards archives? I looked though Wizards [http://ww2.wizards.com/Company/Default.aspx?doc=SiteLegalNotice Wizards.com & Gleemax.com Website Terms of Use] a bit and [http://ww2.wizards.com/Company/Default.aspx?doc=Privacy Wizards web site privacy statement] however I did not see anything relating to their archive section. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:32, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::::Daniel Draco and I (well, pretty much just Daniel Draco) have been working on that particular detail this whole time, by e-mailing Wizards. Right now we've been stalled on a reply. When Daniel knows, we'll know. --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 15:46, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:Damn it all, wizards responded to Draco and said no. That's projects #1, 2, and 4 down the drain. However, an unrelated project that I am absolutely sure will work can now get underway. I'll post details later so we can get started.<br />
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::In any case [[Main Page]] &rarr; [[3.5e Open Game Content]] &rarr; [[Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives]]. Their you go. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:49, 5 September 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::One, that wasn't a malicious edit (as it was all my own stuff originally), but if you have not yet realized, Wizards. Said. No. We cannot have their archives. You must take down that page, as I have said [[Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives|here]], or they will very likely sue you! But hey, if you want to have them file a lawsuit against you, that's fine by me... --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 16:06, 5 September 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::You are talking about a '''whole''' different subject. I am referring to content which we are legally '''allowed''' to have (not copyrighted things). See also [[Talk:Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives]]. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 23:01, 3 November 2009 (MST)<br />
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==Propositions for Addition/Expansion of this Wiki==<br />
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(making a new section here is how someone suggested I should do this)<br />
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So, I'm fairly new to this site, but I've got a few (official, not homebrew) things I'd like to see added, if possible. There a number of such things, but I'm only going to go one at a time, and I'm putting them up here for administrator discussion.<br />
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===Project #2===<br />
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Alright. The project that was planned for #3 is now #2. This project is not about articles from Wizards sites. This project is for copying down OG content from a sourcebook. And it ''is'' under the OGL, it states that and even has a specific license in the back of the book. If I get started on this project, a word-for-word copy of the specific OGL will be the first thing I put up.<br />
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Now, the book itself. And, don't freak out or anything when you read the title, let me explain first. The book is "World of Warcraft: The Roleplaying Game". Yes. It's Warcraft. But hear this first. I don't really care for the Warcraft setting. I've never played WoW or the original Warcraft games (Starcraft for the win ''':P''' ). The -only- reason I want to copy down this content is for one thing; the Tinker base class and the rules for creating steampunk Technological Devices. Seriously, it's all freakin' awesome ''':3''' That's the only reason I'm interested. Now, with that said, the book also has a number of other new rules, all of which are completely compatible with existing D&D rules. New feats and feat types, new takes on a few base classes, of course the rules for Technological Devices and Firearms (best I've seen them handled yet), even rules for making statistics of communities and cities, and more. All these things can make fine additions to DanDwiki. Just like Unearthed Arcana and all the new rules it brought about.<br />
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Now, of course, due to the nature of the OGL, only rules and mechanics can be posted, none of the actual flavor (which is perfectly fine with me). If there are no other suggestions, I will probably follow a format similar to the one we have for the actual SRD, because this book is also laid out in a similar way. As for the actual copying down, I will be attempting to do so word-for-word wherever possible (minus the flavor-only sections which won't be copied at all, of course), but in some cases I will have to paraphrase to omit flavor and setting references. I will leave a note on each page where this happens. Also, a good amound of the content is identical to stuff already in the SRD, as it works like a "replacement" Player's Handbook and DMG; in these cases, I will simply link to the existing SRD. In some cases, the name is the only thing different. In this case, I will make a redirect to the SRD. But for anything new or different, I will make the new page for.<br />
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To get started, all I will need is a new section to do so, and a new page identified (homebrew and regular stuff has "article" as the tab, SRD pages are "srd", Unearthed stuff is "ua", discussions are "discussion", etc. For the new section, it can just be "Warcraft" or "World of Warcraft", and that can be put in the navigation box under UA, and the pages can be "wrd", for "Warcraft Reference Document".<br />
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So. What does everyone think?<br />
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== SRD weapons & armor error? ==<br />
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There appears to be a problem with sevearl SRD weapons and armor pages, particularity in the enchantment area. An example would be the Morningstar. [http://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/SRD:Morningstar] Is there anyway to fix it? {{unsigned|98.22.233.36}}<br />
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:The wiki's having problems right now. Rest assured that the coding on those pages is fine, it's just that the back end stuff that supports that coding is currently out of order. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 16:44, 5 July 2010 (UTC)<br />
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== Broken Redirects Oddity ==<br />
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You guys have any way to fix this? Over at [[Special:BrokenRedirects]] it is listing ''"Humans, Æskmann (DnD Race)"'' and ''"Form:4e Class Power"'' as the only two broken redirects, but neither actually exist. &nbsp;<small><span style="border: 1px solid black; -moz-border-radius:10px">[[User:Hooper|'''<span style="background-color:White; color:Black; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> Hooper </span>''']][[User talk:Hooper|<span style="background-color:Black; color:white; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;talk&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Hooper|<span style="background-color:black; color:white">&nbsp;&nbsp;contribs&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Emailuser/Hooper|<span style="background-color:black; color:white; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:10px; -moz-border-radius-topright:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;email&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]]</span></small> 10:15, 9 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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:Fixed one (partially). See also [[Talk:3.5e Flaws#Flaw Form]]. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:46, 9 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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::That odd one might be fixed now. &mdash; <span style="color:#002137;">[[User:Blue Dragon|Blue Dragon]] <small> ([[User_talk:Blue Dragon|talk]])</small></span> 16:19, 12 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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== DnD Links ==<br />
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:''Discussion moved to [[Talk:DnD Links#Social Networking]].'' <small>--[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 16:38, 21 June 2011 (MDT)</small><br />
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== Site nominated for an Award ==<br />
*See: [[Talk:Main_Page#Site_nominated_for_an_Award]] {{User:Hooper/autosig2}} 18:54, 14 August 2011 (MDT)<br />
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== Accidentally Locked a page ==<br />
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Hi Admins<br />
I wanted to add a feat I found in the Complete Warrior and I also wanted it to look right on the page so I borrowed some code from [[SRD:Shield Bash|Shield Bash]] but after I uploaded it I can no longer edit it because I don't have the necessary clearance. Could you undo my last two updates to the [[Shield Slam(3.5e Feat)]]? Thanks before hand --<span style="font-family:albertus mt; font-variant:small-caps; margin-left:4px; border:2px solid #501010;"><span style="background:#CA2020; border:3px solid #7B0E0E; padding:0px 5px 0px 5px;">'''[[User:ElvenKingSlave|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;">ElvenKingSlave</span>]]'''&nbsp;<font color="white">&middot;</font>&nbsp;[[Exalted Wiki:Human|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;" title="I will drown you in daggers!">Weapons Summoner</span>]]&nbsp;<font color="white">&middot;</font>&nbsp;[[User talk:ElvenKingSlave|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;" title="Contact me">Talk</span></span>]]</span> 11:54, 5 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Was this related to cloudflare perchance? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 13:33, 9 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Please delete my rubbish. ==<br />
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Please can an admin please delete my page [[Rebelstar (4e Campaign Setting)]] and its subpages? I won't be developing it any further. Thank-you. I've also noticed a backlog at [[Category:Candidates for Deletion]]. If more hands are needed, I might nominate myself for adminship :) [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:55, 17 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Per our policy I can't delete it outright, but I have added the {{tl|delete}} template; next time someone goes through the category for deletion it will likely be deleted. As for admin, feel free to [[RFA|nominate yourself officially]], though (and I mean no offense) since you have not made many edits. Stick around and you never know; there is waaaaay more work around here than we have workers. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 17:54, 26 December 2011 (MST)<br />
::Thanks! [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 01:47, 28 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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== 4e types and subtypes ==<br />
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I've noticed something confusing about our categorization system for 4e races. What we are calling "Subtype" is actually "Type", and what we are calling "Type" is actually "Origin" (see Monster Manual p. 6). For example, it should be "Humanoid Type" and "Natural Origin", not "Natural Type" and "Humanoid Subtype". I've also seen pages with keywords ("undead" etc) used as subtypes. It will be a pain changing the categories on all the 4e race articles, but I'm prepared to put the work in if the admins give me the go-ahead. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:12, 7 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:That would be very appreciated if you corrected the categories for races. Creatures are also in the same boat. When you are organizing the category please add [[:Category:4e]] to the 4e types as well as add it to the new origin categories. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 17:03, 7 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::Do we want categories like [[:Category:Humanoid Type]] which has mixed 3e and 4e content? I was thinking of separating them ("Category: Humanoid 4e Type"), particularly to avoid the above confusion where Beast is a 3e Subtype but a 4e Type. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 14:14, 8 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:::I understand that they are not the same thing, however I feel that just having [[:Category:4e]] added is sufficient. The pages in the category will have their appropriate identifier and that as well as having the category be a part of the 4e category tree should work. If one wants just the 4e pages they can make a dpl. Also none of the other categories have been edition specific (for example [[:Category:Race]]). --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 14:40, 8 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::::Okay, thanks, I'll get to work on that. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:34, 9 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Racial Feats ==<br />
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Hello. Me again :)<br />
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I wanted to find a better way of presenting racial feats on the main race article, so that readers can get a better overview of what the feats do. I did some script-kiddying and tried some code from [[4e Racial Feats]] and applied it to [[Barbed Devil (4e Race)]]. (To get this to work, I added a "Barbed Devil Feat" category to the feat pages... perhaps there's a different way?). I just want to make sure that this isn't going to blow the wiki up or cause some other problem. Thanks, [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 12:03, 12 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:Nah, it should be fine. I only *just* understand the DPL code, so I always copy/paste it from somewhere else as well. And as far as I know, there'd be no way to do it without creating a category; this way is MUCH cleaner (and more accurate) than going around trying to manually add all the feats. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 18:08, 15 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::I made [[:Category:Weapon Summoner Bonus Feat]] so it can have a feat list like the [[SRD:Fighter|fighter]]. I find that this is a good way to go. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 12:00, 19 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== 4e Race Vizison ==<br />
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I finished adding a new race [[Vizison (4e Race)]] about 5 days ago,and I keep wondering «are they too powerful? Timecontrol is pretty epic. Nah I put ''huge'' penalties to them if they fail to meet the Arcana. I keep wondering through. Could one of you guys review it and tell me what you think? --[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 16:18, 1 February 2012 (UTC)<br />
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:I took a look at it. For future reference please use {{tl|requestreview}} to get something reviewed. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 10:35, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== What does it take? ==<br />
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I'm hoping sooner or later,that I would become a major contributer, but I don't know what it would take, maybe a thousand contributions and being well known and trusted? I don't want to be an admin. I also thought maybe this should be a Title, and it should be earned the same way adminship--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Viziton&diff=550229User:Viziton2012-02-10T01:04:00Z<p>Viziton: </p>
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<div>==Greetings==<br />
I am a awesome editor,whose about to dump his fantasy universe in D&D,there will be awesome,there will be godliness,and there will be VIZITON. hope you'll enjoy my page :]<br />
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===About Me===<br />
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'''Real Name:'''Gavyn<br />
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'''Nicknames:'''Gavon,Viziton<br />
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'''Editions Played:''' 4th (I started playing about a two months ago)<br />
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'''Character's Name:''' Marrock<br />
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'''Character's Race:''' Lythari Elf<br />
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'''Character's Class:''' Blood Warrior<br />
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===Races Created===<br />
[[Vizison (4e Race)|Vizison]],<br />
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===Races in Progress===<br />
[[Toa]],<br />
Lythari(not uploaded yet)<br />
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===Creature Created===<br />
none yet<br />
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===Creatures in Progress===<br />
[[Vizison Blademaster]]<br />
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===Classes Created===<br />
none yet but one is almost done<br />
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===Classes in Progress===<br />
[[Blood Warrior]],<br />
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===Paragon Paths Created===<br />
not even touch that yet<br />
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===Paragon Paths in Progress===<br />
none yet<br />
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===Epic Destinies Created=== <br />
none yet<br />
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===Epic Destinies in Progress===<br />
[[The Vizison King]],<br />
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===Powers Created===<br />
[[Battle Ready (4e Power)]],[[Battle Wrath (4e Power)]],[[Defensive Stand (4e Power)]],[[Duelist's Assault (4e Power)]],[[Mobile Blade (4e Power)]],[[Nimble Position (4e Power)]],[[Steady Position (4e Power)]],[[Power Strike(4e Power)]],[[Blood Mark (4e Power)]].<br />
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===Powers in Progress===<br />
working on all the powers for the [[Blood Warrior Powers (4e Power List)|Blood Warrior]]<br />
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===Comments=== <br />
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if you want to ask or tell me something, go to my [[User talk:Viziton|talk page]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=549983Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-07T20:04:40Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|Missing fluff.}}<br />
{{wording|Grammatical, mainly sentence structure and spacing, and formatting problems, for example "''Int+2''" is not correct.}}<br />
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== Vizison ==<br />
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'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
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{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Intelligence +2, Dexterity +2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison, Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana +2, Stealth + 2<br />
|trait1= Time Trance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hit points without spending surges .<br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= You have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar.<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge, assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner= Race<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Attack<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target= Creatures in burst/blast.<br />
|attack= Intelligence<br />
|defense= Will<br />
|attackextra= Arcana check 10<br />
|hit= no damage<br />
|miss= User is slowed(save ends)<br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
}}<br />
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<!- Fluff. -><br />
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Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
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=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
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Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
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=== Vizison History ===<br />
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Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
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You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
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''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
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'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
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'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
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=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
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you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
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1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
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2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
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3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
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4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
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5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
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You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
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=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
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Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
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Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
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Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
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Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
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You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
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{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Viziton&diff=549982User talk:Viziton2012-02-07T19:06:39Z<p>Viziton: /* Don't take it personal */</p>
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<div>== Welcome to D&D Wiki! == <br />
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;Welcome!<br />
Hello Viziton and welcome to D&D Wiki. I hope you have been enjoying D&D Wiki and I hope you have been finding the information here useful. Before you start contributing it is recommended you make sure your [[Special:Preferences|user preferences]] match your preferences. I help administer D&D Wiki, and everything relating to D&D Wiki's administration can be found [[Meta Pages#Administration|here]].<br />
;Questions:<br />
If you have any questions about a specific page please ask it on that page's talk page. If you have a D&D-related question please ask it on [[DnD Discussion]]s. Other questions should be asked to another ([http://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/index.php?title=User_talk:Green_Dragon&action=edit&section=new ask me a question]).<br />
;Formatting<br />
Formatting on D&D Wiki (or any wiki for that matter) can be very difficult, and if you need help a good place to start is [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Editing Help:Editing] on Wikipedia (or even their [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Introduction Introduction] page). This will explain basic wiki formatting and should provide quite a few useful links that explain more specific areas of wiki formatting. Again, if you have any questions about formatting on D&D Wiki please ask them as, I imagine, anybody will be more than happy to help you get them answered.<br />
;Community<br />
A strong and welcoming community exists on D&D Wiki, and I am sure you will find it rather nice. Most discussions take place on content talk pages, however please feel free to ask specific D&D-related questions on [[DnD Discussion]]s. Anyway, possibly since discussions are never deleted, people try to be nice. This means follow Wikipedia's guidelines on [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Civility civility] and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Etiquette etiquette] when discussing anything. Also, on a pretty different note, to ensure people know who posted what, please sign your name after a post with four tildes (<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>) or by clicking on the signature icon ([[Image:Signature_icon.png]]). This will automatically produce your name and the date. Anyway, I hope you come to enjoy D&D Wiki and the community and welcome again, you are now a D&D Wikian. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 11:13, 31 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Don't take it personal ==<br />
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Hey brother, please don't take our critiques personally, and you haven't been. We are just trying to help you out so you can make the best possible race.--[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 09:19, 7 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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No prolem at all, I acturaly really thankful for your and Maseurie's help(I misspelled his name)<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=549691Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-05T13:13:19Z<p>Viziton: /* What is Fluff? */ new section</p>
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<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
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[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Vizison Names ==<br />
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I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
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:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
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==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
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"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
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"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed<br />
<br />
== Vizison images!! ==<br />
<br />
I've hired my brother to draw a picture of a Vizison male and female, and it will uploaded onto the page after it's uploaded I'd like to hear people's thoughts<br />
<br />
== It Is Complete!!!!!!! ==<br />
<br />
I've finished everything but the picture making it a complete Race and should go on the small list up there, what does everyone else think?<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:08, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
I can't make the picture appear on the page, I tried uploading it but it doesn't macth MIME tpye and I don't know what it means<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:22, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
:I'm afraid Time Trance is still broken, since it removes a core resourcing mechanic. I get the idea, and I suggest something like "When you take a short rest, you gain a +2 bonus to your healing surge value."<br />
:4e isn't supposed to have unique racial languages, so I suggest dropping Vizison as a language.<br />
:I still can't make any sense of Battle Pause. It targets arcana check 10? Wut? :) Racial traits shouldn't be specific to classes - that's what race/class combo feats are for. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:50, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
I was planning to make a campain setting after the Vizison were set and ready to give the language some use,and I'll make some changes with Battle Pause <br />
I make sense of what target for.--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:24, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Spell check and Grammar ==<br />
<br />
I liked the idea behind the race but I had difficulty understanding a good bit of it. Could you go back over it and tweak the spelling and grammar mistakes?--[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 09:52, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
Sure,but it will take awhile I did all of this on kindle and I'm not good with grammar or spelling--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:12, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Alignment and Religion ==<br />
<br />
What alignment would the Vizison typically be, and what religion would they follow? --[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 11:07, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
They're useually unaligned unless their messed with,and they worship Viziton, the god of time--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:55, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
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== What is Fluff? ==<br />
<br />
so I have a question, what is fluff for?--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 06:13, 5 February 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=549686Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-05T13:01:47Z<p>Viziton: </p>
<hr />
<div>{{stub|Missing fluff.}}<br />
{{wording|Grammatical, mainly sentence structure and spacing, and formatting problems, for example "''Int+2''" is not correct.}}<br />
<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Intelligence +2, Dexterity +2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison, Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana +2, Stealth + 2<br />
|trait1= Time Trance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hit points without spending surges .<br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= You have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar.<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge, assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner= Race<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Attack<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack= Intelligence<br />
|defense= Will<br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit= no damage<br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
}}<br />
<br />
<!- Fluff. -><br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=549627Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-05T00:49:33Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{needsbalance|The power should be vs something. If it is not it unbalances the encounter, and can lead to permanent unconsciousness very quickly (two rounds).}}<br />
{{stub|Missing fluff.}}<br />
{{wording|Grammatical, mainly sentence structure and spacing, and formatting problems, for example "''Int+2''" is not correct.}}<br />
<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Intelligence +2, Dexterity +2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison, Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana +2, Stealth + 2<br />
|trait1= Time Trance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hit points without spending surges .<br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= You have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar.<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge, assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner= Race<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Attack<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack= Intelligence<br />
|defense= Will<br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit= no damage<br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
}}<br />
<br />
<!- Fluff. -><br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=549626Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-05T00:47:28Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{needsbalance|The power should be vs something. If it is not it unbalances the encounter, and can lead to permanent unconsciousness very quickly (two rounds).}}<br />
{{stub|Missing fluff.}}<br />
{{wording|Grammatical, mainly sentence structure and spacing, and formatting problems, for example "''Int+2''" is not correct.}}<br />
<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Intelligence +2, Dexterity +2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison, Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana +2, Stealth + 2<br />
|trait1= Time Trance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hit points without spending surges .<br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= You have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar.<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge, assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Attack<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack= Intelligence<br />
|defense= Will<br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit= no damage<br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
}}<br />
<br />
<!- Fluff. -><br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=549625Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-05T00:44:15Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{needsbalance|The power should be vs something. If it is not it unbalances the encounter, and can lead to permanent unconsciousness very quickly (two rounds).}}<br />
{{stub|Missing fluff.}}<br />
{{wording|Grammatical, mainly sentence structure and spacing, and formatting problems, for example "''Int+2''" is not correct.}}<br />
<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Intelligence +2, Dexterity +2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison, Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana +2, Stealth + 2<br />
|trait1= Time Trance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hit points without spending surges .<br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= You have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar.<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge, assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack= Intelligence<br />
|defense= Will<br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
}}<br />
<br />
<!- Fluff. -><br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
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You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
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''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
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'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
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'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
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=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
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=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
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Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
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Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
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Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
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You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
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<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
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[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
<br />
==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
<br />
"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
<br />
"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed<br />
<br />
== Vizison images!! ==<br />
<br />
I've hired my brother to draw a picture of a Vizison male and female, and it will uploaded onto the page after it's uploaded I'd like to hear people's thoughts<br />
<br />
== It Is Complete!!!!!!! ==<br />
<br />
I've finished everything but the picture making it a complete Race and should go on the small list up there, what does everyone else think?<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:08, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
I can't make the picture appear on the page, I tried uploading it but it doesn't macth MIME tpye and I don't know what it means<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:22, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
:I'm afraid Time Trance is still broken, since it removes a core resourcing mechanic. I get the idea, and I suggest something like "When you take a short rest, you gain a +2 bonus to your healing surge value."<br />
:4e isn't supposed to have unique racial languages, so I suggest dropping Vizison as a language.<br />
:I still can't make any sense of Battle Pause. It targets arcana check 10? Wut? :) Racial traits shouldn't be specific to classes - that's what race/class combo feats are for. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:50, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
I was planning to make a campain setting after the Vizison were set and ready to give the language some use,and I'll make some changes with Battle Pause <br />
I make sense of what target for.--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:24, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Spell check and Grammar ==<br />
<br />
I liked the idea behind the race but I had difficulty understanding a good bit of it. Could you go back over it and tweak the spelling and grammar mistakes?--[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 09:52, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
Sure,but it will take awhile I did all of this on kindle and I'm not good with grammar or spelling--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:12, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Alignment and Religion ==<br />
<br />
What alignment would the Vizison typically be, and what religion would they follow? --[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 11:07, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
They're useually unaligned unless their messed with,and they worship Viziton, the god of time--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:55, 2 February 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=549326Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-02T14:24:43Z<p>Viziton: /* It Is Complete!!!!!!! */</p>
<hr />
<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
<br />
[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
<br />
==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
<br />
"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
<br />
"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed<br />
<br />
== Vizison images!! ==<br />
<br />
I've hired my brother to draw a picture of a Vizison male and female, and it will uploaded onto the page after it's uploaded I'd like to hear people's thoughts<br />
<br />
== It Is Complete!!!!!!! ==<br />
<br />
I've finished everything but the picture making it a complete Race and should go on the small list up there, what does everyone else think?<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:08, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
I can't make the picture appear on the page, I tried uploading it but it doesn't macth MIME tpye and I don't know what it means<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:22, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
:I'm afraid Time Trance is still broken, since it removes a core resourcing mechanic. I get the idea, and I suggest something like "When you take a short rest, you gain a +2 bonus to your healing surge value."<br />
:4e isn't supposed to have unique racial languages, so I suggest dropping Vizison as a language.<br />
:I still can't make any sense of Battle Pause. It targets arcana check 10? Wut? :) Racial traits shouldn't be specific to classes - that's what race/class combo feats are for. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:50, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
I was planning to make a campain setting after the Vizison were set and ready to give the language some use,and I'll make some changes with Battle Pause <br />
I make sense of what target for.--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:24, 2 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Spell check and Grammar ==<br />
<br />
I liked the idea behind the race but I had difficulty understanding a good bit of it. Could you go back over it and tweak the spelling and grammar mistakes?--[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 09:52, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
Sure,but it will take awhile I did all of this on kindle and I'm not good with grammar or spelling--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:12, 2 February 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=549325Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-02-02T14:12:14Z<p>Viziton: /* Spell check and Grammar */</p>
<hr />
<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
<br />
[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
<br />
==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
<br />
"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
<br />
"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed<br />
<br />
== Vizison images!! ==<br />
<br />
I've hired my brother to draw a picture of a Vizison male and female, and it will uploaded onto the page after it's uploaded I'd like to hear people's thoughts<br />
<br />
== It Is Complete!!!!!!! ==<br />
<br />
I've finished everything but the picture making it a complete Race and should go on the small list up there, what does everyone else think?<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:08, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
I can't make the picture appear on the page, I tried uploading it but it doesn't macth MIME tpye and I don't know what it means<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:22, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
:I'm afraid Time Trance is still broken, since it removes a core resourcing mechanic. I get the idea, and I suggest something like "When you take a short rest, you gain a +2 bonus to your healing surge value."<br />
:4e isn't supposed to have unique racial languages, so I suggest dropping Vizison as a language.<br />
:I still can't make any sense of Battle Pause. It targets arcana check 10? Wut? :) Racial traits shouldn't be specific to classes - that's what race/class combo feats are for. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:50, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Spell check and Grammar ==<br />
<br />
I liked the idea behind the race but I had difficulty understanding a good bit of it. Could you go back over it and tweak the spelling and grammar mistakes?--[[User:Irykyl| Irykyl]] 09:52, 1 February 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
Sure,but it will take awhile I did all of this on kindle and I'm not good with grammar or spelling--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 07:12, 2 February 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Admin&diff=549181User talk:Admin2012-02-01T16:18:27Z<p>Viziton: /* is my race too powerfull? */ new section</p>
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So, getting straight to it, the first things come directly from the Wizards website. They have a few old archives, the oldest of which being the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/retired Retired Articles and Archives]. there is the notice attached to this archive, reading:<br />
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"Looking for a series that you used to read? We keep our retired series online for a time here. They won't stay here forever, though, so we recommend that you print out old series for yourself, as once they leave this area, they live only in memory. "<br />
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Most of the artcles within aren't of much interest or use to this wiki, but two of them have usable material in them; the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/mm Monster Mayhem] article and the [http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=dnd/arch/sb Spellbook] article. They both have unique monsters and spells, respectively, that currently are not kept anywhere else. Of course, being part of the retired articles archive means they won't be there forever. I would like to preserve the entires in these articles on this site.<br />
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In case anyone is thinking, I don't think there are any real issues with doing so. These things are posted up on a free-access website for the world to see. And, as retired archives that won't be kept forever, they explicitly say to make your own copies if you wish to keep using them after removal. Copies that, theoretically, could be replicated and distibuted freely and indefinitely after the fact. In that sense, is there any difference between "printing" if you do it electronically rather than physically?<br />
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With an administrator approval consensus, I'd like to take the entries from these two articles and add them to the SRD of this site, of course with respect to their origins by either putting a note on the pages themselves or creating their own subsections.<br />
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Discuss/What say you? -- [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 19:37, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:So long as they are OGL, I am in full support. Also, that old Psionics column wasn't bad; I think it was called Mind's Eye. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 22:23, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::...does anyone else have anything to say about this? This project isn't going to go anywhere without more administrator input. [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 18:18, 10 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::What's wrong with one administrator giving you the go-ahead? If anyone has an issue with it, they can take it up with me. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 19:21, 10 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Partially I wanted to see what all the other admins thought of it, but mostly I hoped someone would be able to reinforce of weaken whether my case of it being okay to transcribe the archives here. However, if you're saying "go for it", then I guess I will, after a few more details are worked out. [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 11:13, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::I'd hold off on it. I emailed WotC via their customer support. It was submitted in their "copyright" category, so it would have immediately gone to the right place. When they received it, however, the first thing they did was escalate it to a higher level. I do believe that means that, instead of having a set answer, they're considering it. I'll let you know what they say, but in the meantime I'd say don't put it on the site. --[[User:Daniel Draco|Daniel Draco]] 12:08, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Whoa, that sounds kinda heavy. I'm curious, what exactly did your message contain?<br />
::::::And it's probably too late for this, but one of the details I wanted to work out was getting the -whole- pages, mechanics plus flavor stuff (except for specific names, of course), on the same grounds as doing this in the first place; once they're gone, they're gone since they don't exist anywhere else, and I want to preserve them. Though, since as I've said it's probably already too late to ask for anything more, I won't complain if mechanics are all we get (if we get even that ''':/''' ). [[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 23:08, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::"Escalating to a higher level" just means the person he emailed tossed it to their boss. At the very least, I'd suggest making sure you have all the pages saved. [[User:Dragon Child|Dragon Child]] 23:10, 12 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::We would have to make an entire new section. Something like "Wizards Articles". Are you really interested in doing this or do you think it would be too much work or who knows what? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 00:42, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::Why would we need a new section? Just have a little header on the top, something like ''"This article was originally published by Wizards of the Coast under their (Insert Name Here) section"'', kind of like what's done with some Tome articles. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 09:44, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::::::I was thinking a new section would have to be made, but I don't have enough experience working with this site to do that. I'd need someone else to do that, but I'm confident I can get all the actual pages myself once a section's created.<br />
::::::::::Besides, this is -nothing- compared to another project I have in mind when this is over... why do you think this is only "Project #1"? '''>:]'''<br />
::::::::::Hey, what the heck? Who changed that? Fixing...Done. --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 12:23, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::::I would be more then willing to help create the infrastructure of a Wizards archive like section and help out a bit however do you know what the license is on the Wizards archives? I looked though Wizards [http://ww2.wizards.com/Company/Default.aspx?doc=SiteLegalNotice Wizards.com & Gleemax.com Website Terms of Use] a bit and [http://ww2.wizards.com/Company/Default.aspx?doc=Privacy Wizards web site privacy statement] however I did not see anything relating to their archive section. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:32, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
::::::::::::Daniel Draco and I (well, pretty much just Daniel Draco) have been working on that particular detail this whole time, by e-mailing Wizards. Right now we've been stalled on a reply. When Daniel knows, we'll know. --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 15:46, 13 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
{{Discussion Indentation Revert}}<br />
<br />
:Damn it all, wizards responded to Draco and said no. That's projects #1, 2, and 4 down the drain. However, an unrelated project that I am absolutely sure will work can now get underway. I'll post details later so we can get started.<br />
<br />
::In any case [[Main Page]] &rarr; [[3.5e Open Game Content]] &rarr; [[Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives]]. Their you go. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:49, 5 September 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
::One, that wasn't a malicious edit (as it was all my own stuff originally), but if you have not yet realized, Wizards. Said. No. We cannot have their archives. You must take down that page, as I have said [[Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives|here]], or they will very likely sue you! But hey, if you want to have them file a lawsuit against you, that's fine by me... --[[User:TheWarforgedArtificer|TheWarforgedArtificer]] 16:06, 5 September 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
:::You are talking about a '''whole''' different subject. I am referring to content which we are legally '''allowed''' to have (not copyrighted things). See also [[Talk:Transcribed Wizards of the Coast Online Archives]]. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 23:01, 3 November 2009 (MST)<br />
<br />
==Propositions for Addition/Expansion of this Wiki==<br />
<br />
(making a new section here is how someone suggested I should do this)<br />
<br />
So, I'm fairly new to this site, but I've got a few (official, not homebrew) things I'd like to see added, if possible. There a number of such things, but I'm only going to go one at a time, and I'm putting them up here for administrator discussion.<br />
<br />
===Project #2===<br />
<br />
Alright. The project that was planned for #3 is now #2. This project is not about articles from Wizards sites. This project is for copying down OG content from a sourcebook. And it ''is'' under the OGL, it states that and even has a specific license in the back of the book. If I get started on this project, a word-for-word copy of the specific OGL will be the first thing I put up.<br />
<br />
Now, the book itself. And, don't freak out or anything when you read the title, let me explain first. The book is "World of Warcraft: The Roleplaying Game". Yes. It's Warcraft. But hear this first. I don't really care for the Warcraft setting. I've never played WoW or the original Warcraft games (Starcraft for the win ''':P''' ). The -only- reason I want to copy down this content is for one thing; the Tinker base class and the rules for creating steampunk Technological Devices. Seriously, it's all freakin' awesome ''':3''' That's the only reason I'm interested. Now, with that said, the book also has a number of other new rules, all of which are completely compatible with existing D&D rules. New feats and feat types, new takes on a few base classes, of course the rules for Technological Devices and Firearms (best I've seen them handled yet), even rules for making statistics of communities and cities, and more. All these things can make fine additions to DanDwiki. Just like Unearthed Arcana and all the new rules it brought about.<br />
<br />
Now, of course, due to the nature of the OGL, only rules and mechanics can be posted, none of the actual flavor (which is perfectly fine with me). If there are no other suggestions, I will probably follow a format similar to the one we have for the actual SRD, because this book is also laid out in a similar way. As for the actual copying down, I will be attempting to do so word-for-word wherever possible (minus the flavor-only sections which won't be copied at all, of course), but in some cases I will have to paraphrase to omit flavor and setting references. I will leave a note on each page where this happens. Also, a good amound of the content is identical to stuff already in the SRD, as it works like a "replacement" Player's Handbook and DMG; in these cases, I will simply link to the existing SRD. In some cases, the name is the only thing different. In this case, I will make a redirect to the SRD. But for anything new or different, I will make the new page for.<br />
<br />
To get started, all I will need is a new section to do so, and a new page identified (homebrew and regular stuff has "article" as the tab, SRD pages are "srd", Unearthed stuff is "ua", discussions are "discussion", etc. For the new section, it can just be "Warcraft" or "World of Warcraft", and that can be put in the navigation box under UA, and the pages can be "wrd", for "Warcraft Reference Document".<br />
<br />
So. What does everyone think?<br />
<br />
== SRD weapons & armor error? ==<br />
<br />
There appears to be a problem with sevearl SRD weapons and armor pages, particularity in the enchantment area. An example would be the Morningstar. [http://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/SRD:Morningstar] Is there anyway to fix it? {{unsigned|98.22.233.36}}<br />
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:The wiki's having problems right now. Rest assured that the coding on those pages is fine, it's just that the back end stuff that supports that coding is currently out of order. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 16:44, 5 July 2010 (UTC)<br />
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== Broken Redirects Oddity ==<br />
<br />
You guys have any way to fix this? Over at [[Special:BrokenRedirects]] it is listing ''"Humans, Æskmann (DnD Race)"'' and ''"Form:4e Class Power"'' as the only two broken redirects, but neither actually exist. &nbsp;<small><span style="border: 1px solid black; -moz-border-radius:10px">[[User:Hooper|'''<span style="background-color:White; color:Black; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> Hooper </span>''']][[User talk:Hooper|<span style="background-color:Black; color:white; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;talk&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Hooper|<span style="background-color:black; color:white">&nbsp;&nbsp;contribs&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Emailuser/Hooper|<span style="background-color:black; color:white; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:10px; -moz-border-radius-topright:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;email&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]]</span></small> 10:15, 9 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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:Fixed one (partially). See also [[Talk:3.5e Flaws#Flaw Form]]. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:46, 9 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
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::That odd one might be fixed now. &mdash; <span style="color:#002137;">[[User:Blue Dragon|Blue Dragon]] <small> ([[User_talk:Blue Dragon|talk]])</small></span> 16:19, 12 June 2011 (MDT)<br />
<br />
== DnD Links ==<br />
<br />
:''Discussion moved to [[Talk:DnD Links#Social Networking]].'' <small>--[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 16:38, 21 June 2011 (MDT)</small><br />
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== Site nominated for an Award ==<br />
*See: [[Talk:Main_Page#Site_nominated_for_an_Award]] {{User:Hooper/autosig2}} 18:54, 14 August 2011 (MDT)<br />
<br />
== Accidentally Locked a page ==<br />
<br />
Hi Admins<br />
I wanted to add a feat I found in the Complete Warrior and I also wanted it to look right on the page so I borrowed some code from [[SRD:Shield Bash|Shield Bash]] but after I uploaded it I can no longer edit it because I don't have the necessary clearance. Could you undo my last two updates to the [[Shield Slam(3.5e Feat)]]? Thanks before hand --<span style="font-family:albertus mt; font-variant:small-caps; margin-left:4px; border:2px solid #501010;"><span style="background:#CA2020; border:3px solid #7B0E0E; padding:0px 5px 0px 5px;">'''[[User:ElvenKingSlave|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;">ElvenKingSlave</span>]]'''&nbsp;<font color="white">&middot;</font>&nbsp;[[Exalted Wiki:Human|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;" title="I will drown you in daggers!">Weapons Summoner</span>]]&nbsp;<font color="white">&middot;</font>&nbsp;[[User talk:ElvenKingSlave|<span style="color:gold; font-size:75%;" title="Contact me">Talk</span></span>]]</span> 11:54, 5 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Was this related to cloudflare perchance? --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 13:33, 9 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Please delete my rubbish. ==<br />
<br />
Please can an admin please delete my page [[Rebelstar (4e Campaign Setting)]] and its subpages? I won't be developing it any further. Thank-you. I've also noticed a backlog at [[Category:Candidates for Deletion]]. If more hands are needed, I might nominate myself for adminship :) [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:55, 17 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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:Per our policy I can't delete it outright, but I have added the {{tl|delete}} template; next time someone goes through the category for deletion it will likely be deleted. As for admin, feel free to [[RFA|nominate yourself officially]], though (and I mean no offense) since you have not made many edits. Stick around and you never know; there is waaaaay more work around here than we have workers. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 17:54, 26 December 2011 (MST)<br />
::Thanks! [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 01:47, 28 December 2011 (MST)<br />
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== 4e types and subtypes ==<br />
<br />
I've noticed something confusing about our categorization system for 4e races. What we are calling "Subtype" is actually "Type", and what we are calling "Type" is actually "Origin" (see Monster Manual p. 6). For example, it should be "Humanoid Type" and "Natural Origin", not "Natural Type" and "Humanoid Subtype". I've also seen pages with keywords ("undead" etc) used as subtypes. It will be a pain changing the categories on all the 4e race articles, but I'm prepared to put the work in if the admins give me the go-ahead. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 04:12, 7 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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:That would be very appreciated if you corrected the categories for races. Creatures are also in the same boat. When you are organizing the category please add [[:Category:4e]] to the 4e types as well as add it to the new origin categories. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 17:03, 7 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::Do we want categories like [[:Category:Humanoid Type]] which has mixed 3e and 4e content? I was thinking of separating them ("Category: Humanoid 4e Type"), particularly to avoid the above confusion where Beast is a 3e Subtype but a 4e Type. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 14:14, 8 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
:::I understand that they are not the same thing, however I feel that just having [[:Category:4e]] added is sufficient. The pages in the category will have their appropriate identifier and that as well as having the category be a part of the 4e category tree should work. If one wants just the 4e pages they can make a dpl. Also none of the other categories have been edition specific (for example [[:Category:Race]]). --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 14:40, 8 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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::::Okay, thanks, I'll get to work on that. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:34, 9 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Racial Feats ==<br />
<br />
Hello. Me again :)<br />
<br />
I wanted to find a better way of presenting racial feats on the main race article, so that readers can get a better overview of what the feats do. I did some script-kiddying and tried some code from [[4e Racial Feats]] and applied it to [[Barbed Devil (4e Race)]]. (To get this to work, I added a "Barbed Devil Feat" category to the feat pages... perhaps there's a different way?). I just want to make sure that this isn't going to blow the wiki up or cause some other problem. Thanks, [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 12:03, 12 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
:Nah, it should be fine. I only *just* understand the DPL code, so I always copy/paste it from somewhere else as well. And as far as I know, there'd be no way to do it without creating a category; this way is MUCH cleaner (and more accurate) than going around trying to manually add all the feats. [[User:Jazzman831|Jazz]][[User talk:Jazzman831|Man]] 18:08, 15 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
::I made [[:Category:Weapon Summoner Bonus Feat]] so it can have a feat list like the [[SRD:Fighter|fighter]]. I find that this is a good way to go. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 12:00, 19 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== is my race too powerfull? ==<br />
<br />
I finished adding a new race( [[Vizison]] ) to the 4e about 5 days ago,and I keept wodering «are they too powerful?timecontrol is pretty epic. nah i put HUGE penaltys to them if they fail to meet the Arcana.‟ i keep wondering through .<br />
could one of you guys reveiw it and tell me what you think?--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Viziton&diff=548709User:Viziton2012-01-30T18:49:04Z<p>Viziton: </p>
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<div>'''Races created:'''<br />
[[Vizison]]<br />
<br />
'''Races edited:'''<br />
none yet<br />
<br />
'''Races in Creation:'''<br />
[[Toa]]<br />
<br />
'''Creatures created:'''<br />
none yet<br />
<br />
'''Creature in Creation:'''<br />
[[Vizison Blademaster]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548628Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-29T20:22:15Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison History */</p>
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<div><br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common,Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Stealth+2<br />
|trait1= Time Tance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hp without spending surges <br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= you have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
You welcomed to make this more detailed if you like but if you're any new history tell me about it first in the page's talk<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 13:22, 29 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:03, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Viziton&diff=548624User:Viziton2012-01-29T20:08:59Z<p>Viziton: </p>
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<div>'''Races created:'''<br />
[[Vizison]]<br />
<br />
'''Races edited:'''<br />
none yet<br />
<br />
'''Races in Creation:'''<br />
[[Toa]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548620Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-29T19:28:46Z<p>Viziton: </p>
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<div><br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common,Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Stealth+2<br />
|trait1= Time Tance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hp without spending surges <br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= you have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:03, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Viziton&diff=548494User:Viziton2012-01-28T16:48:46Z<p>Viziton: </p>
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<div>'''Races created:'''<br />
[[Vizison]]<br />
<br />
'''Races edited:'''<br />
none yet<br />
<br />
'''Races in Creation:'''<br />
none at the monnent</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Viziton&diff=548389User:Viziton2012-01-28T05:27:14Z<p>Viziton: </p>
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<div>'''Races created:'''<br />
[[Vizison]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548388Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-28T05:24:23Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison History */</p>
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<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common,Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Stealth+2<br />
|trait1= Time Tance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hp without spending surges <br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= you have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Vizison History ===<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:03, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548387Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-28T05:22:49Z<p>Viziton: /* It Is Complete!!!!!!! */</p>
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<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
<br />
[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
<br />
==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
<br />
"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
<br />
"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed<br />
<br />
== Vizison images!! ==<br />
<br />
I've hired my brother to draw a picture of a Vizison male and female, and it will uploaded onto the page after it's uploaded I'd like to hear people's thoughts<br />
<br />
== It Is Complete!!!!!!! ==<br />
<br />
I've finished everything but the picture making it a complete Race and should go on the small list up there, what does everyone else think?<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:08, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
I can't make the picture appear on the page, I tried uploading it but it doesn't macth MIME tpye and I don't know what it means<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:22, 27 January 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548384Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-28T05:13:39Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 <br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common,Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Stealth+2<br />
|trait1= Time Tance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hp without spending surges <br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= you have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
== Vizison History ==<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:03, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548383Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-28T05:12:41Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 [[File:Sarrek and Lia.jpg]]<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common,Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Stealth+2<br />
|trait1= Time Tance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hp without spending surges <br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= you have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
== Vizison History ==<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:03, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Viziton&diff=548381User:Viziton2012-01-28T05:10:01Z<p>Viziton: Created page with "'''Viziton created:''' Vizison"</p>
<hr />
<div>'''Viziton created:'''<br />
[[Vizison]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548380Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-28T05:08:21Z<p>Viziton: /* It Is Complete!!!!!!! */ new section</p>
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<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
<br />
[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
<br />
==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
<br />
"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
<br />
"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed<br />
<br />
== Vizison images!! ==<br />
<br />
I've hired my brother to draw a picture of a Vizison male and female, and it will uploaded onto the page after it's uploaded I'd like to hear people's thoughts<br />
<br />
== It Is Complete!!!!!!! ==<br />
<br />
I've finished everything but the picture making it a complete Race and should go on the small list up there, what does everyone else think?<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:08, 27 January 2012 (MST)</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548378Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-28T05:03:51Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once the rulers of UnderDark, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits <br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190 [[File:Sarrek and Lia.jpg]]<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common,Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Stealth+2<br />
|trait1= Time Tance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hp without spending surges <br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficiency<br />
|description2= you have proficiency with the dagger and the scimitar<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassination.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10,fail:you're slowed for that round.<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penalty to all defenses for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of stealth and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,slender humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique.Normally their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
<br />
== Vizison History ==<br />
<br />
Long ago,Vizison were once the proud rulers of UnderDark,until the Drow society came and took over UnderDark and made the Vizison slaves. Many years later Vizison rebellions spend thoughout UnderDark,sparking a war for UnderDark. It's been hundreds of years since then and the war still rages on.<br />
<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curious about new things, they'll spend hours studying something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, which help them advance in technology. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient,OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curious<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
you can make more powers for Vizison powers if you wish,but you'll need to follow these rules to <br />
create a cool Vizison power, but not overpowered<br />
<br />
1. it has to have a time control keyword<br />
<br />
2. it normally requires a Arcana Check<br />
<br />
3. if the user fails to meet the check there should be a huge penalty<br />
<br />
4. Battle Pause was the only power that had a sustain option<br />
<br />
5. it has to be an Encounter power<br />
<br />
You can only use two Vizison powers per battle,and you can't use them both at the same time <br />
<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizison adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
Sarrek,a Male Vizison Blademaster who after training in the arts of the bladesmaster he set out for adventure of his own on the overworld. As a Vizion he has a natural attraction to the magical arts, and sought out a teacher. After a while he found just that. However, he found that the art of magery does not come for free. He used his skill in blades and agility, he sought out to becaome a thief. Now, after gathering the geld needed for his training in the dark arts he is a spellknife who traverses the realm in search of knowledge, adventure, and of course, wealth.<br />
<br />
Lia,a female Vizison Rouge. Lia came from a well known clan that's serves the Vizison Army, she was sent to the overworld to search for technology that can be used against the Drow society, she have found many useful things for such cause, but her mission is not over until the war is over. <br />
<br />
Varis,a male Vizison Mage who sought out to explore the overworld and learn it's technologies,<br />
he quickly learn the cultures of other species and managed to make some companions,he continues to explore the overworld. <br />
<br />
You're welcomed to make Lia or Varis more detailed if you wish.<br />
<br />
<br />
--[[User:Viziton|Viziton]] 22:03, 27 January 2012 (MST)<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548276Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-27T04:36:11Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison images!! */ new section</p>
<hr />
<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
<br />
[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
<br />
==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
<br />
"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
<br />
"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed<br />
<br />
== Vizison images!! ==<br />
<br />
I've hired my brother to draw a picture of a Vizison male and female, and it will uploaded onto the page after it's uploaded I'd like to hear people's thoughts</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548275Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-27T04:28:16Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= Time Tance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hp without spending surges <br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficily<br />
|description2= you have proficily in the dagger and the simatar<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassation.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class= Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2= Time Control<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are slowed and 5-penlty to all defenses for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curiuos about new things, they'll spend hours studling something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, whichs help them advance in technoly. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curiuos<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
still working on rules for making Vizison powers<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548274Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-27T04:22:40Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= Time Tance <br />
|description1= When you take a short rest you regain all hp without spending surges <br />
|trait2= Vizison Weapon Proficily<br />
|description2= you have proficily in the dagger and the simatar<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassation.<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curiuos about new things, they'll spend hours studling something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, whichs help them advance in technoly. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curiuos<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
still working on rules for making Vizison powers<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548273Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-27T04:09:08Z<p>Viziton: /* More brokenness */</p>
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<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
<br />
[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then<br />
<br />
==More brokenness==<br />
In addition to Battle Pause, the following traits are broken:<br />
<br />
"Blade Master: you have proficily [sic] in all blades" - ''Some'' races, such as the eladrin, have proficiency in one or two simple or martial weapons. As written, the Vizison are proficient in ''all'' light blades ''and'' heavy blades, including all superior weapons. This is overpowered.<br />
<br />
"Time Tance: you go into a tance [sic] of time, making an extended rest a short rest" - I can't make any sense out of this. Firstly, players can always decline an extended rest and take a short one instead. Secondly, by forcing this on Vizisons, they will never be able to restore their daily powers, make endurance checks for diseases, or any of the other things triggered by an extended rest. <br />
<br />
"shadow step: when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2" - they ''already'' get a +2 racial bonus to stealth. Don't stack on even more for a condition that is likely to come up frequently. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 03:09, 26 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
i'm changing Blade master to just dagger and simatar very soon<br />
Shadow Step will be deleted and time time tance will be modifed</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548160Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-26T04:20:16Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
'''' Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= shadow step <br />
|description1=when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2 <br />
|trait2= Blade Master<br />
|description2= you have proficily in all blades<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability, and if you're a rouge,assassin, or relelted classes, you can use Battle Pause before combat begins, allowing you to go for assassation.<br />
|trait4= Time Tance<br />
|description4= you go into a tance of time, making an extended rest a short rest<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curiuos about new things, they'll spend hours studling something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, whichs help them advance in technoly. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curiuos<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
still working on rules for making Vizison powers<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548153Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-26T01:13:11Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
''''Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they fight against the Drows for control over UnderDark. '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= shadow step <br />
|description1=when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2 <br />
|trait2= Blade Master<br />
|description2= you have proficily in all blades<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curiuos about new things, they'll spend hours studling something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, whichs help them advance in technoly. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curiuos<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
still working on rules for making Vizison powers<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548152Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-26T00:49:47Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
''''Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they hold some of the most powerful secrets in the world '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= shadow step <br />
|description1=when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2 <br />
|trait2= Blade Master<br />
|description2= you have proficily in all blades<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curiuos about new things, they'll spend hours studling something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, whichs help them advance in technoly. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curiuos<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Other Vizison Powers ===<br />
<br />
still working on rules for making Vizison powers<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548136Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-25T23:22:48Z<p>Viziton: /* Playing an Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
''''Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they hold some of the most powerful secrets in the world '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= shadow step <br />
|description1=when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2 <br />
|trait2= Blade Master<br />
|description2= you have proficily in all blades<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
Vizison are VERY curiuos about new things, they'll spend hours studling something if they don't<br />
have any thing better to do, whichs help them advance in technoly. They always record new things ether using a recording spell or a journal, always in Vizison writing.Vizison are also VERY protective of their things,especially new things.<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly,Quick,Chatty,Curiuos<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548129Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-25T23:04:57Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
<hr />
<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
''''Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they hold some of the most powerful secrets in the world '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= shadow step <br />
|description1=when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2 <br />
|trait2= Blade Master<br />
|description2= you have proficily in all blades<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
still thinking on it<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly, Quick, Chatty<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548127Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-25T22:56:19Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
''''Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they hold some of the most powerful secrets in the world '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= shadow step <br />
|description1=when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2 <br />
|trait2= Blade Master<br />
|description2= you have proficily in all blades<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<!-fluff-><br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn the secrets of time control<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
still thinking on it<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly, Quick, Chatty<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548076Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-25T03:42:41Z<p>Viziton: /* Playing an Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
''''Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they hold some of the most powerful secrets in the world '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= shadow step <br />
|description1=when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2 <br />
|trait2= Blade Master<br />
|description2= you have proficily in all blades<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<!-fluff-><br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn some dark secrets about the gods<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
still thinking on it<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly, Quick, Chatty<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' Elven names<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548024Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-24T22:17:25Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison */</p>
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<div>{{stub|In progress}}<br />
== Vizison ==<br />
<br />
''''Vizison were once underground savages in the beginning of time, now they hold some of the most powerful secrets in the world '''''<br />
<br />
{{4e Racial Traits<br />
|height= 5'2-6'2<br />
|weight= 120-190<br />
|abilities= Int+2 Dex+2<br />
|size= Medium <br />
|speed= 7<br />
|vision= Darkvison <br />
|languages= Vizison,Common, Deep Speech<br />
|skills= Arcana+2 Sheath+2<br />
|trait1= shadow step <br />
|description1=when in dark areas your sheath gos up by 2 <br />
|trait2= Blade Master<br />
|description2= you have proficily in all blades<br />
|trait3= Battle Pause<br />
|description3= you gain the Battle Pause ability<br />
|trait4=<br />
|description4=<br />
|trait5=<br />
|description5=<br />
|trait6=<br />
|description6=<br />
<br />
}}<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Vizison<br />
|class=<!-- The name of the race --><br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger,you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1= Arcana<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype= Minor Action<br />
|range= Close Burst, Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|prerequisite= you can only use this power in combat<br />
|requirement= you must have at least one creature within 5 spaces|target= Arcana check 10<br />
|attack=<!-- Attack stat against the primary target. --><br />
|defense=<!-- Defense stat for the primary target. --><br />
|attackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|hit=<!-- What to do when the primary attack hits. --><br />
|miss=<!-- What to do when the primary attack misses. --><br />
|secondarytarget=<!-- Secondary target for the power. --><br />
|secondaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|secondarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the secondary target. --><br />
|secondaryhit=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack hits. --><br />
|secondarymiss=<!-- What to do when the secondary attack misses. --><br />
|tertiarytarget=<!-- Tertiary target for the power. --><br />
|tertiaryattack=<!-- Attack stat against the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryattackextra=<!-- Anything to add after "attack vs. defense" --><br />
|tertiarydefense=<!-- Defense stat for the tertiary target. --><br />
|tertiaryhit=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack hits. --><br />
|tertiarymiss=<!-- What to do when the tertiary attack misses. --><br />
|effect= creatures in burst/Blast are unconscious until effect is over<br />
|extra=<br />
|sustain= Free Action, arcana check +5 per round, fail: you are weakend for that round<br />
|special=<!-- Special text. --><br />
}}<br />
<br />
<!-fluff-><br />
<br />
Play an Vizison if you want...<br />
* to be a master of sheath and magic<br />
* to be a master at quick blades and knives<br />
* to be able to learn some dark secrets about the gods<br />
* To be a member of a race that favors the Blademaster,Rouge,or Slayer,or spell caster classes.<br />
<br />
=== Physical Qualities ===<br />
<br />
Vizison are tall,sleander humanoids.Their hair is ether pure white or jet black,and they have no facial hair.Their Eyes are very unique normaly their whites are black and their cat-like pupils white,or reversed.<br />
<br />
=== Playing an Vizison ===<br />
still thinking on it<br />
<br />
''' Vizison Characteristics:''' Patient, OtherWorldly, Quick, Chatty<br />
<br />
'''Male Names:''' any<br />
<br />
'''Female Names:''' any<br />
<br />
=== Vizison Adventurers ===<br />
<br />
Three sample Vizitson adventurers are described below.<br />
<br />
still working on it<br />
<br />
=== Racial Options ===<br />
<br />
<br />
----<br />
{{4e Races Breadcrumb}}<br />
[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Race]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Origin]]<br />
[[Category:Humanoid Type]]</div>Vizitonhttps://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vizison_(4e_Race)&diff=548021Talk:Vizison (4e Race)2012-01-24T22:14:49Z<p>Viziton: /* Vizison Names */</p>
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<div>Battle Pause is very broken. There are no 4e mechanics for freezing people in time. But what does the character do during this frozen time? Perhaps move somewhere and attack someone? The net effect is that the character appears to have teleported somewhere and gotten in an extra attack. Here is my awesome suggestion.<br />
<br />
{{4e Power<br />
|name= Battle Pause<br />
|owner=Race<br />
|class=Vizison<br />
|type= Utility<br />
|usage= Encounter<br />
|flavor= In moments of great danger, you can freeze time!<br />
|keyword1=<br />
|keyword2=<br />
|keyword3=<br />
|keyword4=<br />
|keyword5=<br />
|actiontype=Immediate Reaction<br />
|range=Personal<br />
|rangemod=<br />
|prerequisite=<br />
|requirement=<br />
|trigger=An attack bloodies you.<br />
|effect=You shift 3 squares and make a basic attack.<br />
}}<br />
<br />
[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 02:24, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
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== Vizison Names ==<br />
<br />
I have barly any idea how Vizison Names should be , maybe a mix of draconic and elven?<br />
<br />
:I'm assuming that from their darkvision and description that they were originally from the underdark - their language would be Deep Speech. That language uses the Rellanic script, so is related to the elven language. [[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 15:00, 24 January 2012 (MST)<br />
<br />
<br />
Makes sense I'll do some tweaks then</div>Viziton