https://www.dandwiki.com/w/api.php?action=feedcontributions&user=Aboleth11&feedformat=atomD&D Wiki - User contributions [en]2024-03-28T20:24:24ZUser contributionsMediaWiki 1.35.8https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vatireans_(4e_Race)&diff=374932Talk:Vatireans (4e Race)2009-07-10T20:45:25Z<p>Aboleth11: /* Soul Claim */</p>
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<div>== Delete ==<br />
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I concur with Green Dragon -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:20, 28 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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I back Sepis --[[User:Storm Elf5|Storm Elf5]] 18:56, 6 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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== A Few Things ==<br />
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* '''Ability Scores:''' In 4e races get +2 to only two seperate stats.-done<br />
* '''Speed:''' 8 is above the normal speed you would find on any race. At best a 6 with maybe a trait that allows a quick boost of speed once or twice during an encounter.-done<br />
* '''Vision:''' All types of vision??? This is way overpowered, races should get 1 or 2 types at best.-done<br />
* '''Languages:''' I would suggest dropping the "racial language", unless a variety of races speak this new language it becomes useless to most characters playing them. If they have to have their own unique language, you can always just fluff that (since it only matters when dealing within their own race) and give them a language they will get use out of.-done<br />
* '''Skill Bonuses:''' Where are they?-made<br />
* '''Soul Claim:''' This power is incomplete and confusing.-fixed<br />
* '''Favored Classes:''' What are "the tracker and warrior classes"? For this field you want to stick to core classes (ones you know most DMs allow). Don't make them a goto race for a HB class, if you do you really start narrowing the audience for this race.-changed<br />
* '''Fluff:''' Unique races require tons of fluff. Remember we have no previous lore to draw on, so you have to tell us as much as you can. Fluff is what really sells a race, and makes them stick out, so don't skimp on it. <br />
Thank you for your time. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:49, 29 May 2009 (MDT)-fine<br />
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:Sep, Elves do have a speed of 7, if you look. Just a note. -Absconder, Friend of True Warrior {{Unsigned|True warrior|07:09, 2 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
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::Will be quit not signing their posts properrly, it's annoying. [[User:ShadowyFigure|ShadowyFigure]] 08:19, 2 June 2009 (MDT) (also known as ShadowyFigure... the Shadowy Figure)<br />
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:::Guys please respond I'm confused about why my race is still posted for deletion I and absconder fixed it. -True Warrior 09:47, 2 June 2009 (MST)<br />
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::::Green Dragon, i understand the fact that i can talk to you guys here but still absconder and i fixed the Vatireans to meet your recomendations,unless we both missed something,witch i dont think we did, the Vatireans are now not over powered and are about the same as elves or eladrin(minus the fact that they have to feed on the souls of others)and both those races are allowed so thats why im frusterated.i add one new race and do a bad job just because i just started playing D&D 4 weeks ago my only race that i ever made gets preposed for deleton,intead of just contacting me and asking me why my race was "oveerpowered" you guys just go and post that notice and then one morning i log on and see "this 4e race has been preposed for deletion". that is why im mad,and the Vatireans arent overpowered anyway, so what if there really strong?they couldent use magic or weopons originoly. but now i down graded them to basicly a friggin elf with soul-divouring issues.so please understand were im comeing from here i mean werent you guys ever new at this kind of stuff???well any way i now you guys dont really care but come on there is a reason absconder backed me up right? other than the fact that hes my friend.plus he put the 4e race Underwourld Elves on and I am the one who originoly thougt up and made them.please contct me or Absconder with any info pertaining to the Vatireans.<br />
::::plus to let you guys now in advance i wont have acsess to a computer all the time over the summer so please be patient. {{Unsigned|True warrior|09:06, 3 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
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:::::First, please make a better effort to keep your spelling and grammar in order. It adds to your credibility, which will in turn make people more likely to take you seriously and give feedback. Second, sign your posts using four tildes (~), please. Finally, regarding your race: it doesn't have all the same problems that it once did, but it still has a long way to go. Look at [[Avian (4e Race)|this race]] as an example, or [[Satyr (4e Race)|this one]], or [[Cambion (4e Race)|this one]]. You have yet to define your race's soul-devouring ability and the flavor text is very minimal. Until you clarify exactly what Soul Claim does, fix your spelling and grammar, and add more flavor text, your article should continue to carry the delete tag. Once you have enough information for it to be playable, then it can be changed. Also, your claim that the race is immortal doesn't go very well with conventional rules. You should expand on what that is intended to mean. Also, keep in mind that being proposed for deletion doesn't necessarily mean your article is in immediate danger of being deleted. Articles that are tagged usually aren't deleted for at least a few weeks, as far as I know, during which time you can improve your article. If an admin sees progress, chances are the article's execution will be stayed. So, my advice to you is to first and foremost define Soul Claim, as then your race could be playable and merely become a 'stub' or 'unbalanced.' From there you can work on flavor and spelling/grammar. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 13:35, 3 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Thank you , sorry about my spelling and gramer. at the time when my last post was made I had to write fast so I didint pay atention to spelling or grammer.But thanks for helping . But like I said give me some extra time to fix the vatireans since I dont have constant computer acsess.<br />
::::::I looked at the races that you sugested and they are all well created I agree with you on that but I still dont understand how I can define soul claim, please help me by giveing me sugestions, or better yet edit it so I dont have to worry about my race being up to par.Please.<br />
::::::Plus what did you mean when you said 'sign your posts useing four tidles' I dont understand you mean. {{Unsigned|True warrior|09:07, 15 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
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:::::::#I don't know jackshit about 4e, so you're sort of on your own, at least from my angle. <br />
:::::::# Defining Soul Claim: tell us what it does. ''Ooh, I claim your soul!'' As in ''[[Trap the soul]]''? As in what? ''[[Death knell]]''? What does it do in terms of game mechanics? Quantifiable effects, numbers, if you will.<br />
:::::::# Regarding signatures: write what you are going to to write, and then type, verbatim, without the quotation marks, "<nowiki>-- ~~~~</nowiki>", which the wiki will automatically translate into your signature ([[User:True warrior|True warrior]]), complete with a time stamp. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 22:48, 15 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::Well it dosent 'trap' the minions soul and it dosent death knell it,it consumes it.As in takeing it and useing it to heal yourself,but not giveing it back the soul is gone.It will not return to the creature,it is gone destroyed.It basicly destroys the creatures esence,meaning no after life.I agree that it is a very savage atack but thats how the Vatireans survive.true warrior 8:43 16 June 2009<br />
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::::::::THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH for takeing the delete tab off of my race!!! what did I do right!?-true warrior 8:51 June 16 2009<br />
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:::::::::PLus guys i was on my acount at the time that absconder signed the statment that was from my acount,because he was sitting next to me when i loged on and he saw your coments and desided to responed useing my computer that is why its signed Absconder but was posted by my acount.If any of that makes sense let me know.-true warrior 8:58 16 june 2009<br />
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::::::::::This race has no special abilities! --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 14:43, 10 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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== Soul Claim ==<br />
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If you go to edit the page you can see what Soul Claim is supposed to do, yet this information does not appear in the normal viewing browser. Can anyone fix this? -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 19:29, 6 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:iam not sure what you mean Jota.-true warrior 7-09-09 8:46am<br />
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::You had filled in the information for Soul Claim, but it wasn't appearing on the main page, which is why I (and others) had previously complained about you not saying what it does. Sepsis was kind enough to fix it. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 10:56, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::I corrected the issue for [[User:Jota|Jota]]. Although being a '''Daily''' is does not need its ''Requirement'', and as it only effects Minions it really shouldn't have a ''Miss'' effect (you can't cause them "half damage"). The power should probably be turned into an '''Encounter''' (stilllose the ''Requirement'') and it should heal HP "as if you have used a Healing Surge". That allows it to scale better and it really won't unbalance anything if used during every encounter. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 10:57, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::I don't know anything about 4e, so I can't speak to its balance, all I can judge is whether or not the information is there or not. You (truewarrior) should probably go with what Sepsis said (he's designed numerous high-quality 4e races, including two of the ones I originally suggested you take a look at) if you want a balanced, high-quality end product. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 11:12, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::It is impossible to reduce a minion to half health as they only have one hit point. And besides, minions are never damaged by missed attacks. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 14:39, 10 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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== Racial Traits ==<br />
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Where, exactly, are the race's racial traits? All it has are the base things (such as ability scores, vision, skills and so on), and a single power. It's been racial-trait-less since the [[Template: Delete]] was removed, and, without racial traits, its not a viable race in game terms (and its lack of fluff doesn't help). Can someone add some racial traits, please? Otherwise, [[Template: Delete]] will have to be replaced on the page. I'll be more than happy to help balance and improve the racial traits, and offer some assistance with the fluff. --&nbsp;<small><span style="border: 1px solid; -moz-border<br />
radius:10px">[[Image:SamAutosig.JPG]]'''[[User:Sam Kay|<span style="-moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> Sam Kay </span>''']][[User talk:Sam Kay|<span style=" -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;talk&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Sam Kay|<span style="">&nbsp;&nbsp;contribs&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Emailuser/Sam Kay|<span style=" -moz-border-radius-bottomright:10px; -moz-border-radius-topright:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;email&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]]</span></small> 10:34, 10 July 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vatireans_(4e_Race)&diff=374931Talk:Vatireans (4e Race)2009-07-10T20:44:43Z<p>Aboleth11: /* A Few Things */</p>
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<div>== Delete ==<br />
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I concur with Green Dragon -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:20, 28 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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I back Sepis --[[User:Storm Elf5|Storm Elf5]] 18:56, 6 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
== A Few Things ==<br />
<br />
* '''Ability Scores:''' In 4e races get +2 to only two seperate stats.-done<br />
* '''Speed:''' 8 is above the normal speed you would find on any race. At best a 6 with maybe a trait that allows a quick boost of speed once or twice during an encounter.-done<br />
* '''Vision:''' All types of vision??? This is way overpowered, races should get 1 or 2 types at best.-done<br />
* '''Languages:''' I would suggest dropping the "racial language", unless a variety of races speak this new language it becomes useless to most characters playing them. If they have to have their own unique language, you can always just fluff that (since it only matters when dealing within their own race) and give them a language they will get use out of.-done<br />
* '''Skill Bonuses:''' Where are they?-made<br />
* '''Soul Claim:''' This power is incomplete and confusing.-fixed<br />
* '''Favored Classes:''' What are "the tracker and warrior classes"? For this field you want to stick to core classes (ones you know most DMs allow). Don't make them a goto race for a HB class, if you do you really start narrowing the audience for this race.-changed<br />
* '''Fluff:''' Unique races require tons of fluff. Remember we have no previous lore to draw on, so you have to tell us as much as you can. Fluff is what really sells a race, and makes them stick out, so don't skimp on it. <br />
Thank you for your time. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:49, 29 May 2009 (MDT)-fine<br />
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:Sep, Elves do have a speed of 7, if you look. Just a note. -Absconder, Friend of True Warrior {{Unsigned|True warrior|07:09, 2 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
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::Will be quit not signing their posts properrly, it's annoying. [[User:ShadowyFigure|ShadowyFigure]] 08:19, 2 June 2009 (MDT) (also known as ShadowyFigure... the Shadowy Figure)<br />
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:::Guys please respond I'm confused about why my race is still posted for deletion I and absconder fixed it. -True Warrior 09:47, 2 June 2009 (MST)<br />
<br />
::::Green Dragon, i understand the fact that i can talk to you guys here but still absconder and i fixed the Vatireans to meet your recomendations,unless we both missed something,witch i dont think we did, the Vatireans are now not over powered and are about the same as elves or eladrin(minus the fact that they have to feed on the souls of others)and both those races are allowed so thats why im frusterated.i add one new race and do a bad job just because i just started playing D&D 4 weeks ago my only race that i ever made gets preposed for deleton,intead of just contacting me and asking me why my race was "oveerpowered" you guys just go and post that notice and then one morning i log on and see "this 4e race has been preposed for deletion". that is why im mad,and the Vatireans arent overpowered anyway, so what if there really strong?they couldent use magic or weopons originoly. but now i down graded them to basicly a friggin elf with soul-divouring issues.so please understand were im comeing from here i mean werent you guys ever new at this kind of stuff???well any way i now you guys dont really care but come on there is a reason absconder backed me up right? other than the fact that hes my friend.plus he put the 4e race Underwourld Elves on and I am the one who originoly thougt up and made them.please contct me or Absconder with any info pertaining to the Vatireans.<br />
::::plus to let you guys now in advance i wont have acsess to a computer all the time over the summer so please be patient. {{Unsigned|True warrior|09:06, 3 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
<br />
:::::First, please make a better effort to keep your spelling and grammar in order. It adds to your credibility, which will in turn make people more likely to take you seriously and give feedback. Second, sign your posts using four tildes (~), please. Finally, regarding your race: it doesn't have all the same problems that it once did, but it still has a long way to go. Look at [[Avian (4e Race)|this race]] as an example, or [[Satyr (4e Race)|this one]], or [[Cambion (4e Race)|this one]]. You have yet to define your race's soul-devouring ability and the flavor text is very minimal. Until you clarify exactly what Soul Claim does, fix your spelling and grammar, and add more flavor text, your article should continue to carry the delete tag. Once you have enough information for it to be playable, then it can be changed. Also, your claim that the race is immortal doesn't go very well with conventional rules. You should expand on what that is intended to mean. Also, keep in mind that being proposed for deletion doesn't necessarily mean your article is in immediate danger of being deleted. Articles that are tagged usually aren't deleted for at least a few weeks, as far as I know, during which time you can improve your article. If an admin sees progress, chances are the article's execution will be stayed. So, my advice to you is to first and foremost define Soul Claim, as then your race could be playable and merely become a 'stub' or 'unbalanced.' From there you can work on flavor and spelling/grammar. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 13:35, 3 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Thank you , sorry about my spelling and gramer. at the time when my last post was made I had to write fast so I didint pay atention to spelling or grammer.But thanks for helping . But like I said give me some extra time to fix the vatireans since I dont have constant computer acsess.<br />
::::::I looked at the races that you sugested and they are all well created I agree with you on that but I still dont understand how I can define soul claim, please help me by giveing me sugestions, or better yet edit it so I dont have to worry about my race being up to par.Please.<br />
::::::Plus what did you mean when you said 'sign your posts useing four tidles' I dont understand you mean. {{Unsigned|True warrior|09:07, 15 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
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:::::::#I don't know jackshit about 4e, so you're sort of on your own, at least from my angle. <br />
:::::::# Defining Soul Claim: tell us what it does. ''Ooh, I claim your soul!'' As in ''[[Trap the soul]]''? As in what? ''[[Death knell]]''? What does it do in terms of game mechanics? Quantifiable effects, numbers, if you will.<br />
:::::::# Regarding signatures: write what you are going to to write, and then type, verbatim, without the quotation marks, "<nowiki>-- ~~~~</nowiki>", which the wiki will automatically translate into your signature ([[User:True warrior|True warrior]]), complete with a time stamp. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 22:48, 15 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::Well it dosent 'trap' the minions soul and it dosent death knell it,it consumes it.As in takeing it and useing it to heal yourself,but not giveing it back the soul is gone.It will not return to the creature,it is gone destroyed.It basicly destroys the creatures esence,meaning no after life.I agree that it is a very savage atack but thats how the Vatireans survive.true warrior 8:43 16 June 2009<br />
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::::::::THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH for takeing the delete tab off of my race!!! what did I do right!?-true warrior 8:51 June 16 2009<br />
<br />
:::::::::PLus guys i was on my acount at the time that absconder signed the statment that was from my acount,because he was sitting next to me when i loged on and he saw your coments and desided to responed useing my computer that is why its signed Absconder but was posted by my acount.If any of that makes sense let me know.-true warrior 8:58 16 june 2009<br />
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::::::::::This race has no special abilities! --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 14:43, 10 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
== Soul Claim ==<br />
<br />
If you go to edit the page you can see what Soul Claim is supposed to do, yet this information does not appear in the normal viewing browser. Can anyone fix this? -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 19:29, 6 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
:iam not sure what you mean Jota.-true warrior 7-09-09 8:46am<br />
<br />
::You had filled in the information for Soul Claim, but it wasn't appearing on the main page, which is why I (and others) had previously complained about you not saying what it does. Sepsis was kind enough to fix it. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 10:56, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
:::I corrected the issue for [[User:Jota|Jota]]. Although being a '''Daily''' is does not need its ''Requirement'', and as it only effects Minions it really shouldn't have a ''Miss'' effect (you can't cause them "half damage"). The power should probably be turned into an '''Encounter''' (stilllose the ''Requirement'') and it should heal HP "as if you have used a Healing Surge". That allows it to scale better and it really won't unbalance anything if used during every encounter. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 10:57, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
::::I don't know anything about 4e, so I can't speak to its balance, all I can judge is whether or not the information is there or not. You (truewarrior) should probably go with what Sepsis said (he's designed numerous high-quality 4e races, including two of the ones I originally suggested you take a look at) if you want a balanced, high-quality end product. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 11:12, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
== Racial Traits ==<br />
<br />
Where, exactly, are the race's racial traits? All it has are the base things (such as ability scores, vision, skills and so on), and a single power. It's been racial-trait-less since the [[Template: Delete]] was removed, and, without racial traits, its not a viable race in game terms (and its lack of fluff doesn't help). Can someone add some racial traits, please? Otherwise, [[Template: Delete]] will have to be replaced on the page. I'll be more than happy to help balance and improve the racial traits, and offer some assistance with the fluff. --&nbsp;<small><span style="border: 1px solid; -moz-border<br />
radius:10px">[[Image:SamAutosig.JPG]]'''[[User:Sam Kay|<span style="-moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> Sam Kay </span>''']][[User talk:Sam Kay|<span style=" -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;talk&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Sam Kay|<span style="">&nbsp;&nbsp;contribs&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Emailuser/Sam Kay|<span style=" -moz-border-radius-bottomright:10px; -moz-border-radius-topright:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;email&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]]</span></small> 10:34, 10 July 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vatireans_(4e_Race)&diff=374930Talk:Vatireans (4e Race)2009-07-10T20:43:21Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>== Delete ==<br />
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I concur with Green Dragon -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:20, 28 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
I back Sepis --[[User:Storm Elf5|Storm Elf5]] 18:56, 6 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
== A Few Things ==<br />
<br />
* '''Ability Scores:''' In 4e races get +2 to only two seperate stats.-done<br />
* '''Speed:''' 8 is above the normal speed you would find on any race. At best a 6 with maybe a trait that allows a quick boost of speed once or twice during an encounter.-done<br />
* '''Vision:''' All types of vision??? This is way overpowered, races should get 1 or 2 types at best.-done<br />
* '''Languages:''' I would suggest dropping the "racial language", unless a variety of races speak this new language it becomes useless to most characters playing them. If they have to have their own unique language, you can always just fluff that (since it only matters when dealing within their own race) and give them a language they will get use out of.-done<br />
* '''Skill Bonuses:''' Where are they?-made<br />
* '''Soul Claim:''' This power is incomplete and confusing.-fixed<br />
* '''Favored Classes:''' What are "the tracker and warrior classes"? For this field you want to stick to core classes (ones you know most DMs allow). Don't make them a goto race for a HB class, if you do you really start narrowing the audience for this race.-changed<br />
* '''Fluff:''' Unique races require tons of fluff. Remember we have no previous lore to draw on, so you have to tell us as much as you can. Fluff is what really sells a race, and makes them stick out, so don't skimp on it. <br />
Thank you for your time. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:49, 29 May 2009 (MDT)-fine<br />
<br />
:Sep, Elves do have a speed of 7, if you look. Just a note. -Absconder, Friend of True Warrior {{Unsigned|True warrior|07:09, 2 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
<br />
::Will be quit not signing their posts properrly, it's annoying. [[User:ShadowyFigure|ShadowyFigure]] 08:19, 2 June 2009 (MDT) (also known as ShadowyFigure... the Shadowy Figure)<br />
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:::Guys please respond I'm confused about why my race is still posted for deletion I and absconder fixed it. -True Warrior 09:47, 2 June 2009 (MST)<br />
<br />
::::Green Dragon, i understand the fact that i can talk to you guys here but still absconder and i fixed the Vatireans to meet your recomendations,unless we both missed something,witch i dont think we did, the Vatireans are now not over powered and are about the same as elves or eladrin(minus the fact that they have to feed on the souls of others)and both those races are allowed so thats why im frusterated.i add one new race and do a bad job just because i just started playing D&D 4 weeks ago my only race that i ever made gets preposed for deleton,intead of just contacting me and asking me why my race was "oveerpowered" you guys just go and post that notice and then one morning i log on and see "this 4e race has been preposed for deletion". that is why im mad,and the Vatireans arent overpowered anyway, so what if there really strong?they couldent use magic or weopons originoly. but now i down graded them to basicly a friggin elf with soul-divouring issues.so please understand were im comeing from here i mean werent you guys ever new at this kind of stuff???well any way i now you guys dont really care but come on there is a reason absconder backed me up right? other than the fact that hes my friend.plus he put the 4e race Underwourld Elves on and I am the one who originoly thougt up and made them.please contct me or Absconder with any info pertaining to the Vatireans.<br />
::::plus to let you guys now in advance i wont have acsess to a computer all the time over the summer so please be patient. {{Unsigned|True warrior|09:06, 3 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
<br />
:::::First, please make a better effort to keep your spelling and grammar in order. It adds to your credibility, which will in turn make people more likely to take you seriously and give feedback. Second, sign your posts using four tildes (~), please. Finally, regarding your race: it doesn't have all the same problems that it once did, but it still has a long way to go. Look at [[Avian (4e Race)|this race]] as an example, or [[Satyr (4e Race)|this one]], or [[Cambion (4e Race)|this one]]. You have yet to define your race's soul-devouring ability and the flavor text is very minimal. Until you clarify exactly what Soul Claim does, fix your spelling and grammar, and add more flavor text, your article should continue to carry the delete tag. Once you have enough information for it to be playable, then it can be changed. Also, your claim that the race is immortal doesn't go very well with conventional rules. You should expand on what that is intended to mean. Also, keep in mind that being proposed for deletion doesn't necessarily mean your article is in immediate danger of being deleted. Articles that are tagged usually aren't deleted for at least a few weeks, as far as I know, during which time you can improve your article. If an admin sees progress, chances are the article's execution will be stayed. So, my advice to you is to first and foremost define Soul Claim, as then your race could be playable and merely become a 'stub' or 'unbalanced.' From there you can work on flavor and spelling/grammar. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 13:35, 3 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Thank you , sorry about my spelling and gramer. at the time when my last post was made I had to write fast so I didint pay atention to spelling or grammer.But thanks for helping . But like I said give me some extra time to fix the vatireans since I dont have constant computer acsess.<br />
::::::I looked at the races that you sugested and they are all well created I agree with you on that but I still dont understand how I can define soul claim, please help me by giveing me sugestions, or better yet edit it so I dont have to worry about my race being up to par.Please.<br />
::::::Plus what did you mean when you said 'sign your posts useing four tidles' I dont understand you mean. {{Unsigned|True warrior|09:07, 15 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
<br />
:::::::#I don't know jackshit about 4e, so you're sort of on your own, at least from my angle. <br />
:::::::# Defining Soul Claim: tell us what it does. ''Ooh, I claim your soul!'' As in ''[[Trap the soul]]''? As in what? ''[[Death knell]]''? What does it do in terms of game mechanics? Quantifiable effects, numbers, if you will.<br />
:::::::# Regarding signatures: write what you are going to to write, and then type, verbatim, without the quotation marks, "<nowiki>-- ~~~~</nowiki>", which the wiki will automatically translate into your signature ([[User:True warrior|True warrior]]), complete with a time stamp. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 22:48, 15 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::Well it dosent 'trap' the minions soul and it dosent death knell it,it consumes it.As in takeing it and useing it to heal yourself,but not giveing it back the soul is gone.It will not return to the creature,it is gone destroyed.It basicly destroys the creatures esence,meaning no after life.I agree that it is a very savage atack but thats how the Vatireans survive.true warrior 8:43 16 June 2009<br />
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::::::::THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH for takeing the delete tab off of my race!!! what did I do right!?-true warrior 8:51 June 16 2009<br />
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:::::::::PLus guys i was on my acount at the time that absconder signed the statment that was from my acount,because he was sitting next to me when i loged on and he saw your coments and desided to responed useing my computer that is why its signed Absconder but was posted by my acount.If any of that makes sense let me know.-true warrior 8:58 16 june 2009<br />
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::::::::::It is impossible to reduce a minion to half health as they only have one hit point. And besides, minions are never damaged by missed attacks. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 14:39, 10 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::::::This race has no special abilities! --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 14:43, 10 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
== Soul Claim ==<br />
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If you go to edit the page you can see what Soul Claim is supposed to do, yet this information does not appear in the normal viewing browser. Can anyone fix this? -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 19:29, 6 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:iam not sure what you mean Jota.-true warrior 7-09-09 8:46am<br />
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::You had filled in the information for Soul Claim, but it wasn't appearing on the main page, which is why I (and others) had previously complained about you not saying what it does. Sepsis was kind enough to fix it. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 10:56, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::I corrected the issue for [[User:Jota|Jota]]. Although being a '''Daily''' is does not need its ''Requirement'', and as it only effects Minions it really shouldn't have a ''Miss'' effect (you can't cause them "half damage"). The power should probably be turned into an '''Encounter''' (stilllose the ''Requirement'') and it should heal HP "as if you have used a Healing Surge". That allows it to scale better and it really won't unbalance anything if used during every encounter. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 10:57, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::I don't know anything about 4e, so I can't speak to its balance, all I can judge is whether or not the information is there or not. You (truewarrior) should probably go with what Sepsis said (he's designed numerous high-quality 4e races, including two of the ones I originally suggested you take a look at) if you want a balanced, high-quality end product. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 11:12, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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== Racial Traits ==<br />
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Where, exactly, are the race's racial traits? All it has are the base things (such as ability scores, vision, skills and so on), and a single power. It's been racial-trait-less since the [[Template: Delete]] was removed, and, without racial traits, its not a viable race in game terms (and its lack of fluff doesn't help). Can someone add some racial traits, please? Otherwise, [[Template: Delete]] will have to be replaced on the page. I'll be more than happy to help balance and improve the racial traits, and offer some assistance with the fluff. --&nbsp;<small><span style="border: 1px solid; -moz-border<br />
radius:10px">[[Image:SamAutosig.JPG]]'''[[User:Sam Kay|<span style="-moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> Sam Kay </span>''']][[User talk:Sam Kay|<span style=" -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;talk&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Sam Kay|<span style="">&nbsp;&nbsp;contribs&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Emailuser/Sam Kay|<span style=" -moz-border-radius-bottomright:10px; -moz-border-radius-topright:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;email&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]]</span></small> 10:34, 10 July 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Vatireans_(4e_Race)&diff=374929Talk:Vatireans (4e Race)2009-07-10T20:39:29Z<p>Aboleth11: /* A Few Things */</p>
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<div>== Delete ==<br />
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I concur with Green Dragon -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:20, 28 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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I back Sepis --[[User:Storm Elf5|Storm Elf5]] 18:56, 6 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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== A Few Things ==<br />
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* '''Ability Scores:''' In 4e races get +2 to only two seperate stats.-done<br />
* '''Speed:''' 8 is above the normal speed you would find on any race. At best a 6 with maybe a trait that allows a quick boost of speed once or twice during an encounter.-done<br />
* '''Vision:''' All types of vision??? This is way overpowered, races should get 1 or 2 types at best.-done<br />
* '''Languages:''' I would suggest dropping the "racial language", unless a variety of races speak this new language it becomes useless to most characters playing them. If they have to have their own unique language, you can always just fluff that (since it only matters when dealing within their own race) and give them a language they will get use out of.-done<br />
* '''Skill Bonuses:''' Where are they?-made<br />
* '''Soul Claim:''' This power is incomplete and confusing.-fixed<br />
* '''Favored Classes:''' What are "the tracker and warrior classes"? For this field you want to stick to core classes (ones you know most DMs allow). Don't make them a goto race for a HB class, if you do you really start narrowing the audience for this race.-changed<br />
* '''Fluff:''' Unique races require tons of fluff. Remember we have no previous lore to draw on, so you have to tell us as much as you can. Fluff is what really sells a race, and makes them stick out, so don't skimp on it. <br />
Thank you for your time. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:49, 29 May 2009 (MDT)-fine<br />
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:Sep, Elves do have a speed of 7, if you look. Just a note. -Absconder, Friend of True Warrior {{Unsigned|True warrior|07:09, 2 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
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::Will be quit not signing their posts properrly, it's annoying. [[User:ShadowyFigure|ShadowyFigure]] 08:19, 2 June 2009 (MDT) (also known as ShadowyFigure... the Shadowy Figure)<br />
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:::Guys please respond I'm confused about why my race is still posted for deletion I and absconder fixed it. -True Warrior 09:47, 2 June 2009 (MST)<br />
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::::Green Dragon, i understand the fact that i can talk to you guys here but still absconder and i fixed the Vatireans to meet your recomendations,unless we both missed something,witch i dont think we did, the Vatireans are now not over powered and are about the same as elves or eladrin(minus the fact that they have to feed on the souls of others)and both those races are allowed so thats why im frusterated.i add one new race and do a bad job just because i just started playing D&D 4 weeks ago my only race that i ever made gets preposed for deleton,intead of just contacting me and asking me why my race was "oveerpowered" you guys just go and post that notice and then one morning i log on and see "this 4e race has been preposed for deletion". that is why im mad,and the Vatireans arent overpowered anyway, so what if there really strong?they couldent use magic or weopons originoly. but now i down graded them to basicly a friggin elf with soul-divouring issues.so please understand were im comeing from here i mean werent you guys ever new at this kind of stuff???well any way i now you guys dont really care but come on there is a reason absconder backed me up right? other than the fact that hes my friend.plus he put the 4e race Underwourld Elves on and I am the one who originoly thougt up and made them.please contct me or Absconder with any info pertaining to the Vatireans.<br />
::::plus to let you guys now in advance i wont have acsess to a computer all the time over the summer so please be patient. {{Unsigned|True warrior|09:06, 3 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
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:::::First, please make a better effort to keep your spelling and grammar in order. It adds to your credibility, which will in turn make people more likely to take you seriously and give feedback. Second, sign your posts using four tildes (~), please. Finally, regarding your race: it doesn't have all the same problems that it once did, but it still has a long way to go. Look at [[Avian (4e Race)|this race]] as an example, or [[Satyr (4e Race)|this one]], or [[Cambion (4e Race)|this one]]. You have yet to define your race's soul-devouring ability and the flavor text is very minimal. Until you clarify exactly what Soul Claim does, fix your spelling and grammar, and add more flavor text, your article should continue to carry the delete tag. Once you have enough information for it to be playable, then it can be changed. Also, your claim that the race is immortal doesn't go very well with conventional rules. You should expand on what that is intended to mean. Also, keep in mind that being proposed for deletion doesn't necessarily mean your article is in immediate danger of being deleted. Articles that are tagged usually aren't deleted for at least a few weeks, as far as I know, during which time you can improve your article. If an admin sees progress, chances are the article's execution will be stayed. So, my advice to you is to first and foremost define Soul Claim, as then your race could be playable and merely become a 'stub' or 'unbalanced.' From there you can work on flavor and spelling/grammar. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 13:35, 3 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::Thank you , sorry about my spelling and gramer. at the time when my last post was made I had to write fast so I didint pay atention to spelling or grammer.But thanks for helping . But like I said give me some extra time to fix the vatireans since I dont have constant computer acsess.<br />
::::::I looked at the races that you sugested and they are all well created I agree with you on that but I still dont understand how I can define soul claim, please help me by giveing me sugestions, or better yet edit it so I dont have to worry about my race being up to par.Please.<br />
::::::Plus what did you mean when you said 'sign your posts useing four tidles' I dont understand you mean. {{Unsigned|True warrior|09:07, 15 June 2009 (MST)}}<br />
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:::::::#I don't know jackshit about 4e, so you're sort of on your own, at least from my angle. <br />
:::::::# Defining Soul Claim: tell us what it does. ''Ooh, I claim your soul!'' As in ''[[Trap the soul]]''? As in what? ''[[Death knell]]''? What does it do in terms of game mechanics? Quantifiable effects, numbers, if you will.<br />
:::::::# Regarding signatures: write what you are going to to write, and then type, verbatim, without the quotation marks, "<nowiki>-- ~~~~</nowiki>", which the wiki will automatically translate into your signature ([[User:True warrior|True warrior]]), complete with a time stamp. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 22:48, 15 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::Well it dosent 'trap' the minions soul and it dosent death knell it,it consumes it.As in takeing it and useing it to heal yourself,but not giveing it back the soul is gone.It will not return to the creature,it is gone destroyed.It basicly destroys the creatures esence,meaning no after life.I agree that it is a very savage atack but thats how the Vatireans survive.true warrior 8:43 16 June 2009<br />
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::::::::THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH for takeing the delete tab off of my race!!! what did I do right!?-true warrior 8:51 June 16 2009<br />
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:::::::::PLus guys i was on my acount at the time that absconder signed the statment that was from my acount,because he was sitting next to me when i loged on and he saw your coments and desided to responed useing my computer that is why its signed Absconder but was posted by my acount.If any of that makes sense let me know.-true warrior 8:58 16 june 2009<br />
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::::::::::It is impossible to reduce a minion to half health as they only have one hit point. And besides, minions are never damaged by missed attacks. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 14:39, 10 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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== Soul Claim ==<br />
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If you go to edit the page you can see what Soul Claim is supposed to do, yet this information does not appear in the normal viewing browser. Can anyone fix this? -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 19:29, 6 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:iam not sure what you mean Jota.-true warrior 7-09-09 8:46am<br />
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::You had filled in the information for Soul Claim, but it wasn't appearing on the main page, which is why I (and others) had previously complained about you not saying what it does. Sepsis was kind enough to fix it. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 10:56, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
<br />
:::I corrected the issue for [[User:Jota|Jota]]. Although being a '''Daily''' is does not need its ''Requirement'', and as it only effects Minions it really shouldn't have a ''Miss'' effect (you can't cause them "half damage"). The power should probably be turned into an '''Encounter''' (stilllose the ''Requirement'') and it should heal HP "as if you have used a Healing Surge". That allows it to scale better and it really won't unbalance anything if used during every encounter. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 10:57, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::I don't know anything about 4e, so I can't speak to its balance, all I can judge is whether or not the information is there or not. You (truewarrior) should probably go with what Sepsis said (he's designed numerous high-quality 4e races, including two of the ones I originally suggested you take a look at) if you want a balanced, high-quality end product. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 11:12, 9 July 2009 (MDT)<br />
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== Racial Traits ==<br />
<br />
Where, exactly, are the race's racial traits? All it has are the base things (such as ability scores, vision, skills and so on), and a single power. It's been racial-trait-less since the [[Template: Delete]] was removed, and, without racial traits, its not a viable race in game terms (and its lack of fluff doesn't help). Can someone add some racial traits, please? Otherwise, [[Template: Delete]] will have to be replaced on the page. I'll be more than happy to help balance and improve the racial traits, and offer some assistance with the fluff. --&nbsp;<small><span style="border: 1px solid; -moz-border<br />
radius:10px">[[Image:SamAutosig.JPG]]'''[[User:Sam Kay|<span style="-moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> Sam Kay </span>''']][[User talk:Sam Kay|<span style=" -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;talk&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Sam Kay|<span style="">&nbsp;&nbsp;contribs&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]][[Special:Emailuser/Sam Kay|<span style=" -moz-border-radius-bottomright:10px; -moz-border-radius-topright:10px">&nbsp;&nbsp;email&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>]]</span></small> 10:34, 10 July 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Cliff_Drake_(4e_Creature)&diff=370759Cliff Drake (4e Creature)2009-06-23T13:46:59Z<p>Aboleth11: Undo revision 370757 by Aboleth11 (Talk)</p>
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[[Category:Beast]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Cliff_Drake_(4e_Creature)&diff=370756Cliff Drake (4e Creature)2009-06-23T13:45:36Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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==Cliff Drake==<br />
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{{4e Creature Top<br />
|name=Cliff Drake<br />
|level=5<br />
|role=Skirmisher<br />
|size=Medium<br />
|origin=natural<br />
|type=beast<br />
|keywords=<br />
|xp=200<br />
|initiative=+8<br />
|senses=Perception +9; low-light vision<br />
|aura1=<br />
|aurakeyword1=<br />
|aurarange1=<br />
|auraeffect1=<br />
|aura2=<br />
|aurakeyword2=<br />
|aurarange2=<br />
|auraeffect2=<br />
|special=<br />
|effect=<br />
|hp=57<br />
|bloodied=28<br />
|ac=20<br />
|fortitude=16<br />
|reflex=18<br />
|will=16<br />
|immune/resist/vulnerable=<br />
|savingthrows=<br />
|speed=8, climb 8<br />
|actionpoints=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{BM}}<br />
|name=Bite<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=+11 vs. AC; 1d8+4 damage.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{M}}<br />
|name=Skittering Bite<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=The cliff drake moves or climbs 8 squares. At any point during the movement, the cliff drake may make a melee basic attack. It does not provoke attacks of opportunity when moving away from its target.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type=<br />
|name=Skirmish<br />
|action=<br />
|recharge=<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=If the cliff drake moves at least 4 squares during its turn, it gain a +2 bonus to all defenses until the end of its next turn.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Bottom<br />
|alignment=Unaligned<br />
|languages=&mdash<br />
|skills=Acrobatics +11, Athletics +9<br />
|feats=<br />
|strength=15<br />
|strbonus=+4<br />
|dexterity=18<br />
|dexbonus=+6<br />
|wisdom=14<br />
|wisbonus=+4<br />
|constitution=12<br />
|conbonus=+3<br />
|intelligence=3<br />
|intbonus=-2<br />
|charisma=9<br />
|chabonus=+1<br />
}}<br />
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===Cliff Drake Lore===<br />
A character knows the following information with a successful <!--appropriate skill--> check.<br />
:'''DC 15:''' <!--information--><br />
:'''DC 20:''' <!--information--><br />
:'''DC 25:''' <!--information--><br />
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<div>== Good Job ==<br />
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This is very good work. I like the randomness of the attack. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 19:24, 22 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Blackwing_(4e_Creature)&diff=370643Blackwing (4e Creature)2009-06-23T01:14:56Z<p>Aboleth11: Added author template.</p>
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|author_name=Pennarin<br />
|date_created=08/23/09<br />
|status=Complete<br />
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==Blackwing==<br />
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[[Image:106281.jpg|thumb]]<br />
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These undead birds are guardians to mountainous tombs, and are sometimes raised to serve as mounts to evil champions or more powerful undead. <br />
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{{4e Creature Top<br />
|name=Blackwing<br />
|level=12<br />
|role=Skirmisher<br />
|size=Large<br />
|origin=natural<br />
|type=animate<br />
|keywords=mount, undead<br />
|xp=700<br />
|initiative=+13<br />
|senses=Perception +13; darkvision<br />
|aura1=<br />
|aurakeyword1=<br />
|aurarange1=<br />
|auraeffect1=<br />
|aura2=<br />
|aurakeyword2=<br />
|aurarange2=<br />
|auraeffect2=<br />
|special=<br />
|effect=<br />
|hp=124<br />
|bloodied=62<br />
|ac=26<br />
|fortitude=25<br />
|reflex=20<br />
|will=20<br />
|immune/resist/vulnerable='''Immune''' disease, poison; '''Resist''' 10 cold, 10 necrotic; '''Vulnerable''' 5 radiant<br />
|savingthrows=<br />
|speed=4, fly 10 (hover)<br />
|actionpoints=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{BM}}<br />
|name=Bite<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=Reach 2; +17 vs. AC; 2d6 + 5 damage.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{M}}<br />
|name=Claw<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=+17 vs. AC; 1d8 + 5 damage.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{M}}<br />
|name=Combined Attack<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=When hovering, the blackwing makes a bite attack and two claw attacks against the same target.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{M}}<br />
|name=Frightful Dive<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=Fear<br />
|effect=The blackwing moves up to its fly speed and makes a bite attack against a target at any point during its move without provoking an opportunity attack, and the blackwing makes a secondary attack against the same target. ''Secondary Attack:'' +15 vs. Will; the target takes a –2 penalty to all defenses until the end of the blackwing’s next turn. <br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{C}}<br />
|name=Wail of Despair<br />
|action=minor<br />
|recharge=recharge {{5}} {{6}}<br />
|keywords=Fear<br />
|effect=Close burst 5; targets enemies; deafened creatures are immune; +13 vs. Will; the target takes a –2 penalty to all defenses until the end of the blackwing’s next turn. <br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type=<br />
|name=Under Its Wing<br />
|action=while mounted by a friendly rider of 12th level or higher<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=Mount<br />
|effect=The blackwing grants its rider resist 5 cold and 5 necrotic. <br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Bottom<br />
|alignment=Unaligned<br />
|languages=―<br />
|skills=―<br />
|feats=<br />
|strength=24<br />
|strbonus=+13<br />
|dexterity=22<br />
|dexbonus=+12<br />
|wisdom=14<br />
|wisbonus=+8<br />
|constitution=20<br />
|conbonus=+11<br />
|intelligence=6<br />
|intbonus=+4<br />
|charisma=6<br />
|chabonus=+4<br />
}}<br />
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===Blackwing Tactics===<br />
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Blackwings are always flying, using ''frightful dive'' to swoop down on foes and incite fear in them. After attacking, they fly off and circle around to dive again. Blackwings use ''wail of despair'' whenever it recharges, and strike with ''combined attack'' against foes able to affect the blackwing with ranged attacks.<br />
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===Blackwing Lore===<br />
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A character knows the following information with a successful Religion check.<br />
:'''DC 15:''' This is an undead bird known as a blackwing, whose screech instills terror into foes’ hearts. It guards tombs high up in the mountains or located in frigid areas.<br />
:'''DC 20:''' The first blackwings were long ago raised from the corpses of giant eagles by their goblin tormentors. Through dark rituals, dead giant eagles are still raised to this day to serve as mounts.<br />
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===Encounter Groups===<br />
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Blackwings are most commonly encountered near tombs, tierelessly flying high above, on the lookout for tresspassers, although some are encountered as mounts serving as battle champions for undead creatures or the favored living.<br />
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[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Creature]]<br />
[[Category:Level 12]]<br />
[[Category:Skirmisher]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Type]]<br />
[[Category:Undead Subtype]]<br />
[[Category:Mount Subtype]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Blackwing_(4e_Creature)&diff=370642Blackwing (4e Creature)2009-06-23T01:12:31Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>==Blackwing==<br />
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{{author<br />
|author_name=Pennarin<br />
|date_created=08/23/09<br />
|status=Complete<br />
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These undead birds are guardians to mountainous tombs, and are sometimes raised to serve as mounts to evil champions or more powerful undead. <br />
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{{4e Creature Top<br />
|name=Blackwing<br />
|level=12<br />
|role=Skirmisher<br />
|size=Large<br />
|origin=natural<br />
|type=animate<br />
|keywords=mount, undead<br />
|xp=700<br />
|initiative=+13<br />
|senses=Perception +13; darkvision<br />
|aura1=<br />
|aurakeyword1=<br />
|aurarange1=<br />
|auraeffect1=<br />
|aura2=<br />
|aurakeyword2=<br />
|aurarange2=<br />
|auraeffect2=<br />
|special=<br />
|effect=<br />
|hp=124<br />
|bloodied=62<br />
|ac=26<br />
|fortitude=25<br />
|reflex=20<br />
|will=20<br />
|immune/resist/vulnerable='''Immune''' disease, poison; '''Resist''' 10 cold, 10 necrotic; '''Vulnerable''' 5 radiant<br />
|savingthrows=<br />
|speed=4, fly 10 (hover)<br />
|actionpoints=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{BM}}<br />
|name=Bite<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=Reach 2; +17 vs. AC; 2d6 + 5 damage.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{M}}<br />
|name=Claw<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=+17 vs. AC; 1d8 + 5 damage.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{M}}<br />
|name=Combined Attack<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=When hovering, the blackwing makes a bite attack and two claw attacks against the same target.<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{M}}<br />
|name=Frightful Dive<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=Fear<br />
|effect=The blackwing moves up to its fly speed and makes a bite attack against a target at any point during its move without provoking an opportunity attack, and the blackwing makes a secondary attack against the same target. ''Secondary Attack:'' +15 vs. Will; the target takes a –2 penalty to all defenses until the end of the blackwing’s next turn. <br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{C}}<br />
|name=Wail of Despair<br />
|action=minor<br />
|recharge=recharge {{5}} {{6}}<br />
|keywords=Fear<br />
|effect=Close burst 5; targets enemies; deafened creatures are immune; +13 vs. Will; the target takes a –2 penalty to all defenses until the end of the blackwing’s next turn. <br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type=<br />
|name=Under Its Wing<br />
|action=while mounted by a friendly rider of 12th level or higher<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=Mount<br />
|effect=The blackwing grants its rider resist 5 cold and 5 necrotic. <br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Bottom<br />
|alignment=Unaligned<br />
|languages=―<br />
|skills=―<br />
|feats=<br />
|strength=24<br />
|strbonus=+13<br />
|dexterity=22<br />
|dexbonus=+12<br />
|wisdom=14<br />
|wisbonus=+8<br />
|constitution=20<br />
|conbonus=+11<br />
|intelligence=6<br />
|intbonus=+4<br />
|charisma=6<br />
|chabonus=+4<br />
}}<br />
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===Blackwing Tactics===<br />
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Blackwings are always flying, using ''frightful dive'' to swoop down on foes and incite fear in them. After attacking, they fly off and circle around to dive again. Blackwings use ''wail of despair'' whenever it recharges, and strike with ''combined attack'' against foes able to affect the blackwing with ranged attacks.<br />
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===Blackwing Lore===<br />
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A character knows the following information with a successful Religion check.<br />
:'''DC 15:''' This is an undead bird known as a blackwing, whose screech instills terror into foes’ hearts. It guards tombs high up in the mountains or located in frigid areas.<br />
:'''DC 20:''' The first blackwings were long ago raised from the corpses of giant eagles by their goblin tormentors. Through dark rituals, dead giant eagles are still raised to this day to serve as mounts.<br />
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===Encounter Groups===<br />
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Blackwings are most commonly encountered near tombs, tierelessly flying high above, on the lookout for tresspassers, although some are encountered as mounts serving as battle champions for undead creatures or the favored living.<br />
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[[Category:4e]]<br />
[[Category:User]]<br />
[[Category:Creature]]<br />
[[Category:Level 12]]<br />
[[Category:Skirmisher]]<br />
[[Category:Natural Type]]<br />
[[Category:Undead Subtype]]<br />
[[Category:Mount Subtype]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Derro_(4e_Creature)&diff=369696Talk:Derro (4e Creature)2009-06-19T14:24:37Z<p>Aboleth11: /* Featured Article Nomination */</p>
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== Featured Article Nomination ==<br />
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I'm nominating this article because it could simply be the best 3.5 to 4e monster conversion I've seen to date, and it deserves to be noticed by all. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 17:03, 23 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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'''<s>Comment</s>''' &mdash; The image I have used on this page is from the WotC published book ''Underdark''. While it is my understanding that such use falls well within the fair use clause, I feel that the image page should carry some sort of legal disclaimer denouncing any association with the copyright holder. Is there an already-existing template that I can add to the image page to denote such? [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 22:11, 24 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; Didn't the Derro have Leader types called "Savants"? I believe they were Spellcasters (perhaps Sorcerers), I need to dig out my 3.5 books again to be sure. Anyway I was wondering if you were going to toss in an Elite Leader type similar to those? -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 01:53, 18 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:I dug out the old 3.5 MM and checked the Derro entry, it says they are least level 5 Sorcerers, and is always accompanied by two "lower-level students". I think you may have it with making them 11th level elite controller (leader). -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 00:44, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; Also I thought I remembered that Derro's always used poison on their crossbow bolts, and my wife says it was called ''Greenblood Oil''. Again I would need to pull out my 3.5 stuff to be 100% sure, but I thought I would throw it out to you as food for thought. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 01:56, 18 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:The 3.5 MM entry says Greenblood Oil from page 79 of the 3.5 DMG. I looked it up and it effected Con and had a DC of 13. After looking at page 51 of the 4e DMG I was thinking you might want to use ''Dark Toxin'' adding Dazed to the effect along with the ongoing damage (with a save ending both). That should give you Greenblood Oil. Well anyway it is just a thought. Again I think you hit the level and role for the Venomblade on the head. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 00:44, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; I like the idea of the derro lunatic priest of Diirinka. I think that would wrap them up nicely. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 21:53, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:Love the LP, they really do round out the Derro perfectly. Add in a general Derro description above the ToC, and then links throughout the entries and then I think this article would be ready for a ''Featured Article'' nomination. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:04, 23 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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'''Comment''' &mdash; The grammar is sub-par. Their are many many run-on-sentences, and sometimes I have to read it a few times to understand what it is meaning (especially in the opening section). --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:03, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:There are a large number of [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Complex-compound_sentence complex-compound] sentences, but I was only able to find one in the opening that was an explicit run-on sentence. There was also another that was poorly worded; both have been rewritten. I'll be combing through the individual entries over the next day or two to see if there's anything I can reword for clarity. If there's still something you feel needs to be improved upon, let me know and I'll try to reword it. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 21:59, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::All individual entries have been reworded, and the opening description has been revised slightly once again. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 18:48, 13 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Comment''' &mdash; Diirinka should be added to [[4e Deities|Deities]] and then have the link changed from the section on the race, to the deity page. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:00, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:A separate page has been added for [[Diirinka (4e Deity)|Diirinka]]. It is currently under construction - I'll let you know when it is complete. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 21:59, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::Entry on Diirinka is now complete. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 22:01, 24 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; The Derro society (and Diirinka) presented here seem... abnormal to the Derro as presented in the [[SRD:Derro|SRD]], [http://www.wargamevault.com/product_info.php?products_id=1828&it=1&filters=0_0_0&manufacturers_id=2491 Slayers Guide to Derro], and on [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Derro_(Dungeons_&_Dragons) Wikipedia]. Since this is a conversion from revised third edition I would recommend using the already present Derro information as a base. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 10:54, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:Could you elaborate on which items in particular you'd like to see changed? As with most of the more obscure 3.x races there's a lot of contradicting lore on the derro. The sources I used pegged them as chaotic and unable to control their madness. Others, such as the ones Wikipedia apparently used, describe them as more militaristic and capable of overcoming their insanity for days or even weeks at a time. I don't have a particular preference to which version of the lore is used, since the core concept is still the same, so I can change whatever it is that anyone feels doesn't quite "fit". --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 12:25, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::I gotta agree with Dracomortis, the Wiki entry is full of various contradictions and many times sounds too Duergar-like to be original (bad 3.X...bad). The SRD is very general (nothing in this version contradicts whats there) and way to 3.X mechanically to be used as much more then a quick refference to pattern after. And lastly I would never pattern a homebrew update on non-official sources, and while "The Slayer's Guide" is neat it should have no bearing on this update. I still think this is one of the best conversions this Wiki has seen so far. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 16:13, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::'''Oppose''' &mdash; I changed this comment to an oppose since I cannot agree with the derro societal implementation presented here. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 09:42, 5 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Green Dragon, I would like to politely ask again that you please specify which parts you don't agree with. I can find nothing in either the [[SRD:Derro|SRD]] or the 3.x sources cited by the Wikipeda article — [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Complete_Divine Complete Divine], the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monster_manual#3rd_Edition_Dungeons_.26_Dragons Monster Manual], and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Underdark_(supplement) Underdark] — that contradicts anything written here. Furthermore, the Slayer's Guide is an unofficial, third-party source that I do not have access to, and it should have no bearing on a conversion of an official race. -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 10:15, 5 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::I think that it doesn't matter. Maybe Dracomortis ''did'' change it but who cares. This is his conversion and a lot of things have changed from 3.5 to 4.0 (mostly for the better). I mean look at the duergar. They use to be evil dwarves who lived way underground and could expand their bodies. Now they're evil devil dwarves with quills for hair. I'd say these new Duergar are better then the old ones. And the same goes for Dracomortis's derro. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 08:23, 19 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Support''' I like that (like MM2's Duergar) you can use them consistently from mid Heroic tier to mid Paragon tier. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 08:12, 19 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Derro_(4e_Creature)&diff=369695Talk:Derro (4e Creature)2009-06-19T14:23:46Z<p>Aboleth11: /* Featured Article Nomination */</p>
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<div>{{Featured Article Nominee}}<br />
== Featured Article Nomination ==<br />
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I'm nominating this article because it could simply be the best 3.5 to 4e monster conversion I've seen to date, and it deserves to be noticed by all. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 17:03, 23 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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'''<s>Comment</s>''' &mdash; The image I have used on this page is from the WotC published book ''Underdark''. While it is my understanding that such use falls well within the fair use clause, I feel that the image page should carry some sort of legal disclaimer denouncing any association with the copyright holder. Is there an already-existing template that I can add to the image page to denote such? [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 22:11, 24 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; Didn't the Derro have Leader types called "Savants"? I believe they were Spellcasters (perhaps Sorcerers), I need to dig out my 3.5 books again to be sure. Anyway I was wondering if you were going to toss in an Elite Leader type similar to those? -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 01:53, 18 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:I dug out the old 3.5 MM and checked the Derro entry, it says they are least level 5 Sorcerers, and is always accompanied by two "lower-level students". I think you may have it with making them 11th level elite controller (leader). -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 00:44, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; Also I thought I remembered that Derro's always used poison on their crossbow bolts, and my wife says it was called ''Greenblood Oil''. Again I would need to pull out my 3.5 stuff to be 100% sure, but I thought I would throw it out to you as food for thought. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 01:56, 18 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:The 3.5 MM entry says Greenblood Oil from page 79 of the 3.5 DMG. I looked it up and it effected Con and had a DC of 13. After looking at page 51 of the 4e DMG I was thinking you might want to use ''Dark Toxin'' adding Dazed to the effect along with the ongoing damage (with a save ending both). That should give you Greenblood Oil. Well anyway it is just a thought. Again I think you hit the level and role for the Venomblade on the head. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 00:44, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; I like the idea of the derro lunatic priest of Diirinka. I think that would wrap them up nicely. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 21:53, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:Love the LP, they really do round out the Derro perfectly. Add in a general Derro description above the ToC, and then links throughout the entries and then I think this article would be ready for a ''Featured Article'' nomination. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:04, 23 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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'''Comment''' &mdash; The grammar is sub-par. Their are many many run-on-sentences, and sometimes I have to read it a few times to understand what it is meaning (especially in the opening section). --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:03, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:There are a large number of [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Complex-compound_sentence complex-compound] sentences, but I was only able to find one in the opening that was an explicit run-on sentence. There was also another that was poorly worded; both have been rewritten. I'll be combing through the individual entries over the next day or two to see if there's anything I can reword for clarity. If there's still something you feel needs to be improved upon, let me know and I'll try to reword it. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 21:59, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::All individual entries have been reworded, and the opening description has been revised slightly once again. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 18:48, 13 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Comment''' &mdash; Diirinka should be added to [[4e Deities|Deities]] and then have the link changed from the section on the race, to the deity page. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:00, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:A separate page has been added for [[Diirinka (4e Deity)|Diirinka]]. It is currently under construction - I'll let you know when it is complete. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 21:59, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::Entry on Diirinka is now complete. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 22:01, 24 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; The Derro society (and Diirinka) presented here seem... abnormal to the Derro as presented in the [[SRD:Derro|SRD]], [http://www.wargamevault.com/product_info.php?products_id=1828&it=1&filters=0_0_0&manufacturers_id=2491 Slayers Guide to Derro], and on [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Derro_(Dungeons_&_Dragons) Wikipedia]. Since this is a conversion from revised third edition I would recommend using the already present Derro information as a base. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 10:54, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:Could you elaborate on which items in particular you'd like to see changed? As with most of the more obscure 3.x races there's a lot of contradicting lore on the derro. The sources I used pegged them as chaotic and unable to control their madness. Others, such as the ones Wikipedia apparently used, describe them as more militaristic and capable of overcoming their insanity for days or even weeks at a time. I don't have a particular preference to which version of the lore is used, since the core concept is still the same, so I can change whatever it is that anyone feels doesn't quite "fit". --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 12:25, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::I gotta agree with Dracomortis, the Wiki entry is full of various contradictions and many times sounds too Duergar-like to be original (bad 3.X...bad). The SRD is very general (nothing in this version contradicts whats there) and way to 3.X mechanically to be used as much more then a quick refference to pattern after. And lastly I would never pattern a homebrew update on non-official sources, and while "The Slayer's Guide" is neat it should have no bearing on this update. I still think this is one of the best conversions this Wiki has seen so far. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 16:13, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::'''Oppose''' &mdash; I changed this comment to an oppose since I cannot agree with the derro societal implementation presented here. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 09:42, 5 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Green Dragon, I would like to politely ask again that you please specify which parts you don't agree with. I can find nothing in either the [[SRD:Derro|SRD]] or the 3.x sources cited by the Wikipeda article — [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Complete_Divine Complete Divine], the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monster_manual#3rd_Edition_Dungeons_.26_Dragons Monster Manual], and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Underdark_(supplement) Underdark] — that contradicts anything written here. Furthermore, the Slayer's Guide is an unofficial, third-party source that I do not have access to, and it should have no bearing on a conversion of an official race. -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 10:15, 5 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::I think that it doesn't matter. Maybe Dracomortis ''did'' change it but who cares. This is his conversion and a lot of things have changed from 3.5 to 4.0 (mostly for the better). I mean look at the duergar. They use to be evil dwarves who lived way underground and could expand their bodies. Now they're evil devil dwarves with quills sticking for hair. I'd say these new Duergar are better then the old ones. And the same goes for Dracomortis's derro. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 08:23, 19 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Support''' I like that (like MM2's Duergar) you can use them consistently from mid Heroic tier to mid Paragon tier. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 08:12, 19 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Derro_(4e_Creature)&diff=369694Talk:Derro (4e Creature)2009-06-19T14:12:50Z<p>Aboleth11: /* Featured Article Nomination */</p>
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I'm nominating this article because it could simply be the best 3.5 to 4e monster conversion I've seen to date, and it deserves to be noticed by all. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 17:03, 23 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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'''<s>Comment</s>''' &mdash; The image I have used on this page is from the WotC published book ''Underdark''. While it is my understanding that such use falls well within the fair use clause, I feel that the image page should carry some sort of legal disclaimer denouncing any association with the copyright holder. Is there an already-existing template that I can add to the image page to denote such? [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 22:11, 24 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; Didn't the Derro have Leader types called "Savants"? I believe they were Spellcasters (perhaps Sorcerers), I need to dig out my 3.5 books again to be sure. Anyway I was wondering if you were going to toss in an Elite Leader type similar to those? -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 01:53, 18 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:I dug out the old 3.5 MM and checked the Derro entry, it says they are least level 5 Sorcerers, and is always accompanied by two "lower-level students". I think you may have it with making them 11th level elite controller (leader). -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 00:44, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; Also I thought I remembered that Derro's always used poison on their crossbow bolts, and my wife says it was called ''Greenblood Oil''. Again I would need to pull out my 3.5 stuff to be 100% sure, but I thought I would throw it out to you as food for thought. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 01:56, 18 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:The 3.5 MM entry says Greenblood Oil from page 79 of the 3.5 DMG. I looked it up and it effected Con and had a DC of 13. After looking at page 51 of the 4e DMG I was thinking you might want to use ''Dark Toxin'' adding Dazed to the effect along with the ongoing damage (with a save ending both). That should give you Greenblood Oil. Well anyway it is just a thought. Again I think you hit the level and role for the Venomblade on the head. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 00:44, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; I like the idea of the derro lunatic priest of Diirinka. I think that would wrap them up nicely. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 21:53, 19 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:Love the LP, they really do round out the Derro perfectly. Add in a general Derro description above the ToC, and then links throughout the entries and then I think this article would be ready for a ''Featured Article'' nomination. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:04, 23 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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'''Comment''' &mdash; The grammar is sub-par. Their are many many run-on-sentences, and sometimes I have to read it a few times to understand what it is meaning (especially in the opening section). --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:03, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:There are a large number of [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Complex-compound_sentence complex-compound] sentences, but I was only able to find one in the opening that was an explicit run-on sentence. There was also another that was poorly worded; both have been rewritten. I'll be combing through the individual entries over the next day or two to see if there's anything I can reword for clarity. If there's still something you feel needs to be improved upon, let me know and I'll try to reword it. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 21:59, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::All individual entries have been reworded, and the opening description has been revised slightly once again. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 18:48, 13 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Comment''' &mdash; Diirinka should be added to [[4e Deities|Deities]] and then have the link changed from the section on the race, to the deity page. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 15:00, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:A separate page has been added for [[Diirinka (4e Deity)|Diirinka]]. It is currently under construction - I'll let you know when it is complete. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 21:59, 12 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::Entry on Diirinka is now complete. --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 22:01, 24 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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<s>'''Comment'''</s> &mdash; The Derro society (and Diirinka) presented here seem... abnormal to the Derro as presented in the [[SRD:Derro|SRD]], [http://www.wargamevault.com/product_info.php?products_id=1828&it=1&filters=0_0_0&manufacturers_id=2491 Slayers Guide to Derro], and on [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Derro_(Dungeons_&_Dragons) Wikipedia]. Since this is a conversion from revised third edition I would recommend using the already present Derro information as a base. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 10:54, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:Could you elaborate on which items in particular you'd like to see changed? As with most of the more obscure 3.x races there's a lot of contradicting lore on the derro. The sources I used pegged them as chaotic and unable to control their madness. Others, such as the ones Wikipedia apparently used, describe them as more militaristic and capable of overcoming their insanity for days or even weeks at a time. I don't have a particular preference to which version of the lore is used, since the core concept is still the same, so I can change whatever it is that anyone feels doesn't quite "fit". --[[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 12:25, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::I gotta agree with Dracomortis, the Wiki entry is full of various contradictions and many times sounds too Duergar-like to be original (bad 3.X...bad). The SRD is very general (nothing in this version contradicts whats there) and way to 3.X mechanically to be used as much more then a quick refference to pattern after. And lastly I would never pattern a homebrew update on non-official sources, and while "The Slayer's Guide" is neat it should have no bearing on this update. I still think this is one of the best conversions this Wiki has seen so far. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 16:13, 25 March 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::'''Oppose''' &mdash; I changed this comment to an oppose since I cannot agree with the derro societal implementation presented here. --[[User:Green Dragon|Green Dragon]] 09:42, 5 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Green Dragon, I would like to politely ask again that you please specify which parts you don't agree with. I can find nothing in either the [[SRD:Derro|SRD]] or the 3.x sources cited by the Wikipeda article — [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Complete_Divine Complete Divine], the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monster_manual#3rd_Edition_Dungeons_.26_Dragons Monster Manual], and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Underdark_(supplement) Underdark] — that contradicts anything written here. Furthermore, the Slayer's Guide is an unofficial, third-party source that I do not have access to, and it should have no bearing on a conversion of an official race. -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 10:15, 5 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Support''' I like that (like MM2's Duergar) you can use them consistently from mid Heroic tier to mid Paragon tier. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 08:12, 19 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Beetle_(4e_Creature)&diff=369692Talk:Beetle (4e Creature)2009-06-19T13:50:07Z<p>Aboleth11: /* Featured Article Review */</p>
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'''Support''' This is one of the best monsters on the entire wiki. The creatures presented here are balanced and interesting (my personal favorite being the hoard scarab) and convert the bombardier beetle to 4e. I heartily endorse this article. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:47, 16 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Comment''' — The hoard scarab was "officially" converted in ''Draconomicon'', after I created my version but before I posted it. Aside from the bite attack, which is mechanically similar to mine (presumably because both versions attempted to translate the 3.5 version of the ability in the most direct way possible), the two versions are fairly distinct from one another. Still, I wonder if it would be preferable to remove my version, so as to avoid any potential confusion. Opinions? -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 12:47, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:No. I like your version. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 20:09, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::Besides yours is the only one with the individual scarab. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 20:13, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::''Draconomicon'' has the individual beetle, as well as a swarm. However, as long as there's an interest in my version, I'll leave it up. -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 22:26, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Are you sure cuz it's not in the Compendium. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 08:13, 18 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::You could add a "Varient" label to the ''Hoard Scarab'' (maybe with a notation about the "official" entry in ''Draconomicon'') so users will know they have a choice...who knows they may want to mix both types together in one encounter (I love doing that myself). -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 12:02, 18 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::::@Aboleth11: Yep. It has the "hoard scarab" and the "hoard scarab larva swarm" in the "Draconic Parasite" entry. Perhaps they haven't been entered into the Compendium yet? @Sepsis: Good idea. I've renamed the page section to "Hoard Scarab, Variant". -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 19:56, 18 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::::::I guess they haven't. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 07:50, 19 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Cliff_Drake_(4e_Creature)&diff=369453Cliff Drake (4e Creature)2009-06-18T16:18:13Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>Hello I'm Aboleth11. I'm a pretty new user but I'm a fairly experienced Dnder. I have been playing for 3 years and I love to design monsters.<br />
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== My Creations ==<br />
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'''Aberrant Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Aberrant Heritage (4e Feat)|Aberrant Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Grasping Tentacle (4e Feat)|Grasping Tentacle]]<br />
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:[[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Dragon Wings (4e Feat)|Dragon Wings]]<br />
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:[[Frightful Presence (4e Feat)|Frightful Presence]]<br />
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:[[Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)|Improved Dragon Breath]]<br />
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[[Astral Messenger (4e Creature)|Astral Messenger]]<br />
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[[Cliff Drake (4e Creature)|Cliff Drake]] (Under construction)<br />
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[[Darkscale Lizardfolk (4e Creature)|Darkscale Lizardfolk]]<br />
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[[Har'Clarth (4e Creature)|Har'Clarth]]<br />
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[[Warped Skeleton (4e Creature)|Warped Skeleton]]<br />
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[[Yug-Ut (4e Creature)|Yug-Ut]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Aboleth11&diff=369445User:Aboleth112009-06-18T15:56:51Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>Hello I'm Aboleth11. I'm a pretty new user but I'm a fairly experienced Dnder. I have been playing for 3 years and I love to design monsters.<br />
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== My Creations ==<br />
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=== Feats ===<br />
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'''Aberrant Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Aberrant Heritage (4e Feat)|Aberrant Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Alien Visage (4e Feat)|Alien Visage]]<br />
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:[[Grasping Tentacle (4e Feat)|Grasping Tentacle]]<br />
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'''Draconic Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Dragon Wings (4e Feat)|Dragon Wings]]<br />
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:[[Frightful Presence (4e Feat)|Frightful Presence]]<br />
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:[[Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)|Improved Dragon Breath]]<br />
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=== Monsters ===<br />
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[[Astral Messenger (4e Creature)|Astral Messenger]]<br />
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[[Cliff Drake (4e Creature)|Cliff Drake]]<br />
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[[Darkscale Lizardfolk (4e Creature)|Darkscale Lizardfolk]]<br />
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[[Har'Clarth (4e Creature)|Har'Clarth]]<br />
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[[Warped Skeleton (4e Creature)|Warped Skeleton]]<br />
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[[Yug-Ut (4e Creature)|Yug-Ut]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Cliff_Drake_(4e_Creature)&diff=369444Cliff Drake (4e Creature)2009-06-18T15:56:02Z<p>Aboleth11: New page: {{Author |author_name=Aboleth11 |date_created=06/18/2009 |status=Incomplete }} ==Cliff Drake== {{4e Creature Top |name=Cliff Drake |level=5 |role=Skirmisher |size=Medium |origin=natural...</p>
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|author_name=Aboleth11<br />
|date_created=06/18/2009<br />
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==Cliff Drake==<br />
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{{4e Creature Top<br />
|name=Cliff Drake<br />
|level=5<br />
|role=Skirmisher<br />
|size=Medium<br />
|origin=natural<br />
|type=beast<br />
|keywords=<br />
|xp=200<br />
|initiative=+8<br />
|senses=Perception +9; low-light vision<br />
|aura1=<br />
|aurakeyword1=<br />
|aurarange1=<br />
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|aurakeyword2=<br />
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|special=<br />
|effect=<br />
|hp=57<br />
|bloodied=28<br />
|ac=20<br />
|fortitude=16<br />
|reflex=18<br />
|will=16<br />
|immune/resist/vulnerable=<br />
|savingthrows=<br />
|speed=8, climb 8<br />
|actionpoints=<br />
}}<br />
{{4e Creature Power<br />
|type={{BM}}<br />
|name=Bite<br />
|action=standard<br />
|recharge=at-will<br />
|keywords=<br />
|effect=+11 vs. AC; 1d8+4 damage.<br />
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|skills=<br />
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|strength=15<br />
|strbonus=+4<br />
|dexterity=18<br />
|dexbonus=+6<br />
|wisdom=14<br />
|wisbonus=+4<br />
|constitution=12<br />
|conbonus=+3<br />
|intelligence=3<br />
|intbonus=-2<br />
|charisma=9<br />
|chabonus=+1<br />
}}<br />
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'''Support''' This is one of the best monsters on the entire wiki. The creatures presented here are balanced and interesting (my personal favorite being the hoard scarab) and convert the bombardier beetle to 4e. I heartily endorse this article. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:47, 16 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Comment''' — The hoard scarab was "officially" converted in ''Draconomicon'', after I created my version but before I posted it. Aside from the bite attack, which is mechanically similar to mine (presumably because both versions attempted to translate the 3.5 version of the ability in the most direct way possible), the two versions are fairly distinct from one another. Still, I wonder if it would be preferable to remove my version, so as to avoid any potential confusion. Opinions? -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 12:47, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:No. I like your version. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 20:09, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::Besides yours is the only one with the individual scarab. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 20:13, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::''Draconomicon'' has the individual beetle, as well as a swarm. However, as long as there's an interest in my version, I'll leave it up. -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 22:26, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::Are you sure cuz it's not in the Compendium. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 08:13, 18 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Beetle_(4e_Creature)&diff=369372Talk:Beetle (4e Creature)2009-06-18T02:13:20Z<p>Aboleth11: /* Featured Article Review */</p>
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== Featured Article Review ==<br />
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'''Support''' This is one of the best monsters on the entire wiki. The creatures presented here are balanced and interesting (my personal favorite being the hoard scarab) and convert the bombardier beetle to 4e. I heartily endorse this article. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:47, 16 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Comment''' — The hoard scarab was "officially" converted in ''Draconomicon'', after I created my version but before I posted it. Aside from the bite attack, which is mechanically similar to mine (presumably because both versions attempted to translate the 3.5 version of the ability in the most direct way possible), the two versions are fairly distinct from one another. Still, I wonder if it would be preferable to remove my version, so as to avoid any potential confusion. Opinions? -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 12:47, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:No. I like your version. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 20:09, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::Besides yours is the only one with the individual scarab. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 20:13, 17 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Beetle_(4e_Creature)&diff=369369Talk:Beetle (4e Creature)2009-06-18T02:09:11Z<p>Aboleth11: /* Featured Article Review */</p>
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== Featured Article Review ==<br />
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'''Support''' This is one of the best monsters on the entire wiki. The creatures presented here are balanced and interesting (my personal favorite being the hoard scarab) and convert the bombardier beetle to 4e. I heartily endorse this article. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:47, 16 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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'''Comment''' — The hoard scarab was "officially" converted in ''Draconomicon'', after I created my version but before I posted it. Aside from the bite attack, which is mechanically similar to mine (presumably because both versions attempted to translate the 3.5 version of the ability in the most direct way possible), the two versions are fairly distinct from one another. Still, I wonder if it would be preferable to remove my version, so as to avoid any potential confusion. Opinions? -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 12:47, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:No. I like your version. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 20:09, 17 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Aboleth11&diff=369314User:Aboleth112009-06-17T20:26:54Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>Hello I'm Aboleth11. I'm a pretty new user but I'm a fairly experienced Dnder. I have been playing for 3 years and I love to design monsters.<br />
<br />
== My Creations ==<br />
<br />
=== Feats ===<br />
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'''Aberrant Bloodline Feats'''<br />
<br />
:[[Aberrant Heritage (4e Feat)|Aberrant Heritage]]<br />
<br />
:[[Alien Visage (4e Feat)|Alien Visage]]<br />
<br />
:[[Grasping Tentacle (4e Feat)|Grasping Tentacle]]<br />
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'''Draconic Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Dragon Wings (4e Feat)|Dragon Wings]]<br />
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:[[Frightful Presence (4e Feat)|Frightful Presence]]<br />
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:[[Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)|Improved Dragon Breath]]<br />
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=== Monsters ===<br />
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[[Astral Messenger (4e Creature)|Astral Messenger]]<br />
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[[Darkscale Lizardfolk (4e Creature)|Darkscale Lizardfolk]]<br />
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[[Har'Clarth (4e Creature)|Har'Clarth]]<br />
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[[Warped Skeleton (4e Creature)|Warped Skeleton]]<br />
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[[Yug-Ut (4e Creature)|Yug-Ut]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Improved_Dragon_Breath_(4e_Feat)&diff=369312Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)2009-06-17T20:23:29Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you took Draconic Heritage:<br />
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*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of your next turn, you give a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 5 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' You deal 5 lightning damage to one creature within 5 squares of each target. Miss: Half damage and the attack does not deal 5 lightning damage to a creature within 5 squares of the target.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' The blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': The target is pushed 3 squares and takes ongoing 5 acid damage. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 poison damage and is slowed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': You pull the target 3 squares. The target also takes ongoing 5 damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 psychic damage and is dazed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage, and the target is not dazed and does not take ongoing damage.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals 4d4 damage instead of 3d4 and the target takes ongoing 5 fire damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': The target gains vulnerable 5 to all damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
}}<br />
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you took Draconic Heritage:<br />
<br />
*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of your next turn, you give a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 5 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' You deal 5 lightning damage to one creature within 5 squares of each target. Miss: Half damage and the attack does not deal 5 lightning damage to a creature within 5 squares of the target.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' The blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': The target is pushed 3 squares and takes ongoing 5 acid damage. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 poison damage and is slowed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': You pull the target 3 squares. The target also takes ongoing 5 damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 psychic damage and is dazed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage, and the target is not dazed and does not take ongoing damage.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals 4d4 damage instead of 3d4 and the target takes ongoing 5 fire damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': The target gains vulnerable 5 to all damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
}}<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you took Draconic Heritage:<br />
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*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of your next turn, you give a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 5 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' You deal 5 lightning damage to one creature within 5 squares of each target. Miss: Half damage and the attack does not deal 5 lightning damage to a creature within 5 squares of the target.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' The blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': The target is pushed 2 squares and takes ongoing 5 acid damage. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 poison damage and is slowed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': You pull the target 3 squares. The target also takes ongoing 5 damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 psychic damage and is dazed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage, and the target is not dazed and does not take ongoing damage.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals 4d4 damage instead of 3d4 and the target takes ongoing 5 fire damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': The target gains vulnerable 5 to all damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
}}<br />
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you took Draconic Heritage:<br />
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*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of your next turn, you give a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 5 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' You deal 5 lightning damage to one creature within 5 squares of each target. Miss: Half damage and the attack does not deal 5 lightning damage to a creature within 5 squares of the target.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' The blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': The target is pushed 2 squares and takes ongoing 5 acid damage. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 poison damage and is slowed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': You pull the target 3 squares. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 psychic damage and is dazed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage, and the target is not dazed and does not take ongoing damage.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals 4d4 damage instead of 3d4 and the target takes ongoing 5 fire damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': The target gains vulnerable 5 to all damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you took Draconic Heritage:<br />
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*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of your next turn, you give a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 5 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' You deal 5 lightning damage to one creature within 5 squares of each target. Miss: Half damage and the attack does not deal 5 lightning damage to a creature within 5 squares of the target.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' The blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': The target is slowed (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': The target is pushed 2 squares and takes ongoing 5 acid damage. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 poison damage and is slowed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': You pull the target 3 squares. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 psychic damage and is dazed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage, and the target is not dazed and does not take ongoing damage.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals 4d4 damage instead of 3d4 and the target takes ongoing 5 fire damage (save ends).<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': The target gains vulnerable 5 to all damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
<br />
'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
<br />
'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you took Draconic Heritage:<br />
<br />
*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of your next turn, you give a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 10 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' You deal 5 lightning damage to one creature within 5 squares of each target. Miss: Half damage and the attack does not deal 5 lightning damage to a creature within 5 squares of the target.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' The blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': The target is slowed (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': The target is pushed 2 squares and takes ongoing 5 acid damage. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 poison damage and is slowed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': You pull the target 3 squares. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 psychic damage and is dazed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage, and the target is not dazed and does not take ongoing damage.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals 4d4 damage instead of 3d4 and the target takes ongoing 5 fire damage (save ends).<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': The target gains vulnerable 5 to all damage (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
<br />
'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
<br />
'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you took Draconic Heritage:<br />
<br />
*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of the adult adamantine dragon’s next turn, it gives a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 10 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' You deal 5 lightning damage to one creature within 5 squares of each target. Miss: Half damage and the attack does not deal 5 lightning damage to a creature within 5 squares of the target.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' The blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': The target is slowed (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': The target is pushed 2 squares and takes ongoing 5 acid damage. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 poison damage and is slowed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': You pull the target 3 squares. Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': The target takes ongoing 5 psychic damage and is dazed (save ends both). Miss: Half damage, and the target is not dazed and does not take ongoing damage.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals fire damage. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
<br />
'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
<br />
'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you chose Draconic Heritage:<br />
<br />
*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of the adult adamantine dragon’s next turn, it gives a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 10 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' You deal 5 lightning damage to one creature within 5 squares of each target. Miss: Half damage and the attack does not deal 5 lightning damage to a creature within 5 squares of the target.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' The blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': The target is slowed (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': The target is weakened (save ends). Miss: Half damage.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals acid damage. You gain resist 5 acid.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals poison damage. You gain resist 5 poison.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals lightning damage. You gain resist 5 lightning.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals psychic damage. You gain resist 5 psychic.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals fire damage. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
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Just as a freindly notem, seeing as the book of spider kind is a suplement to mine and sams campaign setting, please don't edit the summoning keyword to conjuration, he made his own version of the summoning keyword for the source book, thanks! [[User:ShadowyFigure|ShadowyFigure]] 13:37, 26 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:: ''I'm really sorry. I was playing around in the sandbox and then I couldn't figure out how to delete it... [[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:51, 26 May 2009 (MDT) '' That's Aboleth11's response that I dug out of the page history. So this is me, but it's really him. -- [[User:Jota|Jota]] 17:31, 26 May 2009 (MDT)<br />
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Got my first look at MM2. IT'S FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!!! I'm getting it real soon.</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Death_Worm_(4e_Creature)&diff=369286Talk:Death Worm (4e Creature)2009-06-17T19:28:01Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>==Cryptid==<br />
This monster is based on the "Mongolian Death Worm" cryptid. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 15:39, 3 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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==Encounters==<br />
I will put up Encounter Groups within the next few days. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 15:39, 3 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:Once more I'm having some problems with coming up with some good encounter groups for these guys. Any suggestions will be apprieciated. - [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:35, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::Hmm. Given the somewhat limited fluff for creatures in 4e, there's very few that would explicitly fit in a desert environment. I suppose you could have a few of the worms preying on a not-quite-dead hyena, or maybe serving as mounts for desert-dwelling kobolds. If you have ''Monster Manual 2'', a dust devil elemental could wander by during the middle of an encounter.<br />
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== Basic Attack ==<br />
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I'm pretty sure that in 4e creatures are required to have at least one basic attack. Otherwise this is (as usual) a great monster, though I think that it would greatly benefit from a melee attack. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 21:12, 16 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::'''Defensive Jolt''' is also a ''Basic Melee'' attack. But I will add it as a seperate power, just to keep it clear, thanks. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 11:16, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:::I went ahead and created a ''BM'' for them, a '''Bite''', so they can cause untyped damage. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 11:24, 17 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::::It looks much better. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 13:28, 17 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Death_Worm_(4e_Creature)&diff=369071Talk:Death Worm (4e Creature)2009-06-17T03:12:28Z<p>Aboleth11: New section: Basic Attack</p>
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<div>==Cryptid==<br />
This monster is based on the "Mongolian Death Worm" cryptid. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 15:39, 3 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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==Encounters==<br />
I will put up Encounter Groups within the next few days. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 15:39, 3 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:Once more I'm having some problems with coming up with some good encounter groups for these guys. Any suggestions will be apprieciated. - [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 13:35, 4 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
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::Hmm. Given the somewhat limited fluff for creatures in 4e, there's very few that would explicitly fit in a desert environment. I suppose you could have a few of the worms preying on a not-quite-dead hyena, or maybe serving as mounts for desert-dwelling kobolds. If you have ''Monster Manual 2'', a dust devil elemental could wander by during the middle of an encounter.<br />
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== Basic Attack ==<br />
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I'm pretty sure that in 4e creatures are required to have at least one basic attack. Otherwise this is (as usual) a great monster, though I think that it would greatly benefit from a melee attack. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 21:12, 16 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Dracomortis&diff=368989User talk:Dracomortis2009-06-16T22:49:35Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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== Derro and Duergar ==<br />
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Great job on both of these. Now we just need some race specific Feats. Keep up the good work. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 16:54, 11 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:Love the Feats. While none of my Players are interested in running either of these races I plan on creating a few NPC baddies from these. Thanks for your work, great stuff. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 19:57, 11 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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::My last request...well maybe...I know that Duergar will most likely end up in the MM2, but I was wondering if you had any plans to do monster stats for both them and the Derro? If not I understand, I was just thinking it would work well to be able to have generic stats for them as well as these PC/NPC stats. Any way just a thought. Thanks for your time. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 18:13, 13 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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:::I noticed you have started creating the Derro Vocalist. I was wondering if you plan on creating more types you might want to just create a ''Derro'' entry and place the various types under that. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 22:34, 14 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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::::Yeah, the standard format for Monsters (as per the MM) puts the various levels/roles of a monster on one page. -- [[User:Sepsis|Sepsis]] 10:23, 15 February 2009 (MST)<br />
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== Corrupted Human Bandit ==<br />
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I've noticed that you've been working on the [[Corrupted Human Bandit (4e Creature)]] page since the deletion template was added. Would you like to adopt this page and finish it? [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 18:15, 21 April 2009 (MDT)<br />
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:I didn't realize there was any sort of formal procedure to adopting a page, but I would gladly adopt it and finish it up. -- [[User:Dracomortis|Dracomortis]] 11:45, 22 April 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Beetle_(4e_Creature)&diff=368986Talk:Beetle (4e Creature)2009-06-16T22:47:56Z<p>Aboleth11: New section: Featured Article Review</p>
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'''Support''' This is one of the best monsters on the entire wiki. The creatures presented here are balanced and interesting (my personal favorite being the hoard scarab) and convert the bombardier beetle to 4e. I heartily endorse this article. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:47, 16 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Beetle_(4e_Creature)&diff=368980Talk:Beetle (4e Creature)2009-06-16T22:42:06Z<p>Aboleth11: New page: {{Featured Article Under Review}}</p>
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<div>This is probably the worst monster I have ever seen. The rules make no sense and there are no symbols for the attacks. There may also have been grammar and or spelling issues. Please do not dump your trash on this wiki, [[User:Buggy2you1|Buggy2you1]]. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:25, 16 June 2009 (MDT)<br />
:This actually isn't that bad compared to the rest of Buggy's "contributions". --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:34, 16 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Beetleling_(4e_Creature)&diff=368972Talk:Beetleling (4e Creature)2009-06-16T22:29:00Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>This is probably the worst monster I have ever seen. The rules make no sense and there are no symbols for the attacks. There may also have been grammar and or spelling issues. Please do not dump your trash on this wiki, [[User:Buggy2you1|Buggy2you1]]. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:25, 16 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Talk:Beetleling_(4e_Creature)&diff=368970Talk:Beetleling (4e Creature)2009-06-16T22:25:55Z<p>Aboleth11: New page: This is probably the worst monster I have ever seen. The rules make no sense and there are no symbols for the attacks. There may also have been grammar and or spelling issues. Please do no...</p>
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<div>This is probably the worst monster I have ever seen. The rules make no sense and there are no symbols for the attacks. There may also have been grammar and or spelling issues. Please do not dump your trash on this wiki. --[[User:Aboleth11|Aboleth11]] 16:25, 16 June 2009 (MDT)</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Improved_Dragon_Breath_(4e_Feat)&diff=368161Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)2009-06-13T18:28:54Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage.<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you chose Draconic Heritage:<br />
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*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of the adult adamantine dragon’s next turn, it gives a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 10 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:'''' For each target inside the blast that you deal damage to,<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' Your breath weapon deals 1d4 untyped damage and the blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals acid damage. You gain resist 5 acid.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals fire damage. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals acid damage. You gain resist 5 acid.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals poison damage. You gain resist 5 poison.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals lightning damage. You gain resist 5 lightning.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals psychic damage. You gain resist 5 psychic.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals fire damage. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you chose Draconic Heritage:<br />
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*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' The target is knocked prone. Miss: Half damage. Effect: At the start of the adult adamantine dragon’s next turn, it gives a thunderous roar: close burst 3; no attack roll; 10 thunder damage.<br />
* '''Black Dragon:''' The target takes ongoing 10 acid damage and takes a -4 penalty to AC (save ends both).<br />
* '''Blue Dragon:''' Your breath weapon deals lightning damage. You gain resist 5 lightning.<br />
* '''Brown Dragon:''' Your breath weapon deals 1d4 untyped damage and the blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
* '''Copper Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals acid damage. You gain resist 5 acid.<br />
* '''Gold Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals fire damage. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
* '''Gray Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals acid damage. You gain resist 5 acid.<br />
* '''Green Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals poison damage. You gain resist 5 poison.<br />
* '''Iron Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals lightning damage. You gain resist 5 lightning.<br />
* '''Purple Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals psychic damage. You gain resist 5 psychic.<br />
* '''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals fire damage. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
* '''Silver Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
* '''White Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
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===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]===<br />
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
|class=<br />
|flavor=You call on your dragon ancestors to unleash a torrent of energy.<br />
|keyword1=Acid, Cold, Fire, Lightning, Poison, Thunder<br />
|range=Close Blast<br />
|rangemod=5<br />
|target=Creatures in blast<br />
|attack=Strength, Constitution or Dexterity<br />
|defense=Reflex<br />
|hit=3d4 acid, cold, fire, lightning, poison or thunder damage<br />
|effect=<br />
|special=Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you chose Draconic Heritage.<br />
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'''Special:''' Your attack has a special effect determined by which type of dragon you chose when you chose Draconic Heritage:<br />
*'''Adamantine Dragon:''' Your breath weapon deals thunder damage. You gain resist 5 thunder.<br />
*'''Black Dragon:''' Your breath weapon deals acid damage. You gain resist 5 acid.<br />
*'''Blue Dragon:''' Your breath weapon deals lightning damage. You gain resist 5 lightning.<br />
*'''Brown Dragon:''' Your breath weapon deals 1d4 untyped damage and the blast creates an area of swirling sand that remains in place until the end of your next turn. Any creature that starts its turn adjacent to the area or that moves through the area takes 5 damage. The area blocks line of sight for all creatures except you. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
*'''Copper Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals acid damage. You gain resist 5 acid.<br />
*'''Gold Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals fire damage. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
*'''Gray Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals acid damage. You gain resist 5 acid.<br />
*'''Green Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals poison damage. You gain resist 5 poison.<br />
*'''Iron Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals lightning damage. You gain resist 5 lightning.<br />
*'''Purple Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals psychic damage. You gain resist 5 psychic.<br />
*'''Red Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals fire damage. You gain resist 5 fire.<br />
*'''Silver Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
*'''White Dragon''': Your breath weapon deals cold damage. You gain resist 5 cold.<br />
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[[Category:Draconic Bloodline Feat]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Aboleth11&diff=367991User:Aboleth112009-06-12T23:06:24Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>Hello I'm Aboleth11. I'm a pretty new user but I'm a fairly experienced Dnder. I have been playing for 3 years and I love to design monsters.<br />
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== My Creations ==<br />
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=== Feats ===<br />
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'''Aberrant Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Aberrant Heritage (4e Feat)|Aberrant Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Alien Visage (4e Feat)|Alien Visage]]<br />
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:[[Grasping Tentacle (4e Feat)|Grasping Tentacle]]<br />
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'''Draconic Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Dragon Wings (4e Feat)|Dragon Wings]]<br />
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:[[Frightful Presence (4e Feat)|Frightful Presence]]<br />
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:[[Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)|Improved Dragon Breath]] (Under construction)<br />
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=== Monsters ===<br />
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[[Astral Messenger (4e Creature)|Astral Messenger]]<br />
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[[Darkscale Lizardfolk (4e Creature)|Darkscale Lizardfolk]]<br />
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[[Har'Clarth (4e Creature)|Har'Clarth]]<br />
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[[Warped Skeleton (4e Creature)|Warped Skeleton]]<br />
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[[Yug-Ut (4e Creature)|Yug-Ut]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Aboleth11&diff=367990User:Aboleth112009-06-12T23:06:10Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>Hello I'm Aboleth11. I'm a pretty new user but I'm a fairly experienced Dnder. I have been playing for 3 years and I love to design monsters.<br />
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== My Creations ==<br />
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=== Feats ===<br />
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'''Aberrant Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Aberrant Heritage (4e Feat)|Aberrant Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Alien Visage (4e Feat)|Alien Visage]]<br />
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:[[Grasping Tentacle (4e Feat)|Grasping Tentacle]]<br />
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'''Draconic Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Dragon Wings (4e Feat)|Dragon Wings]]<br />
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:[[Frightful Presence (4e Feat)|Frightful Presence]]<br />
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:[[Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)|Improved Dragon Breath]] (Under Construction)<br />
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=== Monsters ===<br />
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[[Astral Messenger (4e Creature)|Astral Messenger]]<br />
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[[Darkscale Lizardfolk (4e Creature)|Darkscale Lizardfolk]]<br />
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[[Har'Clarth (4e Creature)|Har'Clarth]]<br />
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[[Warped Skeleton (4e Creature)|Warped Skeleton]]<br />
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[[Yug-Ut (4e Creature)|Yug-Ut]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Improved_Dragon_Breath_(4e_Feat)&diff=367989Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)2009-06-12T23:05:37Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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'''Tier:''' Paragon<br />
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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{{4e Power<br />
|name=Improved Dragon Breath<br />
|type=Attack<br />
|actiontype=Standard Action<br />
|usage=Encounter<br />
|owner=Feat<br />
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<div>Hello I'm Aboleth11. I'm a pretty new user but I'm a fairly experienced Dnder. I have been playing for 3 years and I love to design monsters.<br />
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== My Creations ==<br />
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=== Feats ===<br />
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'''Aberrant Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Aberrant Heritage (4e Feat)|Aberrant Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Alien Visage (4e Feat)|Alien Visage]]<br />
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:[[Grasping Tentacle (4e Feat)|Grasping Tentacle]]<br />
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'''Draconic Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Dragon Wings (4e Feat)|Dragon Wings]]<br />
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:[[Frightful Presence (4e Feat)|Frightful Presence]]<br />
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:[[Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)|Improved Dragon Breath]]<br />
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=== Monsters ===<br />
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[[Astral Messenger (4e Creature)|Astral Messenger]]<br />
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[[Darkscale Lizardfolk (4e Creature)|Darkscale Lizardfolk]]<br />
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[[Har'Clarth (4e Creature)|Har'Clarth]]<br />
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[[Warped Skeleton (4e Creature)|Warped Skeleton]]<br />
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[[Yug-Ut (4e Creature)|Yug-Ut]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=Improved_Dragon_Breath_(4e_Feat)&diff=367987Improved Dragon Breath (4e Feat)2009-06-12T23:03:53Z<p>Aboleth11: New page: {{author |author_name=Aboleth11 |date_created=06/12/2009 |status=Incomplete }} {{x0 |nbofbalance= - |prereq= |desc= }} ===Improved Dragon Breath [Draconic Heritage]=== '''Tier:''' Parago...</p>
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'''Prerequisite:''' 11th level, [[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]], one other draconic bloodline feat.<br />
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'''Benefit:''' You gain the ''Improved Dragon Breath'' power. It replaces your dragon breath power.<br />
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[[Category:Draconic Heritage Feat]]</div>Aboleth11https://www.dandwiki.com/w/index.php?title=User:Aboleth11&diff=367878User:Aboleth112009-06-12T15:52:14Z<p>Aboleth11: </p>
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<div>Hello I'm Aboleth11. I'm a pretty new user but I'm a fairly experienced Dnder. I have been playing for 3 years and I love to design monsters.<br />
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== My Creations ==<br />
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=== Feats ===<br />
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'''Aberrant Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Aberrant Heritage (4e Feat)|Aberrant Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Alien Visage (4e Feat)|Alien Visage]]<br />
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:[[Grasping Tentacle (4e Feat)|Grasping Tentacle]]<br />
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'''Draconic Bloodline Feats'''<br />
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:[[Draconic Heritage (4e Feat)|Draconic Heritage]]<br />
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:[[Dragon Wings (4e Feat)|Dragon Wings]]<br />
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:[[Frightful Presence (4e Feat)|Frightful Presence]]<br />
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=== Monsters ===<br />
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[[Astral Messenger (4e Creature)|Astral Messenger]]<br />
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[[Darkscale Lizardfolk (4e Creature)|Darkscale Lizardfolk]]<br />
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[[Har'Clarth (4e Creature)|Har'Clarth]]<br />
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[[Warped Skeleton (4e Creature)|Warped Skeleton]]<br />
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[[Yug-Ut (4e Creature)|Yug-Ut]]</div>Aboleth11