Talk:Leprechauns (4e Race)

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A Few Things[edit]

Given their height shouldn't their move speed be much lower, say around 4. And with both Leprechaun Trick and Rainbow I was wondering about durations; how long do they stay Invisible, and how long are enemies knocked unconscious? Although unconscious may be a bit too powerful, Stunned or Dazed might be more balanced. Lastly (and this may seem dumb), but under Ability Scores the word dexterity should probably be capatilized. And I can't wait to read your fluff text for these guys, it should be cool. Thanks for your time. --Sepsis 09:40, 25 September 2008 (MDT)

Fixed up. thank you for telling me what to fix and giving me compliments! I hope it is better now. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Funfreak55 (talkcontribs) 10:33, 25 September 2008 (MDT). Please sign your posts!
While this entire article still needs to be fleshed out to be complete, there are a few more things you may want to change before continuing:
  • Languages: Aside from Common they should also speak Elven.
  • Shillelagh User: You may want to correct the spelling on the Trait, and perhaps saying; "You are profiecient in all weapons in the Mace group." would sound better.
  • Leprechaun Trick: You may want to change "...you can shift 3 squares and become invisible for one round..." to "...you can shift 3 squares and become invisible until the end of your next turn..."
  • Rainbow: Under the traits you may want to say, "You can use the Rainbow encounter power." As for the power itself, this may work better:
Rainbow Leprechaun Racial Power
The amazement of this magic rainbow might make you stare at it forever.
Encounter Star.gif Illusion
Standard Action Close Burst 5 (targets enemies)
Target: All creatures within Burst
Attack: Wisdom Vs. Will
Hit: 1d6+wis damage
Effect: Creatures are stunned until the end of the leprechaun's next turn or until attacked


—The preceding unsigned comment was added by Sepsis (talkcontribs) 10:15, 27 December 2008 (MDT). Please sign your posts!

Monster[edit]

I've been thinking and was wondering if you might do these fellas as a Monster as well. I think if given a bit of a malicous bend it would work. -- Sepsis 08:41, 2 October 2008 (MDT)

Still Waiting[edit]

I still like the idea of this race, I just think it needs more mechanical correction, and it really needs fluff. -- Sepsis 16:36, 4 March 2009 (MST)

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