Talk:Circle of the New Moon (5e Subclass)

Wording could use some work.

The grammar overall on this is somewhat poor. The biggest problem is with the last feature. It's unbelievably wordy compared to the rest of them, and that combined with the run-on sentences and lack of commas makes it quite hard to read.

    I have made several changes, including to the abilities themselves, in order to better communicate what I was going for